HuM HaI DeEwAnE- Rishbala FF (Part 23/page 121)

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noiseygirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

nyc update
Do update regularly plz
thanks 4 pm and also morning gift

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Shweta Dafda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Wow diya it's just awsome loved it plZ continue soon

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Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

awww my baby he is so much hurt
cant see him like this
hope he gets to know the truth soon
though i want madhu to crave for him a lil more
like he did
but i know making her crave means he ll be in pain too so clear the mu n unite him with his mom as well as his love
lovely update

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kg15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

That was one emotional Chapter, Dia!

I noticed the change in your writing style too... Keep it up! It's good!

Circumstances are deepening the space between them gradually which is hurting both of them... It would be interesting to see how the story shapes from now on... They have made hidden promises for each other. That's really sweet!

Continue Soon dear.