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OS:THE PROMISE OF LOVE
the malliks n kundras r best business partners n buddies.they were soo much buddies that they lived in the same mansion called kundra-mallik mansion.as mohan n shamsher were thich friends their wives radha n padmini were thick friends.
first radhaji gave birth to a beautiful son n padmini named him as rishabh.padmini waited for years but she could not bear a baby.she was very depressed at last after 5 years, she gave birth to a beautiful princess.as padmini named rishabh it was radha's turn she named her madhubala
rishabh was only five years old but he handled madhu soo carefully that she always slept in his arms.rishabh used to always sleep with his madhu.till she attained puberty,madhu used to sleep snuggling in rishabh's arms.after puberty,padmini has restricted madhu to not sleep with him.rishabhbut somehow still managed to snuggle with each other n sleep.for them,it was an intimacy it is what they do always.
as they grew up,they started having some greater feelings than friendship.by feeling that feeling,they were unable to sleep with each other.first madhu used to free with rishabh but now she started feeling shy.rishabh too had the same feeling but he wanted his madhu to be his soon soo that there is no separation between them.
there was a party on the success of the two partners mallik-kundra.they were soo happy.mallik told rishabh"what do u think abt rahul?" rishabh was confused n he asked"why rahul?" mallik told"abt rahul n our madhu marriage".the blood drained from his face.he was angry n was feeling helpless that his madhu wud be going away from him.he cannot let it happen.he saw madhu n pulled her to a corner n proposed her.
soon the other family members came.rishabh said abt his love to the family.they finally agreed. rishabh sneaked with madhu to a room n started kissing her passionately.madhu moved away n asked him"will u really marry?" he smiled at her silly question n said"i promise u that i wud marry u" madhu smiled n immediately frowned n asked"u kissed perfectly .did u kiss any girl before?" rishabh cheekily replied "yes". madhu got angry n said"u goo with her n marry" rk said"i m going to marry that girl only"madhu gaped.while rishabh continued"when u were small, i used to kiss u on ur lips"n smilingly pulled her n said"i m never gonna leave u alone i'll be always with u"
things were going smoothly suddenly one day rishabh learned that madhu fell unconcious .he got worried but mallik uncle said"she is fine".the next day when he was searching for madhu.she was not there.he was informed that madhu went to her friends home.he got irritated.it was one week ,rishabh missed his madhu.soo he somehow managed to get the address of madhu in which mallik n kundras were very unhelpful.
he knocked the door.madhu his madhu opened the door.o god how much he missed her!. he immediately went inside n closed the door n before madhu could say anything, he slammed his lips on hers n was kissing her hungriliy. n he cupped her face n said"madhu i want u,i cannt live without u"n soon he went on to show his love by making love with her.
in the night, again madhu tried to speak to him but he cut her off by saying" in our suhaag raat we can talk the whole night i promise i have not slept for many days" she blushed hearing.he moved n looked at her face n said"ohh i missed that we already had one" madhu again tried to move away from n say something but before that her blanket slithered away showing her body which turned rishabh on.then he pulled her down n made love.
finally they got up the next morning,rishabh pushed madhu to get ready.as they have to go home.rishabh was in the living room when he heard the shout of madhu.he hurried to the room n saw madhu screaming n blood was oozing from her ears.rishabh was tensed.he immediately hurried madhu to the hospital.he informed this to mallik-kundras.they rushed to the hospital.the doctor asked "did u now that she had tumour that too last stage.then she had soo much tensions"kundras were shocked but mallik replied"sorry doctor"rishabh was soo tensed n worried that he was not aware what was happening in his surroundings
after sometime, the doctor came n said"we r very sorry we were unable to save the patient" hearing this all started crying.whereas rishabh said"why r u all crying,my madhu is sleeping? i m gonna wake her up".they looked at him with shock.they tried to convince him but they were not able to convince him.mallik were abt to take madhu's dead body for last rituals but they learnt that rishabh took it.they thought that rishabh wud take her to home but he was not there.
here rishabh took madhu to temple n asked the pandit to do marriage ceremonies but he ignored as he understood that the bride in his hand was already dead.soo he shrugged him off.but rishabh took madhu n made her sit on the lap n put sindoor n mangalsutra on her n keeping her in his arms.he completed saath phere.then he kissed her cheeks n said"i completed my promise".
the malliks n kundras were searching for rishabh.then after long time his mobile was ringing .he sttended it n his parents bombared with questions but he replied that"today was my marriagen now u know naa.plzz dont disturb naa".the malliks n kundras cried for their children.
here rishabh was having madhu in his arms n says"i know u told i'll speak with u the whole night soo we wil speak abt our childhood"the malliks reached the mansion n saw that rishabh snuggled to madhu's dead body n slept.when they tried to remove madhu .he got up n scolded them.as the time was passing, malliks knew that the body of madhu wud stink soo they wanted to complete the ceremony.soo they harshly tried to separate them.
but rishabh ran ways from his home.they were running.but he knew that there was no escape.they wud come n take his madhu away from him forever.he was standing on the top of a river.he looked to madhu n smiled n said"i told u naa i'll never leave u .i know u r scared of height.soo u hug me n close ur eyes.after sometimes we will be together always"he hugged his madhu he was happy that his madhu was in his embrace.
after sometime mallik-kundras reached the shore of the river where the dead bodies of rishabh n madhu was gathered.rishabh has still entangled his arms with madhu.they cried for their children's bad fate.
mallik thought keeping madhu far away from rishabh wud atleast fill rishabh's life with happiness but they forgot that they born to be together happy n even death cannot separate them.they r bond by soul n body.this is their sweet promise of love.
this is my first attempt in tragedy.pls bear with me.dont throw chappals n tamataars on me
.this dedicated my akka uma,kavya(kg 15)the tragedy queen,my inspirational writer bookworm aka lazy
Edited by christobelle - 11 years ago
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