RIMA FF: COZ IT'S U AND ME chap 3 part a and b on pg 19

Akkhy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
COZ IT'S U AND ME

don't throw chappals and tomatoes!! it means eggs also!! i knw!! mere aur 3 writeups hai!! 2 ff's and 1 ss!! aur mein yeh start kar raha hun!! and all!! but i got this idea exactly 3 days back and i'm completely restless!! so finally i made up my mind!! i'll post chapter 1 of this nw!! and as soon as i'll complete pyaar toh hona hi tha then i'll updt the 2nd chapter!! so bear wth me!! plz undrstnd!! i think i'll updt the next part aftr 1 month!!
CHAPTER 1


The gates opened as soon as audii a8 is present before it!!! the car eneterd and stopped straight in front if the house door!!
The security opened the left side passenger door and became shocked to see a innocent face , in a bridal attire!! who is she?? he never saw her in this premises also!! and why is she crying??? and she is scared!! of wat??
Their he is!! the reason behind her scaring!! the reason for her crying face!!
Why wouldn't she be nervous or crying wen a devil like his cheif is sitting beside her , holding her on her arm leaving marks wth an evil smirk on his face!!! The security noticed his chief red as blood eyes on him looking angry ready to burst anytime!!!

the security gulped and went back leaving the opened door!!
poor girl!! she's too lost to notice anything!!!
she dried her tears as he got out of the car!! and to her surprise!! he didn't drag her like he was doing but this time lifted her in his arms knwing that she wud never allow him to drag her aur touch her wrist which is already paining coz of his draggings!!

" CHODO!! CHODO MUJHE!! RK CHODO MUJHE!!"
But he didn't listen o her pleadings and held her tightlt more near him!!
As he enterd , he knw that many eyes are looking at him and his wife to throw their questions on him!!
"RISHU!!" a lady in her early 50's shouted seeing her son's behaviour of briging and unknwn girl in his arms as his wife!!! she can see hw that girl is struggling in his arms!!

But who cares?? so he too didn't care!! but was busy carrying his wife carefully who is struggling like a deer in tiger's wrath!! an evil smirk covered his face thinking abt her as deer and him as tiger!!

He walked straight to his room!! carrying her in his arms , closed the door using his leg and went near his king sized bed and dropped her on it!!
madhu: aah!! (winced in pain while her sobs!!)
he smirked as usuall!!
" U need energy bi..wi..!!!"
she looked up at him with disgust and tears in her eyes!!!
" Itni aasaan nahi hai rk ke upar jeetna!! jaao!! jaake tayyar hojaao!! phir tumhe kuch khilaane chalthe hai!!"
madhu: mujhe kuch nahi khaana hai!!!
rk: lekin mujhe tumhe khaana hai biwi!! (naughtyness that may kills a person) aaj hamara suhaagraat bhi toh hai!! (winked wth an evil smirk accompaning!!)
he slowly came near her neck while madhu turned to another side in disgust trying to push him!!! inhaled her scent making her shiver and disgusted on herslef having him this near to her!!
madhu: tum aisa kuch nahi karoge!!!! (while pacing her hands n his chest to push him)
rk: Don't worry!! aisa kuch nahi karunga jo tum soch rahi ho!!
madhu: door jaao mujhse!! tum chahe toh bhi mujhe kuch nahi kar sakthe!!
he smirked!!!
"ahaan!!"

He pulled her through her waist keeping one leg on the bed bending!! clutched her hair and pulled her face near his that they both can feel eachothr's breath on their faces!!
she is breathing heavily, closing her eyes in helplesness and he is hungrily looking at her face!!
rk: u smell soo gud biwi!!!
And he crashed his lips against hers , his tounge slid in to force her lips apart!! he held her solidly by her jaw , locking in to his!! madhu was frozen in horror as his tounge found hers. Her brain seemed to hae deserted her!! all she could think was how tightly is body was pressing against hers and how his taste burned in her throat!!
he pulled away after he was satisfied , grinning , then not so subtly swiping his mouth!!
rk: u evn taste good biwi!!
and went near her for another encounter!!

" NOOO"
Shw woke up breathing short!! heavy breath!! sweat beads ran on her face and her hand!! she looked around the room, wide-eyed making sure she was in her room rather than her husband's!!
madhu: phirse usi din ka sapnaa!!
she took a heavy breath!! glistening tears formed in her eyes and hovered for a moment before they fell wetly upon her cheeks!!

WHAT IS HER LIFE?
WHERE IT IS TAKING HER?
WHY IS HER LIFE BECAME A LIVING HELL?

She evry nite wakes up wth this nitemare which is really happend! the day wen she was forcefully married to the arrogant supertar rk!! whom she hated frm the bottom of her heart stoled her first kiss and made it a sloppy kiss!! and the worst part is she didn't stop him and is living wth him frm past two months!!!
evn her parents do not trust her!!


precap: side-effects of saree!! (girls!!! beware of sarees)


ur view are very important to me guys!! as they r my support and strength!! hope u ppl liked it!! if so!! plz click the like button!!


p.s. 1) titli4love
2) Rapiya1030
3) neha_maaneet
4)mmradhu
5) aDarkAngel
6) lwrimaforever
7) Miss.Perfectiie
8) anjali0111
and many more!! i knw u ppl are eagerly waiting for another witeups!! will updt them tomorrow!! so don't worry and be happy!!
and if i didn't get a nice response for this! than i'll discntu it without any objection!!
rest is in ur hands beauties!! (as i knw most of them are girls)
Edited by Akkhy - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

155

Views

21.6k

Users

45

Likes

261

Frequent Posters

uma88 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Pls do continue, don't put this in hold, you can give update for all your story one by one, so that all be her dream, i felt stories will be proceeded. On reading the first part, i was just thinking it was about some old happenings in MB, but when it felt little twisted, but your precap sounds more interesting.

And am the first to comment, hurray!!!
Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
uma88 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Sorry for double posting
Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
afterlife. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
unres
Though I don't like forced kisses. but it was a dream..thank God.
Continue soon..nice start. But the story seems to be same as Pyaar toh hona hi tha. U should have tried something different Akhil.
Edited by titli4love - 11 years ago
bikeshsngh03 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Hot start for the ff
I liked this arrogant RK and his antics
.SalmanDeewani. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Am reserving my place.. Will read soon and edit it.😳
kg15 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Do continue it...
In the starting I found it to be highlighting the early days of Rishbala but the ending of the chapter proved me wrong...
Quite different and interesting...👍🏼
Edited by kg15 - 12 years ago
rinkrk thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
heehehehe... 1st tng, nice story n continue soon, it is really interesting,... 2nd tng, im laughing cos already ur last 3 ff r pending... n u came up with 1 more... i dont have prob ... but actually its good dat u keep on writing, n i keep on reading... coz i luv reading... d only tng is left to tell u, all d best...😆
Prettyliars thumbnail
Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Nice ff dear.cntinue soon and thanxx for pm
rekha.366 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
wow my first reactions is this i like it akhil ,poor madhu but love evil rk ,show main tho dekhno ko nahi mil raha hai , continue ,and thanks for the pm🤗

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".