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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

awesome n boy it gave me goosebumps eeks Rudra remembers everything n now he knows Maya is his biwi lets what he does now n waiting to see Bittuji meeting his chief n bhabhiji n I loved the song for this update

PS plz post this to AS let him read this outstanding work




Thank you so much!

Bittuji... yeah.. I definitely have a reunion in mind for him and his chief but for that you will have to wait. 😳

I love this song and I wrote the entire update listening to it... It suits so well!

Thanks a lot .. I don't think AS will have any interest in reading this FF though... 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

omg is it true dat finally u have updated😲 . Jus kidding.😆 thank u so much for updating 🤗Truly speakin dis story n its every update looks like a [ thrilling n passionate dark lovestory] movie to me⭐️.Jus loved it. ❤️ so finally RK [rudra] found his madhu [maya].😃 But then wat abt rishaan. I want lookalike of madhu for him too.😎Dat song is one of my favourites❤️

my like button is again 😡
Awesome update.continue soon dear👍🏼👏⭐️




Trust me.. I was literally running away from you! 😆 But I am so sorry... I deserved it I know.. Sorry to keep you waiting!

Thanks a lot! I am so happy that YOU like my update! 😆😳

No look-alikes please. 😆 Sorry cannot do that.

Let's see what happens.. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha.366

wonderful update maria👏




Thank you, Rekha!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

what an intense update
so the dreams and nightmares which have been plagging rudra all his life have an answer
he was rk in the past birth and now has to find his biwi who is waiting for him
and if he alive, then she will be alive too

rishaan promised to help maya remain the same - but she has to change from maya to madhu

rudra wanted to know if maya was his madhu and he got his answer
but i want to know how

loved the dance, the song and their silent communication




Thank you so much for your lovely comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

A long awaited update lol...loved it yaar !! Worth the wait hehe !!

Wow..loved how it opened with Madhu's suicidal attempt from jumping off from the terrace to prove her love with RK-rudra's persistent fear of losing Madhu-maya 😆😆 !!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. 😃


Rishaan gives me different kind of vibes..it's like watching a diabolical person in action and yet at the same time bipolar when he cares about Rudra !! Me totally conphoosed 😆 !!

That's good then. I want you all to be confused and to be unable to judge Rishaan easily... 😆


Ah finally !! Rudra maya get to spend sometime yippee !!


Totally apt lyrics and song !! Loved their moves, more so for Rudr's intense anecdotes with every move...but still am not convinced how did Rudra realize that maya is his Madhu ?? Am quite intrigued with this revelation now 😉 !!

I love this song.. it suited well in the update! Glad you liked the questions. How he found out Maya is Madhu? Well it's quite simple but you might get a clearer picture in the next update. 😳

Please continue soon Maria...intriguing cliffhanger lol !!

Updating today! 😆




Thanks a lot for your comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Awesome update
finally rudra knows his past
seeing ur update after ages
keep updating




Thank you so much!
Will try to update more frequently..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maria090

Awesome update ❤️



Thank you, Maria.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

Superb Story, please update soon , can't wait for the next part .




Thank you so much! Updating today!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

rudra was remembering the scene on the terrace after the unwedding

the one just after the mar jawan dance sequence
good now that he is getting clear visions
he finally saw the face clearly
and he woke up in a figurative sense
till now he was in darkness
now there is light all around him



Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved the brothers conversation

rishaan wants answers now
i loved that rudra has understood that madhu is the core of his existence
i am getting a strange feeling now
that very soon there will be a rift between the brothers
rudra is trying to hide the truth from rishaan
i feel even rishan did not believe him fully
i mean i felt that rudra was hiding something
i may be wrong too



Originally posted by: rima4ever

so now maya is also changed she is different

had she called rishaan to come to meet her ?
even rishan understood that she has changed some how
the question she asked rishaan was so strange
she asked him about this promise that he will not let him change to some one else
rishaan is not liking the changed maya... this is so good
now she wants to know why he made her that promise
rishaan refused to tell her that is also strange



Originally posted by: rima4ever

rudra in introspecting now

he wants to know his real self
it is said that a mirror shows u the truth
so may be he is standing b4 a mirror to know the truth ?
now she wanted to know the real maya
also he wanted to be sure if she was his madhu
i did not understand why does he feel that he has been living his brothers life
i mean maya was not the life of rishaan
now he wants to find out the truth



Originally posted by: rima4ever

rishaan is now giving intsructions to meera for the party

seems rishaan is very much irritated right now
meera is really concerned for his health
so she made a futile attempt to make him see reason
but as usual he just shushed her
she called rishaan a jerk and he heard it
now rishaan is almost ready for the party



Originally posted by: rima4ever

rudra came to the party and started searching for maya

i loved that his heart skipped a beat when he saw her enter
i love that he recognised that it was his madhu
so now rudra wants to play a game with her
i feel this game is a combination of truth and dare and 20 questions
only the dare part is not there is the game
i can feel that maya is very irritated and frustrated now
she wants to get out of all this mess
so he is trying to gt the truth out of maya with his questions
i must say that this was a real good attempt
how easily rudra understood that maya was lying
when she said that she did not have any dreams
i wonder how he understood that
now he wants to dance with her
now maya is slowly getting affected
she looked into his deep eyes
i loved the questions rudra asked
she was started getting hypnotized she was loosing the control
rudra is shocked now to realize that she is indeed his madhu
i loved this part the best



Originally posted by: rima4ever

sorry i felt that i cannot review this part in 1 post

this update was so excellent that it deserves multiple review posts
sorry for the delay and the long rant



OMG! I don't know what to say... thank you so much for your comments, Dia. Means a lot to me. I am really glad you liked the update! Really.. thank you so much!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nadia724

Fantabulous awesome mindboggling FF




Thank you so much!

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