Rishbala SS: Love will find a Way!! (completed) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Freaking Amazing update Dear!Loved Rishbala moments!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really loved it 👏. Read all parts back to back. Interesting fact is that Madhu is a fashion photographer 😃. I really liked how she hide her feelings and insecurities and asked RK to go and talk to his ex. That was the right thing to do, i am really proud of this Madhu 👍🏼. I really felt bad along with Madhu when u wrote Rk and dipali were stealing glances to each other. And why the hell Madhu accompanied them for their outings,she could have refused dipali and let them spend some quality time together 🤢. Btw i really want to know what kind of a love is RK's , i mean his "love" dipali left him for the second time and all he could do is crying in Madhu's arms 😲 he should have followed her and bring her back home by hook or crook if he really want her. Sorry for these complaints but when it comes to RishBala i am very emotional. Its hard for me to see either of them falling for others😭. Well written story dear. Pls keep writing 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
DIPALI LEFT RK ONCE AGAIN
MADHU CANT FORGIVE HER FOR GIVING HIM PAIN AGAIN
THEIR MARRIAGE IS REAL BUT FOR MADHU IT IS STILL NOT COMPLETE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
read all chap in 1 go...love them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love this. Amazing concept. Please pm me from next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Thanx guys for all the support and encouraging me to write..It means a lott😊..so here the last part to the story!!

Since the entire story is from Madhu's PoV so this made me curious to know whats going on in RK's head, so this part is from RK's POV while lines in blue are to show Madhu's POV
PART-4

going out for a walk...didn't want to wake you up!!!
don't worry...will be back soon..
keep the breakfast ready!! ;) :p
Madhu.

strange she is not the one to get up early and go out for walk..she would rather sleep and ask me to get her bed tea...well read carefully RK she did ask you to make her breakfast..this cute little thing only she could order me like this and have me obey her!!!

What time it is?? Why hasn't she come yet??..stupid girl..why she always forgets to carry her phone with her..she will make me loose all my hair even before age...that's it I've to go look for her!!

I was just going out to look for her and she came!!
"Where were you?? do you have any idea how worried I was " I shouted at her
she seemed lost
"Madhu??" Shit she looks so pale!
instantly I hugged her, she hugged me even more tightly
"What happened Madhu..Did I scare you?? I'm sorry love...its just that I got really scared!!".
LOVE...
"You Okay baby...please say something"
"I'm...I'm...Okay"
"you don't look okay..tell me what is it" I caressed her cheek.
"I had a really bad dream and then I went out..And then.." no I can't let him know..I can't let him know!!
"then What???"
"then What..Madhu??"
"nothing..I just want to go home Rishu..please take me home..please"
"SShh..Sshh..Relax" I tried to calm her down "tell me what happened"
"Rishu..please take me home..please!!"
"Okay..Ok..You want to go home.. we will go home..i'll get arrangements done..we will do as you say..you just relax..hmm"

"Madhu I've arranged the tickets, we have a flight early morning tomorrow"
"can't we leave today...please.."
"no baby there is no flight to India today..we have to wait till tomorrow..Do you want me to arrange a charted??"
"no..its Okay"
"Madhu"
"hmmm.."
"What is bothering you?? you can tell me"
"Nah..Nothing..I'm missing home" she has always been such a bad liar..there is definitely something bothering her..

we were packing our luggage..I looked at her, she looked so tensed..she looked so tormented..I wanted her to share it with me..I can't see her like this..earlier she looked so pale, she scared the hell out of me..Its been just a few hours but I'm missing my happy, bubbly ,feisty Madhu...I want her to forget all her worries and give it all to me..I am there for her, to solve all her problems..share it with me Madhu please!!


"what is it Rishabh..where are you taking me??"
"Did I ever tell you you talk a lott!!"
"Rish."I cut her"Sshh..come"

I turned the projector on..I made her sit on the couch beside me..& showed her the pictures we have clicked the other day..She looked so happy in these..My little bundle of joy..So innocent So pure ..she is right besides me but I'm missing her..

So happy we were... We look so happy with each other in these pictures..just this morning my life was so beautiful and now..I can't let it all go..I can't tell him about her can't..I won't

What are you doing Madhu?? look at these pictures you both are happy because there was no body between you two , but now there is this wall that you have created...Don't you realize you can't even look into his eyes.you lied to him..He might never know about her but what about you..will you be able to live with it..its not you..

