i dont think i need to tell u that it is lovely! it always is ๐ ๐ ๐ thank u for making my days special ๐ณ ๐
rishab n his pain is well penned down but, even better is the way u wrote about his reasons...that he cant back out of the vow, that he knows what pain one sided love wud give n that he is not willing to do that to anyone ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ MASTERPIECE ๐
mukund making madhu blurt out the truth is brilliantly written ๐ ๐
rishab slaps madhu after knowing the truth ๐ ๐ ๐ i have always imagined this ๐ณ thank u for writing this ๐ณ ๐ ๐ ๐
rishbala talks are amazing and emotional...radha being the culprit was a shocker!
AND AND AND...4 yrs later ๐ฅณ ๐ฅณ ๐ฅณ
i have always imagined VD with cute kids around...cute threesome...i wudnt be surprised if u made shlok pull rishab's hair too ๐ (but good i cant see rishab without hair ๐)
and baap-beti ki mili-bhagat is a treat
and the way rishab yells MADHUU...adorable!
and all through my comment i just cudnt call rishab as RK...ooo this cutipie...
thoda lamba comment ho gaya ๐ ๐
but, i luv u ๐ค
PS : can u pls write one more part to this with these two kids n Rishab and Madhu preparing to celebrate their birthday ? they are twins naa..same same b'day...i will enjoy reading the cute fights ๐ ๐ณ (ok i m quite capable of giving crap ideas so u have to tell me wen i do so ๐ )
ETA: nice names ๐ณ
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago