FF: Melting of a Superstar Part 20 on Page 64 - Page 35

awesome ending dear...

Wonderful story comes to end. Will miss the story. You write really well. Please continue writing.

Nice ending. Can I ask for an epilogue?

ind blowing Ending Gonna miss u ND this story plz write soon nd come back soon

Introduction to 5th part.

I really thought it will be RK but it is Madhu who is superstar. Different concept. RK was so newbie type with Madhu mam and mam... I thought he is kind of smart handsome... I also thought why he is so sweet towards her... but when he was talking to chief you took me back again... that is when it is realised he is bit different... like Madhu said pampered child. There is lot in RK in each chapter new quality of RK comes out. Madhu is superstar and there is no one right at top but like it said you are always alone at top same is the case here. Both are bind with the situation and growing their love story is good.

When RK came to see or meet Madhubala's scenes first time when he was not there for a shoot and he said...

He don't keep anyone's favour...

I wonder whether he really want to return the favour or there was some other intention for him to come down.

Nice update keep it up and thanks a lot. 🤗 RK's movie talk was good forget to mention it above.

Part 6 -

Great part Actual people was too good... movei and golgappas scenes was written great. Loved that RK loves Madhu and not Madhubala.

Part 7 -

Madhu and Trishna convo was good... Madhu was great when she was jealous seeing RK with another girl and thinking about Dipali Bhatia. Let see how RK will react..

Somewhere the dialogue came RK was irritated to be called cubby cheek kid well RK don't know but he is really chubby cheek dimpled chin kid.

Keep it up and thanks a lot for the update. 🤗

Part 8-

The end was perfect want to read what will happen next. Dipali part was also good with RK and Madhubala. Thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗

Part 9 -

Madhubala and Dipali scenes were great. Dipali giving hint to RK was justified. Loved RK and Madhu's inner feeling.

Thanks for the update and keep it up. 🤗

Part 10-

Again Dipali's action is justified... somewhere it is looking like their movie only Pia as Dipali and Madhubala - RK at their respective character good. RK and Madhu's inner turmoil written well. Forgot to say hope your personal problem get solved... and frankly speaking even if you not went for RK-Dipali almost love still their moment is delighted as a very good friend where RK do not has to be conscious about he is with superstar Madhubala which he sometimes get conscious. So RK's anger was great. Keep it up and thanks a lot. 🤗

Part 11-

RK and Madhu scenes was dreamy. Great one thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