"Rishabh.."
"hmmm"
"I'm Sorry...I'm Sorry..sorry" she clung to me
what has happened to her..what is it that is hurting her so much!!
"Relax..Sshh..Kya hua Madhu..Why are you saying sorry to me"
"I'm sorry..I'm sorry..I lied..I saw her..I didn't know..I didn't want..I'm bad"
"calm down..first calm down..& then tell me what is bothering you??"
"Rishabh I saw her..I saw Dipali" *silence*
"She is here..I saw her in the morning.." I told him everything where I saw her, where did she live, everything
"I didn't know what got into me ..I couldn't tell you..l thought we would leave and you would never come to know about it so I lied..I know I'm bad..but please don't hate me"

He didn't speak a word..he just left..my worst nightmare coming true..& I couldn't even stop him , after lying to him I had no right to stop him..or ask him to come with me..this time I was wrong .. I was no different than her ,I betrayed him ...She left him & I lied to him!!

its time I must leave..my luggage was packed..and I was all set to go..

"where are you going??"
"you??"
"yaa me..I asked something"
"I'm leaving..its time..I have a flight"
"did you forget you promised me 4 days!!"
"huh??"
"yeah 4 days..of which, 2 you have already wasted!!"
"Rishabh??"
"what Rishabh...you thought I would let you leave like this..you have to pay for what you did!!"
"I'm sorry I lied..I'm selfish..I'm bad bad person"
"No you are stupid ,silly girl...what made you think that I would let you leave me"
"I'm sorry..I couldn't react when you told me about her..because at first I was very angry..not at you..I was angry with her..I needed to talk to her..I guess I needed that closure..so I went to meet her..to tell her how shattered I was when she left..to tell her how I tried to find her everywhere just to know if she was alive...but seeing her I realized that I wasn't angry with her anymore..I was relieved to see her hail and hearty.. She was a part of my life that always hurt me...till you came and healed me..for 5 years I kept waiting for her, I stopped living life but then you came..I never took you as my wife but just being my friend you brought colours to my otherwise boring life..but when she came back her illness, it shook me..I wanted her to live, she was my first love Madhu..I'm sorry Madhu, I know I put you through a lott ,at times I have been insensitive to you..but still you never gave up on me..you made me realize that this life is worth living for...thank you Madhu for standing by me..My little bundle of joy.."
"you aren't angry with me that I lied??"
"How can I ever be angry with you Madhu when you love me so much...I know the turmoil you had been through since morning..I know lying to me hurt you so much..I never want to see you like that ever..And such a bad liar you are..I know how difficult it would be for a person like you who talks so much, to keep things from her husband " lo.. now also he is teasing me..
"excuse me..look who is saying I talk too much..who can't seem to stop himself now"
"I have more to say..you are silly, stupid at times very bossy, always ready to take up fight with me..but my life is incomplete without you My feisty biwi "
"OH God..you still won't say it!!" *sigh*
"What"
"nothing I guess I have make do with this much only!!!" what would I have to do to get those words out of him..
Oh I just love to see you irritated.when your button nose goes all red, is so cute...but don't worry I won't irritate you anymore LOVE
"I LOVE YOU"
"huh.." did he just say that.
" yeah I did biwi..I love you..I love you madhu"
i didn't know how to react I've waited forever for him to say these words...i just threw myself at him and kissed him thoroughly showing all the love I had in my heart!!

"This doesn't mean I'm going to forgive you"
"but you said you weren't angry with me for lying to you "
"not for lying to me..but for wasting two days I'm very much angry..For which you will have to pay my love"
"BRING IT ON..."
And instead of just 2 days we had an extended honeymoon!!!
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So its the END...please do let me know how was it😊


Edited by sangeet6690 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
superb update dear..
as i guessed right madhu saw dipali there in Australlia...
Loved the thing madhu decided that she dnt giv her husband to dipali again...and am sure nw she wl fight for her RK...nw waiting for RKs reaction...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Luv ur both update thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awesome enfing
last three parts were fantastic
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Aha, I knew it!

But still I am glad this chapter was all about RK and Madhu. Our couple is finally together and happy!!!!

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