i dont think i need to tell u that it is lovely! it always is 👏 👏 👏 thank u for making my days special 😳 👏
rishab n his pain is well penned down but, even better is the way u wrote about his reasons...that he cant back out of the vow, that he knows what pain one sided love wud give n that he is not willing to do that to anyone 👏 👏 👏 👏 MASTERPIECE 👏
mukund making madhu blurt out the truth is brilliantly written 👏 👏
rishab slaps madhu after knowing the truth 👏 👏 👏 i have always imagined this 😳 thank u for writing this 😳 👏 👏 👏
rishbala talks are amazing and emotional...radha being the culprit was a shocker!
AND AND AND...4 yrs later 🥳 🥳 🥳
i have always imagined VD with cute kids around...cute threesome...i wudnt be surprised if u made shlok pull rishab's hair too 😆 (but good i cant see rishab without hair 😆)
and baap-beti ki mili-bhagat is a treat
and the way rishab yells MADHUU...adorable!
and all through my comment i just cudnt call rishab as RK...ooo this cutipie...
thoda lamba comment ho gaya 😆 😛
but, i luv u 🤗
PS : can u pls write one more part to this with these two kids n Rishab and Madhu preparing to celebrate their birthday ? they are twins naa..same same b'day...i will enjoy reading the cute fights 😆 😳 (ok i m quite capable of giving crap ideas so u have to tell me wen i do so 😆 )
ETA: nice names 😳
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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