RiMa SS- YOU MADE ME BREATHE AGAIN [COMPLETE]-- EPILOGUE -- PAGE 83 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG am speechless sis, this was PERFECT, we would have been happy if the same happened in the show, but no worries, as he is back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my lovely kavya,thank u so much 4 the lovely part😊
i read both 13 and 14th parts😊
u said 'u r not great at shayaris?...yes...u r not great but greatest...oh my dear,i should hav hugged u tightly for ur wonderful updates🤗...i'm not simply praising u...what i'm saying is what i felt in my heart😊...a nice feeling after reading wondrful updates...emotionally strong one!...oh my god,i don't hav more words...so i wanna say"thank u sooo much dear...for this updates"
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Hello all,😃

Here is the epilogue of this story as most of you have demanded it. 😛

@madhurish- Thank you so much dear! Your comment was really touching! 😊

@all- Thank you for the appreciation... 😊
I would like to dedicate this passage to Neha (@NehaVdian) and @madhurish... 😳😳

So, here goes the epilogue... Enjoy!! 😃😃


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EPILOGUE

The car stopped in front of the Kamal studio. The door opened and a munchkin in a black short pant and red T shirt with white sport shoes jumped out and ran like a bullet, shouting, "Yayyy!!" Immediately the other side door of the car opened and she came out, "Arjun!! Run slowly! You'll fall down!!" And she ran behind him too. Inside the studio, Arjun came running with his continuous shouts. "Arjun! Arjun... Stop!" She caught his hand, "It's not your home. It's a work place! Behave yourself!!" She scolded. "Now hold my finger and follow me, like a good boy!!" And she offered him her finger. Arjun exasperatingly held her finger and walked behind her pouting.

Arjun was a two and a half year old naughty son of Mr and Mrs Kundra. Life had become a happy affair for both of them as their true friend Bappa had blessed them with their little wonder, adding more to the bliss in their lives. The day Madhu quitted from the cine world, she completely devoted herself to her small, cute world... her cute dream. She became a typical homemaker wife of a Superstar. RK, on the other hand, already sat on the drive to the stardom once again with no looking back. He was back in his full form. "Ibadat-e-Ishq" was a tremendous success that resulted in a long queue of producers and directors for signing him in their new ventures. But beside all this, he also didn't forget his private world... with his Biwi and soon, their son too joined them. As they had once dreamt of their family, little Arjun was the desired mould of it- a small yet complete replica of his father... lovable yet a brat! They say, sons are more attached to their mothers but here the case was different. RK was Arjun's partner in crime. For Arjun, Madhu was a typical Mama- always in a chiding mood and RK was the Best Papa in the world- his best friend. Whenever, RK get time from his busy shoots, he used to join his son in their troublesome pranks of which poor Madhu used to be the final target. Every day would pass adventurously but still... their life was like walking on air!!

