Rishbala OS - Love for the nation Final part pg 13 - Page 10

Though my babies are killed yet I would say that the ending was amazing...its truly a salute to them who are in real army...thnks for this amazing one shot...keep writing...:)

Beautifully Written 👏

Originally posted by: kg15

FABULOUS UMA...
WHAT AN ENDING... SO EMOTIONAL... MY EYES GOT WET WHILE READING THE ENDING... SUPERBLY WRITTEN...!! GREAT JOB DONE..!!
THUMBS UP..!

Am happy that you liked it, while writing and updating the end, i was in dilemma, whether our mbians wil like it or not, as i have killed both of them, but i was confident in my mind not to change the climax, as this was the original version i have planned for,and if i have changed the end for my readers, it would have not come right with me.

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome...loved it...

Thanks a lot karamjeet

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Beautifully Written 👏

Loved it Even though it was sad ending

A big salute to all those brave soldiers who sacrificed their lives for our safety

Thank you shree, am glad, you all liked it

nice update but iam crying 😭 thanks for the pm dear

Originally posted by: rg0782

Though my babies are killed yet I would say that the ending was amazing...its truly a salute to them who are in real army...thnks for this amazing one shot...keep writing...:)

Yes dear, they are the real heroes, what you say

Originally posted by: yogendra1

wow can't express your OS brought tears into my eyes .Keep it up .Expecting another OS from you.

Thank you, Surely would write one on different concept.

Originally posted by: rekha.366

nice update but iam crying 😭 thanks for the pm dear

Thanks rekha, am happy as you liked it

It sooo emotional nd i' m crying right now after reading dis ...Why u make dis kind of os dear???? Main Rk or madhu ko itna dard main kabhi nahi dekhna chahati hoon...sooo sorry if i hurt u...but kam say kam ek Happy end dekhna chahati thi main Riahbala ka but u gave heart break tragic end to story...