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Shivangi.

@caffeineaddict

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Haha!! The end! Its so CUTE!!

I loveee Kundruuu!!☺️ errr...I mean Kundraa☺️

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bonhishikha

@bonhishikha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the PM!

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Very nice os...loved it to the core...

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-Dil-

@-Dil-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

It was hilarious. Loved loved loved it..!!👏

I just love the way you write humorous scenes. That was what attracted me towards your Michi FF's in the first place. By God! You still have it in spades...A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.!!👍🏼

Looking forward to reading more from you..😊

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

this was a really very funny as well as amusing os...loved the way both of them met and started to share about each other...Mukund should be caareful for providing the misleading infos to Madhu/...only sad thing was that RK was colourblind...but it really does not matter...very nice os...keep writing dear...thnks for pm...

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mmradhu

@mmradhu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awesome and fabulous os... loved it so much...
So rishbala are meeting for their marriage proposal but they were stuck in elevator... that was interesting...story was mind blowing... how you got this kind of idea!!! i really amazed about your creative mind!!! keep it up...
Thanks for pm and take care

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

lovely...fantastic...superb...there were so many cute moments...loved 'kundru' suffix...the climax couldn't have been better

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Nice story Lazy, loved it to the core, both RK(no, i must say kundru) and madhu are so sweet😊

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

awesome os lazy 👏

kundru is so sweet

loved it 😊

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Why can't these things ever happen to me???? Oh wait, it did but with a twist. I went to meet one guy and got distracted by his best friend! The guy I was supposed to meet was a bore and a cheap one at that! And of course my story did not end well! I digress ...

Back to YOUR story!

LOVED IT! Rishab is so sweet! And sneaky.

Madhu actually had some good reasons to be hesitant in meeting 'Kundru" - except for the name thing all her reasons were actually valid. Including the movie reason (I totally agree with her- well with you I mean).

So you had a very solid base and Rishab's answers were every girl's dream!

Oh I would love for there to be a part 2. Like maybe an epilogue ... An engagement party maybe? Rishab could be teasing Madhu about their first meeting, maybe having Trishna and Mukand present where Rishab grills them on what they told Madhu? Oh maybe the party could be at the same place and as Rishab and Madhu are entering or leaving, the elevator gets stuck again??? And with that, I am off to dream land! 😳

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