FF: In Love with NRI -- Epilogue- 26th May, 2013

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Hi All,
I am a new member to this forum, but i am a gr8 gr8 fan of Rishabala😳...I am upset with the new track so🤢...wanted to cheer up myself and you all...😃

So I am writing my First FF...a Love story with Desi Ladki...and NRI ladka...😊

So here goes the Prologue:

" India Guys and gals in abroad are not cultured, they are spoiled" said my friend Nimmi...
But "hey Bhagwaan I am going to US as my uncle wants me to come there, but from Lucknow to New York mera safar kaisa rahega"...with this thought Madhu started to pack her stuff...

So guys...Let me know ur thoughts...Shall I continue ??????

Comments pleasee😳

Index:
Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - The First encounter (Page 3)
Chapter 3 - Nok Jhok (Page 3)
Chapter 4 - The Day in College(Page 6)
Chapter 5 - The Unknown Feeling (Page 8)
Chapter 6 - I Love You (Page 10)
Chapter 7 - The New Guy (Page 12)
Chapter 8 - The Date(Page 15)
Chapter 9 - The Girl Friend (Page 19)
Chapter 10 - Heading to Romance(Page 21)
Chapter 11 - First Date (Page 24)
Chapter 12 - Misunderstanding(Page 26)
Chapter 13 - Jungli Billi avtar (Page 29)
Chapter 14 - Fatal Combat(page 30)
Chapter 15- The Morning(Page 34)
Chapter 16 - The Darkness (Page 36)
Chapter 17 - The Game Plan (Page 39)
Chapter 18 - The Truth (Page 42)
Chapter 19 - Do Bet (Page 45)
Chapter 20 - The TIFF (Page 48)
Chapter 21 - Winning and loosing(Page 51)
Chapter 22 - Revelation (Page 53)
Chapter 23 - Shattered Dreams (Page 56)
Chapter 24 - What Happened was??? (Page 58)
Chapter 25 - The PLAN(Page 60)
Chapter 26 - Implementation -Day 1 (Page 63)
Chapter 27 - Succeeded OR Failed???(Page 65)
Chapter 28 - Upside down (Page 67)
Chapter 29 - Mission-2 (Page 70)
Chapter 30 - Shoo the Witch (Page 74)
Chapter 31 - The Trip (Page 76)
Chapter 32 - Clueless(Page 79)
Chapter 33 - MY LOVE(Page 82)
Chapter 34 - Jealous Soul (Page 85)
Chapter 35 - The Secret (Page 88)
Chapter 36 - Dirty Plan (Page 91)
Chapter 37 : Face OFF (Page 94)
Chapter 38 : SICKNESS (Page 97)
Chapter 39 : His KISS(Page 101)
Chapter 40 : Crazy LOVE(page 104)
Chapter 41 : Enemy Behind(Page 108)
Chapter 42: I am an American(Page 111)
Chapter 43 : In India- Day 1(Page 114)
Chapter 44 : My Life in Village -Day1(Page 118)
Chapter 45 : Day in Village-3 (Page 121)
Chapter 46 : Day 4 in Village(Page 123)
Chapter 47 : Holi Special(Page 126)
Chapter 48: End of Trip(Page 129)
Chapter 49 : Commitment YES/NO(Page 133)
Chapter 50(a) : The Cute Confession (Page 136)
Chapter 50(b): the BIG day (Page 140)
Chapter 50(c) : The celebrations with Passion
Epilogue(Page 146)
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HappySoul-4va thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My dear NRI people...please dont throw chappals...as its a love story and she is from a village in Lucknow...so h dont know much about them...so the first statement is what they think...which was shared by one of my NRI friend so added..
No offense sweety pies :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Concept 😳
Please do continue 😛

Waise, Mee too a NRI . We r not that spoiled 😆😆

Edited by .Shree. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start!pls continue soon!& pls can u send me a friend request?
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Nice Concept 😳
Please do continue 😛

Waise, Mee too a NRI . We r not that spoiled 😆😆

LOL...waise..Thanq..I knw thats why added a note for you guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the concept..
continue soon without any doubt..
and by the way.. welcome to mb land dear..
Don't forget to pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

loved the concept..
continue soon without any doubt..
and by the way.. welcome to mb land dear..
Don't forget to pm me..



