Rishabala SS: To Romance A Charming Rogue Pt13+Epilogue Pg 119 (08/01)

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Resji

Unres ji 😃

Am so happy me first again😃 me first 😃 me first 😃

All the partying emoticons are not getting selected hmmph !!

Wow !! Such a lovely fic Lazy..it so reminded me of my fav lemons fic and RK seem so similar to my lemons RK 😳..hopefully he even does something similar to my lemonswala RK lol (fingers crossed btw)

RK is such a charmer man !! Uff !! He is like a Prince Charming made my Dil go dhak dhak 😆😳 with all his caring act towards Madhu...he made her feel so special and the way he took care of her aww !! Isn't he very sweet 😃 !

But what the 😡 !! Can I whack him on his head 😡 for being such a dumbo ( yup this is a noticeable change Lazy..all this while it was Madhu who used to be dumb to the the core.. And RK all smarty pants 😳..looks like we are in for a certain role reversal here .. A surprising one I should add 😆)

Hmm he is dumbo..period 😆 !! Yet very charmingly dumb hehe !! He couldn't crack even one hint out of so many ...such a (refreshing )change to see him like this 😆 !

OMG the way they went on about size 0 ..I seriously wanted to whack them both 😳..even Kareena kapoor couldn't stay put in size 0 in more than one movie lol !! But I liked his outlook towards being beautiful not just outside but rom inside out 😳 !!

RK is charming without any doubt just look at the way he went on praising Madhu and her beauty 😉 and her beautiful nature but him being Rogue ...hmm yeh baat kuch hazam nahi hui lol !! Can't digest that one so caring can be rogue 😉 !!

Hmm so for me to know how exactly he is a rogue ..you need to update soon honey 😆

Haye !! On top it all, he held her dupatta in order to stop her😳..haaye main mar jaanwa 😳 !! Now dying to know his reaction after learning the ultimate truth that its none other than HIM 😆 !!

Continue soon Lazy darling 😃

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Moumita

@-SmexyGhost-

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Posted: 11 years ago

UN - RES :

Ayee hayee i have never seen a Dumbo like this Rishab .. 🤣 .. He is certified as king of ullu ka pattha .. 😆😆 .. Anyways moving on i always like how u play with all characters .. I liked Trishna here .. U even made me like Sultan & Dipali in some of ur stories .. 😲 .. Madhu is completely a sweetheart .. Aww i loved how RK took care of her .. 😳 .. Hayoo Rabba is ullu ka main kya karu .. Good that Madhu opened d dhakkan of his soya huya bheja though i wanted 2 see him working hard 2 find out his own name .. 😛😆 .. Now me w8ing 2 see his reaction .. It vl be fun right .. 😉

PS : Abt ur qs as i said before It's always pleasure 2 read ur stories .. feels like cant get enough of ur writing & I MEAN IT .. 🤗🤗

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice start😳
Super like it
Do continue soon😛

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lazy .. your name doesn't suits you. Thanks for reposting it as Rishbala and nope I love reading and so I am happy to read from you.. love your work.

Res to read it later.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

where the heck do i start??

I loved it! That's a good start.

Beginning. Loved Trishna. Very cute and I enjoyed the big brother and little sister banter. Realistic too. (I have a big brother and he hated playing chauffeur).

Madhu's entry. You had me scared at first thinking the poor girl has some horrible disease. But no, it turned out to be the horrible monthly time with all its glory of cramps and pain! Poor girl!!! Many, many of us can relate to that!

RK taking care of Madhu. Side note: you love your Prince Charming don't you? cause honestly I know no man that would do ALL that. I am convinced a guy like that only exists in fairy tales, your stories, in my dreams and in every single one of my prayers! (Ameen).

Moving on 😳 ...

I loved the way RK took care of Madhu. I loved Madhu voicing her inner fears. She wants to tell him but is scared BUT a part of her wants to take that risk!

RK's opinions and advise was so good. I loved how he calls Madhu beautiful!

But the man does need a whack on the head! I thought RK must know about Madhu's feelings but he really does not. His behaviour makes me want to hug him and strangle him at the same time!!! 😃

The ending: BRILLIANT!!!!! Madhu finally had enough and threw out her one liner and like every normal girl, she then made a run for it.

RK is going to have one heck of a sleepless night!

Can't wait for the fall out!

👏

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manju21.k

@manju21.k

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

UNRes...😎
Nice concept Lazy...😃
RK is such a dumb but i liked his care 4 Madhu...😳
Continue soon ...😃

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Hurrayyy another SS

Nice start.. So at last madhu revealed it.. what will be RK response ??? waiting for your next part. Pls update soon

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

🥳Thanks for starting a new SS. 🥳 You are such a fabulous writer that it is always a treat reading your stories, so please don't stop and keep writing. Also, very cute story. Please update soon. 😊