Rishbala 2 shots - Final Destination last part pg 6

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very interesting start. It has left me wondering whether RK is a ghost or what !! Hope he is a person and not a ghost whom Madhu can feel, touch. Looking forward to the next one. Very well written. :)

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Nshahtalati

@nshahtalati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow I always loved your writing. U are indeed good writer. Your mind run very fast when u write. I loved this one, I hope they don't have to face much trouble in this one and they will be together. I really hope we don't have to wait for long for next update. Always hungry for more of your updates.

Edited by nshahtalati - 12 years ago

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

The concept is interesting.
Well written Story. :)

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mimibm

@mimibm

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Is RK a spirit??😲...I am feeling a bit scared u know...chicken heart...but would be waiting to know what happens next...

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revti21

@revti21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Oh wow...that was superb...waitin fr next...

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

nice start janani ,waiting for next part

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Very unique 😃 and lovely.. Kinda loved their unique bonding too.. Is the year very significant ? Firstly I thought he is a vampire then felt he is not lol !! Pls continue so that we can get to know who actually is he 😉 hehe !!

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome part 1 jan!pls continue soon...

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

nice start👏
trish is madhu's little sister???wow!cute!!!!
what is rk here?spirit?...
ha ha even spirit rk can't go away frm madhu😃
continue...waiting 4 their face2face chat
thnkz 4 pm dear😊...

Edited by meiejrishbala - 12 years ago