HuM HaI DeEwAnE- Rishbala FF (Part 23/page 121) - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it one go...really loved ur stry line...really gt addctd
Updte soonn
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 16: finally u updated...it was really nice...happy that Madhu agreed about her feelings to Mukund and he is a nice guy basically...and best part is RK got to know about Deepali's evil plans...cnt soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story & lovely updates! waiting for next update pls pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow,👏, nice story,lovd it, wen will be next update, waiting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Hey have you written this on fb..remember reading something similar there..but then stopped cos many ff's were being copied from IF and searching original stories became difficult..


yes I wrote this ff in my fb page too...
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Originally posted by: sss333

wow,👏, nice story,lovd it, wen will be next update, waiting😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
DEar when will u update ? It seems like a decade
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Thank you all who liked and commented on previous part.. Today only Kavya di (Kg15) and Neha (NehaVdian) asked me when will I post.. So I want to dedicate this part to them and to them who r waiting for this story..

PART 17


Madhu came out from her chawl room,lost in her own thoghuts... When suddenly she saw a white mercedes stopped near the chawl gate.. Only one name came on hee mind and it was RK... She went downstair while looking back wheather anyone watching or not... She came outside of chawl gate.. And he also came out from his car and yes she guessed right.. It was RK.. She looked at him toe to bottom and her eyes caught his bandaged hand.. Without wasting a second she ran towards him "RK r u fine? When did u get discharge.. And why did u come here in this condition.." She asked her concernly... RK didnt rplied and keep staring at her...

M: RK I m asking u something...

He just came out from his sense "Hunn?"

They shared an eyelock for sometime... Madhu's hair locks fall on her forehead and he tucked her hair behind her ear with his fingure.. Madhu just remembered past moments when she jerked off his hand and pushed herself back and turned her face another side..

M: Why did you come here...

RK made her turn towards him and asked "Why did u give me blood?"

Madhu looked at him shocked "How did he know this..." She thought in mind..

RK: I m asking you something... You feel the same which I feel for you.. Right Madhu??

Madhu didnt say anything.. RK held his one hand on her shoulder as his another pne was injure..

RK: Say naa Madhu that u love me...

This time she only remembered the promise which she did to her maa and she again jerked off his hand..

M: Mr.Rishabh Kundra you misunderstood me.. As a human being I gave u blood.. If there was someone else I would do the same... So dnt think so much abt this (she said while turning her face back)

RK pulled her close and ask "So you dnt love me.."

Madhu looked at another side and said "No.."

RK (angrily): Look into my eyes say this damn it...

Madhu didnt reply... RK pinned her to the wall and came little close and said "Your eyes saying that you love me..."

Madhu closed her eyes to get some courage to face him and she looked at him...

M: No I dnt love u..

RK steped a back shockingly..

M (loudly): Did you hear I dnt love you.. I dnt love u Rk.. I dnt..

Tears rolled out from her eyes and he went inside the chawl where she saw Mukund and hugged him.. RK saw them together and fumed and he left...

Mu: What happen...

Madhu simply nodded a no and left...

Mu (in mind): Madhu dnt hurt urself like this...

RK reached home... Madhu's words were echoeing in his ears.. He went inside angrily where he saw Dipali... He remembered Dipali's evil plans.. But he was not in mood to talk with her so he silently headed towards the stairs but Dipali's words stopped him "So again ur Madhubala reject u.." She asked...

RK turned at her...

RK: You know what first I thought I wont mess up with you but Jale pe namak chitakna toh koi tumse sikhe... You know what self confidence is good but over confidence is not good.. And you r over confident.. You thought no one can caught you (said while giving her the note and the card)...

Dips looked at him shocked..

RK: How dare you to play game with me huh?? Now if I want I can kick u out of this house...

Dips: RK I..

RK: Sshh.. Dipali I told you before and today I m saying dont interfere in my life.. You hv no rights... You lost all your rights when you left me.. And today you are nothinh for me.. So keep distance from me.. And dnt mess up with me.. Otherwise you know what I can do...

Saying this he was going to leave but stoped again and turned "And listen if you try this tricks again then first change your handwritting.." And he left towards his room...


So its my updation.. Mixed with Rishbala and Rk dips confrontation.. Hope you all like it.. I hope I will give u the next part tmrw...

Now waitinh for ur likes and comments..

Advance Thank you..

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Posted: 11 years ago
It wsa awesome bt so sad madhu lied n this hurted Rk, poor Rk 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsmmm huhhh luv it waiting 4 2moro

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