Rajbala OS;'Its About You & Me'

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OS:It's About You & Me



Raju said"gudiya, plzz lets sleep under the stars naa".madhu saw him smiling n said"noo raju u wud get cold".she was abt to move when he grabbed her wrist.she gasped in his touch.he pleaded her with his puppy eyes n said"gudiya gudiya I only want to sleep her.come naa lets sleep".he pulled her down n they both were hugging n lying down seeing the stars above.while he pointed out the lion, fish n everything of his imagination.madhu finally closed her eyes n remembered the intial days of her marriage.

When she didn't know anything abt raju.it was not a marriage for her.it was her destruction.but when she saw that the poor soul raju was also dragged in this useless revenge of the superstar abhay.he not only tormented her but also this poor raju who was mentally unstable to know what he was doing to him.he considered him as his hero.but gradually she shifted his believe that abhay is his hero to P.K. is his hero.she started feeling her happiness with him.her sorrows gradually reduced.however abhay tried to hurt her.but she forgot his tantrums when she saw raju.his childness comforted her n soothed her out of her pain.

She still remembered the day when raju defended her from abhay.that day abhay started abusing her family.she shouted back unable to control any more abuse of her parents.in anger , abhay raised his hand on madhu. But raju came for her rescue.she was shocked to see raju holding abhay's hand from beating me.he said"hero, u must not do this to my gudiya".his word"my gudiya swelled her chest with pride.she too felt the same for my raju.for the first time in my life, she wanted to call someone as mine.i didn't even feel this for abhay.then suddenly a question propelled in her mind, did she really love abhay or was just an infatuation? It was an infatuation just an attraction.she only loved raju, her raju.

She opened her eyes to see raju while he drifted to sleep like a cute baby.she caressed her face n saw him lovingly n remembered the day when raju called her to sleep with him as feared to sleep alone.she giggled at him n removed her specs n drifted to a deep slumber dreaming abt her raju n her happy life.

At the morning, she got up alone in the terrace floor.she looked for raju.she panicked then she thought he might be brushing his teeth .she went to the check the bathroom.she didn't find him there.she got feared whether abhay is playing another tantrum like the one he did by asking him fly from the terrace.she ran for my raju's life.then she saw some men throwing the furnitures from the mansion.i wondered what the hell is happening?

She saw A.K. running to her pleading for forgiveness n asking for his property back.he said"plz madhubala.i m sorry for my revenge.but see bebe she is old shecannt stay on roads".madhu was confused when the others tammana , everyone started doing the same.when she heard a voice "she wud never forgive you all.u need to be punished."she turned to see raju standing with new avatar.he was looking like a superstar with his black tuxedo n was looking like a handsome gentlemen .but his smirk was soo evil.he was not my raju.

She opened her mouth wide.he came near her n wound his hands around her waist n pulled her closer n said"biwi wud u like to forgive them"she was soo senseless that she nodded.he told"u will be our servants.for me n my biwi"he left n went to the room.when madhu regained her conscious n went behind him to have her answers from him.as she entered.he said"gudiya I know u have many questions.yeah I was acting .this was to take revenge from ak n his family.coz they destroyed my father"she said"how cud u take their property away from them?".he smiled at her n said'its urs.it was ur father's property".she was shocked beyond limits.the reality hit her,she said"soo our marriage was revenge for u also".

He said"noo madhu".he was abt to touch her.when she jerked him off n said"don't touch me.u cheated.ur not the raju I used to know".she said"I'm leaving this home now.i cannt stay here.its suffocating me".she was abt to leave when raju grabbed her n said"u have to stay here u r my wife goddammit".she was soo scared.she broke down after he left her.she was living after abhay's revenge too.infact she found her love.raju's revenge was not to her.but completely destroyed her.

Here, raju was soo insecure that his wife wud leave him n go.he agrees it was his plan to enter ak mansion using their marriage.but he never did anything unrespectable to her.first he didn't allow to touch her or share his bed.but gradually he fell in love with his gudiya.he made abhay sign on the papers on the disguise of autograph.then he took revenge from him for his father n for his gudiya's tears.his thoughts were jerked by abhay's voice"u think u took revenge from me".he smirked n said"yeah ofcourse my servants.get back to work".abhay said"no.u r only suffering.coz ur wife wants to leave u.she was there with u when u were mad.but now the sympathy is gone.she hates u.she can never love anybody other than me".he wanted to shout at him.he wanted to shout to the world that his gudiya only belongs to him.

He strode to his room.where his wife was trying to tie the dori of her blouse.he sneaked inside n went near her n caught her.she was shocked n bewildered at his sudden advancemenrt.she pushed him off n said"how dare u touch me?".he furiously said"I m ur husband".she mockingly said"what I m ur revenge wifey naa.ur trophy wife".he got his temper on n he said"u r my wife that's it"she said"I don't accept u as my husband."suddenly words of abhay hit him.he wondered whether madhu still loved that abhay.he said"u still love him.how cud u be..."he was cut off by madhu.she said"I loved only my raju.who is lost forever.now I don't believe in love"

Hearing it, raju wanted to fly.he was on the ninth clouds.he said"madhu, I too love u ...love u love u"she was shocked by his revelation.happy tears started floeing from her eyes.she forgot every revenge n her past.the past images became hazy.only her raju's words echoed in her ears.she tip toed n touched her lips with his.then suddenly got shy n moved.but raj was not ready to leave her.he caught her turned her around n cupped her face n said"I loveu".she looked into his eyes n said"I love u too".then his lips found hers.soon the kiss which started to be a soft one turned raju into a wild animal.he started feirecly making love with madhu.to claim her as his possession.he dropped her on the bed n hovered on her n caressed her bare waist n said"this is gonna be our new beginning.there will be no end to our love.as it wud be always u n me.our world will be just abt u n me".

The night was filled with love n promises of the happy future which the two lovers promised each other.it was full of rvelations abt their infinite love for each.but as say good things always have bad eyeing.the devil appeared.abhay was passing through rajbala's room to find whether they r fighting or not.but to his surprise there was no noice.soo he slowly opened the door n entered n saw madhu snuggled to raju's bare chest.there was only thin covering surrounding their naked bodies.the mess in the room was the proof that they made love.

He felt disgusted to come n watch a scene like this.

A revenge which took away ak's softness, his love, his property...

The same revenge gave madhu her true love raju

Revenge seeker always receives back the worse double


p.s:i feel i m not able to project properly my stories n my ideas.soo i m getting really moody.i may take a break from writing.but i wud enjoy others stuff for sure


the story is not that great i started it a by last saturday but was struck.unable to proceed soo messed up everything.plzz bear with me



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HappySoul-4va thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bella...i hope the story will be like this...it too lve MB2..love DVD together..
Thanks for the best OS on Rajbala..love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS.
I want this to happen in the show also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's lovely and you conveyed Raj's clever plan quite well. Bravo! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm OS 👏 i want something smlr in MB
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story was really great dear. I was depressed, but after reading your story I feel good.
I want this to happen in serial too , waiting for RK revelation


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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏
love ur OS 😊

hoping something like happens soon and we r saved from watching flying AK😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbbb OS...i hope CVS also gave dis type of twist in Story ...becoz i'm missing Rk's BIWI dialogue sooo muchhh nd also his junoon , Attitude...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ita superb story..
loved raju's revenGe twist lik the RK!!!
ek ishq ek junoon..
fab work.. keep goin!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Christ!!
Hope something like this happens in the show too!!

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