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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear...wanna read more...u said its a dark concept,but plz don't separate rishbala😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Interesting story... loved it
Thanks for pm and take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1 is very nice...looking forward to it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 2:

rk's pov
When i got up in the morning, i saw my madhu near me. i wanted to take her in my embrasse then i heard her taking to bittuji .she was sayin g to bittuji that she wud arrive for the shoot soon. then i saw some sort of sorrow in her eyes. i understood that this is becoz of me. i had forced myself on her.i cudnt see that pain in her eyes soo i got up from the bed n went away without glancing at her.
i went to the bathroom . i opened the shower. i recalled all the last night events. i was drinking alcohol in ria's home. ria had put on the TV. they were telecasting madhu's new film promotions.
the site on the TV boiled my blood. my madhu in some other actors arms.she was wearing a backless gown n the actor was playing with her fingers in her naked back. she was uncomfortable but she was smiling.he knew his madhu very well.
in addition to his anger ria was adding more fuel to his temper.ria was continously telling "rk i known u love madhu a lot but madhu doesnt worth ur love at all.see how she is dancing with the actor" rk got angry n he said"shut up! ria" he fumed n threw away the glass on the floor n left from her place.
as he arrived at the room. n saw madhu removing her jewels.his attention went to her back where the actors fingers were playing n immediately ria's words rung his ears.he just knew that madhu is his n he wanted to prove it now. he wanted her now.
he went near her n started kissing her back passionately as if he wanted to remove the finger strains from her back.he immediately turned her pushed her to the bed n joined her to the bed to make her his or to claim her again
he redemeed her from all the dress. when she was naked, he just thought that she is only his n he started biting her giving her his marks. suddenly he heard her moan his name.he went to see her .by seeing her,he realised that he loves her a lot.tears filled his eyes instantly then he didnt remember anything
he went outside the bathroom n saw madhu he cudnt see her eyes.she repeatedly called him but he could not see her after what he did last night. but greater than that he had a fear that madhu wud say that i forced her last night n she wud feel disgusted instead of love she experienced previously.
i drove to ria's home to tell her my grief .when she opened i saw her in short revealing dress. she had never woren like that.i immediately told to change her clothes n come down.but she moved further closing in the distance between them. i was shocked i moved away n she had a bottle in her hand she was drinking n she gave me a drink but i refused as i was feeling odd by her closeness
she kept the bottle down n took my hands n was making her touch.his contact with her skin felt disgusted.he moved away n said"what r u doing??" ria said" why r u ignoring me ? dont u want me anymore?" rk said" what r u saying? u know that i love madhu n how can u think like that?" ria said"why r u always saying abt that bitch she doesnt love u ? i love u rk n understand abt u" rk was shocked beyound the limit by hearing ria's words.
PRECAP:
ria's pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update, liked RK's pov, but he forgot the fact that whatever may be the reason, his biwi will not hate her, and finally RK came to know about the thoughts of that Ria, so happy with that, now he will completely take her out of his life, and will be back with his biwi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE UPDATE CHRIST..
HE WILL NOW SEE RIA'S REAL FACE...
WAITING FOR NEXT..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really interesting .want to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update😊 poor rk is afraid of madhu's reaction???😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update Christo!finally rk came to know about Ria's true colors!want him to slpa that B*tch hard!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbbb POV of Rk...loved it...Kash show main bhi jald hi Rk ko Ria kay bara main pata chal jaya...or wo madhu ko hurt karna band ker dey ...it's beautiful update dear...plzzz continue soon...
Edited by karamjeet - 11 years ago

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