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Thanq, yeah have sent PM as of now...in the process of completing my First chap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am posting this Chapter on Asha's behalf as she is a newbie and can't post more than 10 posts a day...


So...here Goes the First chapter..

Ganapathi Bappa moriya...wish me luck...

In Love with NRI-- The New World

Madhu, the sweet, cute beautiful gal from "Gurarura" village of Lucknow.. She completed her 12th , she is an orphan who was taken care by her aunt, Padmini. Trishna is her cousin and lives in Mumbai for her further studies , as Padmini can't afford the fee for both , so Madhu was taken aback...

Madhu is the "Masterni" as she teaches the local students at her home and takes care of her aunt. She is happy with her life, until her relative "Mohan Kundra" came to India to meet her, who is her father's best friend.

"Namastey, Uncleji" Said madhu, by touching his feet.

Mohan had tears in his seeing to see his best friend "Shamsher's" daughter who looks like him and was raised with culture by her aunt "Padmini".

" How can I thank you Padminiji, for taking care of Madhu, I was searching for her all over India and found my best friends heart here" said MK with teary eyes.

"Nothing like that MKji, Madhu is also my daughter. She takes care of this family so well, that I never felt I am doing some favor to her..infact I thank God to have Madhu in our lives" said Padmni with equal emotions.

Madhu, who was silently watching their conversation has mixed feelings. She wiped off the tears from her face and was thinking about her mother and father, who got killed in a road accident when she was 3 year old.

After lunch, Mohan asked Padmin to come and stay with hsi family in US, as he would be glad to take care of them. But Padmini, was hesitant and then after so much of discussion, she finally agreed to join MOhan and Family after Trishna completes her studies.

And asked him to take Madhu, coz she was not able to give her proper education, though Madhu is a brilliant child.

Finally, after Padmini's guidance and assurance, with mixed feelings, Madhu said "Yes" to MK and started to pack her stuff

He gave her 2 days' time, as he has some other work in his home town, Lucknow and have to make arrangements for her Passport and Visa.

Nimmi...Madhu's best buddy, rushed to her place the moment she heard that, Madhu is gng to US.

During their discussion Nimmi told


U know Madhu, Indians who settled in US were not cultured like us, they are spoiled...U better take care of yourself".

Madhu completed her packing and met her friends and community people. Finally, Mohan has arrived .

She was wearing a white kurta and blue patiala with pink and yellow dupatta, which was gifted by Trishna on her Bday.

She called Traishna and told her everything, Trishna was very happy and helped her to gain courage and asked her to take good care of herself.

"Ma, I cant live without you, phow can stay away from you. Its only u and Trishna in my life, I cant go ma..pls dont send me" said madhu by hugging Padmini, and crying.

"Madhu beta, we will join you very soon, till then you will be admitted in a good college and start studying, it will be the same for me, how Trishna is staying in MUmbai, u will stay in New York"..gulping her tears and having a straight face.

Madhu, finally with heavy heart wavd to all the people, touched Padmini's feet and got into the car.

The car drove off, they reached Airport.

Throught the travel, MK was helping Madhu to understand the culture, different things, about his furture plans for her and finally about his family by showing his ipad.

"This is Radha, my wife, this is "Rishu", my younger son, this is "Sikky" my elder son and this is "Deepali" , Sikky's wife and that is Pabho, my mother".

Madhu felt really happy to see such a happy and big family. The moment she saw Rishu, she had a strang feeling in her heart. She took the ipadfrom his hand and started watching Rishu...she wanted to watch the pic more and more, but felt lil awkward and gave it back.

Finally, they landed in New York...

And here starts the cute, sweet, nok-jhok love story...

Till then keep liking and adding your comments..

Love,

AB

Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh nice story, am all ready to read, i'll buddy you, pls pm me from next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear 👏really nice start👏
wanna read more😊
but i hav a req😊,don't make madhu fall for rk easily😉 ...i wanna read their funny fights😉😉...and i'm damn sure, village beauty and NRI naughty wil be a terrible pair!!!!😆😆😆
i hav send u buddy req,plz accept it😊...plz pm me too when u update it😊

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