Rishbala OS: A Sea Shore in Spain

Aakriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
lovely os😳

Thank you :)

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Aakriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sani9226
fab os

Thank u :)

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awesome OS..a very different concept n yet endearing..
usually all stories end up with love or marriage track n happy ending.

but this one enunciating a true meaning of living a life whole heartedly...n hinting a new beginning for both ...
loved it

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Aakriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: memad
awesome OS..a very different concept n yet endearing..
usually all stories end up with love or marriage track n happy ending.

but this one enunciating a true meaning of living a life whole heartedly...n hinting a new beginning for both ...
loved it

Thanks a lot memad :D

i m really glad that u liked it :)

i always try to make all my stories different...even if they have a simple plot, i try to inculcate some important issues that need to be discussed or something which needs to be conveyed to all.., inspiration in this case...

And i m really glad that atleast someone could notice that hidden motive behind the OS nd not just search for love as evry1 else does :P

Thank u :')

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Lovely OS..!!! Beautifully written n Thanks for the PM!!

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Aakriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Syed695
Lovely OS..!!! Beautifully written n Thanks for the PM!!

Thank you :)

Really glad that u liked it :D

nd ur welcome :P ;)

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Pika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Nice os aku...thanxx for pm

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Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Firstly a big wala Muaaahhh!!!! 🤗
Dr...
It was a pleasant surprise to c ur pm
Gud... nd its necessary for a break...
frm ur hectic schedule ..it will make u fresh and relax ur mind...

Ohh!!nd dis OS...
mesmerzing...stupendousss.fabulouss..each words each thoughtsss.everthing..
words r less to express how owesome it is..
Sachi Dr.!!!!!!! 🤗

u knw Aku i luv to read ur writin..nd dis was diffrent.

every thng..frm description of nature to saving...her..to mouth to mouth 🤣
to der sweet fghts..
nd dat ln...""" "So Miss.Honey...why were you
torturing the sea by getting into the
waves and beating them up like a
karate kid??"" hahaha dat jus crakd me..
miss coward honey... 🤣
everthn to der emotionsse i lvd it...

Oh i may stop blabbering or i may end up commentin on every sentence.. 🤣

Hope u write more of like dis..bt only on breaks...

nd i ll surely wait for it..
once again... 🤗

luv
Divya...

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