"Hello Madhubalaji! Nice to see you!" The producer greeted her. "Hello Mr Sehgal. How are you?" Madhu replied politely. Arjun was silently looking here and there, still with a pouting face. He was still annoyed with his Hitler Mama. "Hey Champ! How are you Beta?" The producer lovingly asked him but he just stared at him in reply. "Arjun... Say hello to Uncle!" Madhu softly instructed Arjun. "Hello!" He blurted out loudly and immediately ran away from there towards the cameramen and the light men group. "Don't disturb anyone Arjun! Be safe!" Madhu called out in concern. Soon, he got busy in his childish talks with the light men and jumping here and there in excitement. He was happy in his own world of fun. Both Madhu and Sehgal grinned at his childish antics. "He is little naughty Mrs Kundra!" He chuckled. "A little naughty? He is too much!" She mocked and both laughed. "You broke my dream Mrs Kundra!" Sehgal playfully complained. Madhu looked at him perplexed. "I had once planned to produce a film starring you and RK Sir but your retirement shattered it!" Madhu smiled inwardly hearing it. "You should start working again Mrs Kundra." He suggested. "I am still working Mr Sehgal!" He looked at her bewildered. "Taking care of two spoiled children is not an easy job no... much tougher than your film making!" She chuckled. "Two... Two children?" He confusingly asked while looking at Arjun. "But I have met only one... Where is the other?" Madhu giggled hearing it. "Right there... Giving his shot in your film!!" And she pointed back to RK who was giving his scene. "He may be "RK Sir" for you all but for me... he is no less than a 4 year old kid... and that too a troublesome one!! Even Arjun is easy to handle in front of him!!" And both of them laughed aloud. "Biwi!" Both turned back to look at RK who was walking towards them, "When did you come? And which joke made both of you laugh so much? Mr Sehgal, did you start stand-up comedy too?" "Oh RK! There is nothing like that! I am happy with my production house! I was just asking Madhubalaji to start working again." RK looked at Madhu who was still smiling. "And she must have denied again... Right?" "You know me very well Pati!" And she entangled her fingers in his lovingly. "Papa!!" Arjun came running fast and literally jumped in his arms. "Hey my little Superstar! You too are here... hunnn!!" And RK kissed his cheeks and held him tightly in his arms. "Ok RK Sir, I should leave to check on the work. Have a good day." And Sehgal left from there. "Arjun, you didn't trouble anyone... Right?" Madhu suspiciously asked. Arjun annoyingly turned to RK, "Look Papa! Mama always scolds me as if I am a very bad boy!" He pouted his lips. "Really? Mama scolds you? Biwi... what is this? Why you always bawl out my boy? This is not fair!!" RK too joined hands with his son. "RK..." Before she could explain, Arjun again interrupted with his complaint box. "And you know what Papa, Mama threatened me today also before coming here!!" "Really? What did she say?" RK faked glare at Madhu. "Arjun... Stop it! NO!" Madhu warned him immediately but he continued. "She said that she will take me here only on one condition otherwise not." "And what is it?" "That I won't reveal the surprise plan to you otherwise she would never take me here on your shoot ever!" "Surprise?" Madhu immediately jumped to shut his mouth with her palm but RK abruptly turned away round to save. "Yes... Your Birthday party! Now you tell me Papa... If I would tell you then how would it spoil the surprise?? You are my Papa no!!" Arjun innocently looked at RK pouting. RK giggled at his son's cute gestures. Madhu hit her head defeated. "Hmmm... So, my birthday party is the surprise!! No baby, you didn't spoil anything!! Mama is very bad... Silly Mama!! Biwi, you are very silly!!" He chuckled again, this time louder. "Yes... Silly Biwi!!" Arjun imitated his father. Madhu's jaw dropped in astonishment and she was about to hit him when Arjun immediately jumped down and ran out calling, "Bittuji Uncle!! Save me!!" RK bursted out in laugh. "Stop it RK! There is nothing so funny! Here your son spoiled my surprise and you are laughing!!" She fumed. RK somehow controlled his gag, "Sorry... Sorry Biwi! But you can't deny the fact that... you are very silly!!" And he again bursted out. Madhu glared at him and turned away. RK back hugged her, resting his chin on her shoulder, "OK! OK! Sorry Biwi!" And he kissed her cheek. "What sorry RK? Did you look at your son? You have completely spoiled him!" She furiously turned back to him. "How many times I have told you to not to call me BIWI in front of him but you... Now he has also started calling me BIWI... I am his Mama not Biwi!!" RK pulled her by waist, "You are my Biwi so I'll call you Biwi only... Do you want me to call Mama for Arjun?" He chuckled. She patted on his shoulder, "At least not in front of him... I have my name... Madhu!!" "But that was given to by others... for me... you are only my Biwi!! RK can't change himself for others, B..I..W..I.." And he pulled her closer. "By the way, where is my birthday gift? You didn't gave me since morning!" He asked huskily and leaned down for a kiss. They were inches apart when Madhu replied, "If you want your gift... then..." "Then?" "...come back home soon!!" And she pushed him back and ran out leaving behind a grinning RK.

RK Mansion was decked up with flowers and balloons... to celebrate the Superstar's birthday!! The hall was flooded with guests. Madhu was beautified in a pink glittering Sari with black sequence worked border. It was giving her more angelic touch. "Madhu! Where is Rishu?" Radha asked worriedly. "Maa, he is not picking up the phone." "Because RK is here!" And everybody turned to see the handsome Superstar standing with a smirk on his face. He walked towards them. "RK, where were you? All were waiting for you!" Madhu fumed. "Sorry Biwi, I was..." "OK! OK! Now first go and change... I have put your clothes on the couch!!" She whispered. "Aren't you coming with me?" "No Pati! Who would look after the guests then? After all we are the host!" And she pushed him for upstairs. Soon, RK came down in a metallic grey coloured suit with black shirt and usual smirk, adding more stars to his Greek God personality. The servant brought the birthday cake; it was a strawberry cake in heart shape with a "Happy B'Day Rishu..." written on it. "Happy Birthday Papa!" Arjun suddenly jumped in from somewhere. RK lovingly picked him up in his arms and kissed, "Thank you my little Superstar!" "Papa, did you like our surprise party?" He asked innocently. Both RK and Madhu giggled at his question. "Yes, I am baby... a lot!! Thank you!" Everybody gathered round the table and he cut the cake. All were singing the birthday jingle for him. He picked one cake slice and took it near Madhu's mouth. She was ready to eat it up when RK suddenly turned to Arjun with a chuckle. Madhu playfully patted on his shoulder. Finally, the party started. RK touched Radha's feet for her blessings and Arjun ran away in the party with his friends. After a while, Madhu was going to meet one of their guests when somebody pulled her from behind the pillar. She was about to shout when her mouth was shut with a hand. "Shhh... it's me, Biwi!" He whispered in her ear. Madhu furiously turned back and hit his shoulder, "You scared me, RK! What do you want?" He pulled her close by waist in reply. "RK, what... what are doing? People will notice us!!" She struggled. "Let them do... I want my gift!!" He tightened his grip. "Gift? Now what else you want? I have thrown this huge surprise party for you!!" "Really? And you call it a surprise... I knew it already!" "Then?" "Then... You have to give me what I want... Right now!! I want my real gift... Biwi!" Madhu understood where his words were heading to. Before she could resist further, he pulled her closer and they were about to kiss when she interrupted, "Your real gift is waiting somewhere else...!" He perplexedly looked at her. "What is it? Where?" "In your room..." "Really?" She nodded with a smile. RK went upstairs immediately.

