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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wonderful OS - loved how their relationship evolved.

-Sona

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

superb os

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

end was hilarious..😆.

nice os lazy.

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

hahahahahahahah.the last 2 para cracked me up.it was hilarious.but all in all a lovely os.loved it .

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manju21.k

@manju21.k

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Unres on Pg 1.😆

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

res ji😃
Unres ji😉

AH firstly thanks a zillion for the dedication honey 🤗!!! Love you so much 🤗!!

I simply loved the title.. its so sweet in itself 😳😆 !!! U are are truly magical writer hun.. else i can never ever would have imagined Trish, Dips and Madhu as lovely sibblings and them teasing RK in the name of Madhu was such a treat 😳 !!!
Their journey from friends to life-partners and lovers happened with such silky smoothness that it felt enchanting 😃 !! Just from a mere TOUCH to KISS and to them becoming one was portrayed so beautifully that one would like to stop and wonder how the process of "Falling in love" is so mesmerizing especially when you know that person all your life ☺️ !!!
RK's talk about giving her the baby (now) gave me goosebumps ☺️ !! Their confession was very sweet too 😳 !
I could not help but rofl for their decision of postponing of having baby after witnessing the chaos in the hospital 🤣🤣 !! Oh God.. just imagine having such bratty kids and that too twins 😆😆 .. hmm i am totally with them in this decision though 😆😆 !!!

One sweet tale Lazy ☺️☺️☺️ .. where it felt falling in love is so magical ☺️ !!!

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

beautiful story! All of a sudden the person you have known forever becomes your life partner. Strange how quickly relationships can change, and perceptions.

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Wonderful os...i am absolutely smitten with ur writing kuku dear...

So it was an arranged marriage...Mohan worked under Malik but still the relation between the Maliks and the Kundras was so cute and sweet .,...

Dipali and Trishna were so cute sisters...they r asking Madhu abt her SR??? 😆😆

The scenes were so perfect...I wish I could have seen it on the show...

Finally they got physical...but what is this yaar...only this much??? i wish some more had been there...but I really loved this naughty RK...

So its hospital time!!!! I really loved Padmini's disappointment of having another grandson...

The kids were so cute yaar...There are 5 already...and with Rishbala's kids (they are not at all one kid party we all know) there will be a complete cricket team yaar!!!!!

Fantastic story...thnks for pm...and sorry for late reply!!! 😊