Rishabala FF: Every Breath I Take : Thread II Link Posted (31/03)

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Nice but chotu updt
Rk's thought were amazing
Marry den n der
Cnt sn

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

awesome update😉

neev is on the bhabi getting mission 😆 neev keep rocking and let the puzzle solve 😃

that was too short lazzy

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Ohh girl!!!!! Lolzz ur ff's language 😆
superb update, this ff is becoming more n more interesting day by day
😊 👏 update soon

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Awesome update Lazu 😊 Remember that U r teasing us with this tiny updates 😭 😛 When will Madhubala find out the truth? 😕 Pls continue soon 😳

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Very nice update
Rk's thoughts as always hillarious😆
Continue soon😳

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Sanju...

@Sanju...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

omg omg omg..

madhu shud recognise .. voices..

let the truth b out soon!!

short n shockn end!!

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Remona

@Klaroline.Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

That was short...

Anyway...one thing is clear Madhu is very confused...

Poor girl...

Update soon...

I love the way U write... <3

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benaz

@benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

This update was Oh boy! indeed😉 I was stunned by the ending haha i was reading really quickly and had to re-read it. What is Neev up to? Is he really gonna marry Madhu? I liked how he is teasing RK and Madhu too hoping to get a reaction from RK. Hmmm I liked how Madhu was so sure of not confusing their voices.😊

Continue soon!

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

No, why??? Why did you end it on such a cliffie?!

Does Madhu suspect that RK is Neev? What did Oh boy at the end mean?

This was a sweet but strangely sad chapter I thought. Madhu is in love with RK who she thinks is Neev, Neev is in love with Ayesha, Ayesha is in love with RK, RK is prepared to suffer and make everyone else suffer because he doesnt want to hurt his dad, who has already been betrayed... The subtle undercurrents give the story a different dimension.

Cant wait for the next chapter