In his room, RK was looking all over bewilderedly but found nothing. Everything was as it is as he has left an hour ago. He was standing near his bed and murmuring, "This is not done Biwi! You are irritating me... and that too on my birthday!" Suddenly she back hugged him and asked behind his shoulder, "Found your gift?" He turned back annoyed, "Now it's heights of surprise!! C'mon tell me Madhu!" She giggled at his restlessness. She lovingly pulled his cheeks and turned him to the nearby wall, on which their family picture with Arjun sitting in RK's lap, was hanging. "This was the gift you were talking about... Madhu, I myself had got it framed and you gifted it to me only!! What the..." "Shhh... Shut up! You talk too much! Just look at it! What did you see?" RK stared at the picture curiously. "Mmm... Do you have dark circles in this picture, Biwi?" Madhu hit is shoulder annoyingly. "NO! Something else!" RK again stared back but soon got narked, "Stop creating suspense Madhu. Tell me now!" Madhu smiled and replied, "Did you see that... Arjun is sitting in your lap and... I... I am sitting empty handed!" "Then?" "Then? You didn't get it still?? RK!!" Madhu stared at him hopefully. RK first looked at her confused but finally got her signal and immediately his narrowed eyes widened in shock. "You... You mean? I... I am..." Madhu grinned hearing it and nodded. "Oh God! Madhu... I... I am going to be a father... again!!" He literally shouted and abruptly hugged her tightly in excitement. Madhu reciprocated back. "I love you Madhu!" He whispered. "Love you too RK!" For few minutes, they stood in the same position; RK trying to digest in what he just got. Suddenly, Madhu felt something wet on her nape. She checked with her finger and found it actually wet. She immediately broke the hug to look at RK, whose eyes were brimmed by now. "RK!" She cupped his face and nodded him not to cry. "I can't thank you enough Madhu!" His voice choked. Madhu lovingly wiped his wet cheeks though her eyes were too moistened. "Then, no need to thank me!! It's our dream no!" And she hugged him back. "Which month is it Madhu?" "Two weeks!" "Did you tell Maa about it?" "No... I was waiting for you... wanted to share it first with you!" Madhu immediately parted away, "Come. Let's go downstairs and tell everybody! Maa would be very happy!" And she was about to turn away when RK caught her arm and pulled her back in his arms, "There is no hurry Biwi!" He smirked. "Let me first give you the return gift...!" And he pulled her closer. "Somebody would come here RK!" "That's what I am saying Biwi... Before anybody comes, let us do it!" And he leaned down but Madhu put her finger on his lips and spoke, "NO! I am pregnant!" RK grabbed her finger and replied huskily, "A kiss won't be any harmful, Biwi!" And he pecked a moist kiss on her lips. "By the way... I have changed my dream a little!" "What change?" "I am thinking to contribute to our national cricket team!" Madhu looked at him confused. "Why should we stop at only three..." He tightened his grip around her waist, "Let's complete the team... with twelfth man also!" Both chuckled at the mock. "Then we have to work a lot Patidev...!" Madhu whispered sexily. "Always ready for it..." And he finally grabbed her lips to mark them his... for their new found dream...!!


THE END...

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This story was really close to my heart. I really enjoyed while writing it and your appreciation via your comments too motivated me to improve it with each update.
I am really thankful to all my readers who beared with me and my lazy attitude in updating the story. You guys were so nice through out... Thank you!!
This story was actually my imagination for a happy ending to our Rishbala... And I hope, I have justified it to your expectations.

P.S.- Do you guys want the second series to this Short Story? I have some idea in my mind so if you would want me to then I can think of it to pen it down. If you want the same then please write "YES" otherwise "NO" at the end of your comment... If I would get appreciable number of "YES" then only I will try to start it... 😳

Waiting for your likes and comments... 😃😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome .. I just love the end part lol
Thanks for the epilogue and PM. Hope soon you will start a new FF.

And a big YES for the second part dear.

Keep going :))))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous end
please write a season 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome epi..
do write for 2nd series too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
*UNRES*
SIS!!!!! You finished this awesome story😃 I am sooo happy but sad at the same time😭...i sooo wanted this story to just go on and on and on..lol...so now u better write that season 2 u have in mind...and this is not a request but a threat!! hehe😆

U knw i loved their whole journey together...of how they came back together and once again completed one another with their love and passion!😳

And gosh isn't Arjun such a sweetheart? Such an ADORABLE Child!!! he is too innocent...and well the second child is not at all😉😆 but that is RK..right?

P.S. i am coming back to my position...4th this time next time i will be at the top again!!!
P.S.S. TAKE MY THREAT SERIOUSLY...otherwise get ready to be flooded by my PMs😆
Edited by lubzzxxx - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Ending for a beautiful FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb ending dear
thanks fro pm
plz continue to write season 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
yesss yrr this is jst awes

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