pyaar kiya toh darna kiya a rishbala ff(chapter 9 updated in pg no 21)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i m a new writer in this forum .i love rishbala a lot soo i thought to write this ff plz do like my attempt

PROLOGUE
she introduces herself n says "i'm madhubala mallik" then raises her hand towards him n he introduces himself as rkn gives a handshakes.
madhu says"friends???".rk with attitude but says"ok,friends"b.but madhu suddenly burst in laughter n rk looks bewildered n asks "tum hass kyun rahi ho??"
madhu says "ur name is too funny"
rk asks "what is funny??"
madhu says"how ur parents rightly new that in future u'll be a right khadoos n named u rk"
madhu is laughing n rk is irritated but enjoying the moments
is this a beggining of a new frienship or a never ending lovestory
lets see what enfolds in their future
plz do like n comment n guide me with this ff charater sketch will be updated soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome dear.. Nice start,Waiting for the next part
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Hi! It's a cute beginning. Right Khadoos. :D
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nice start pkease do continue
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CHARACTER SKETCH
rishabh kundra:
a handsome superstar heart throb of girls.He is sweet but always has an attitude to carry with him .He believes that the world can fall for him but he cannot fall for a girl
madhubala mallik
a sweet bubbly girl who lives in village n has strict rules to follow.But she wants to free from this ruls n live life happily.Her aim to go to mumbai n work indepently
dipali bhatia:
secretary of rk who is behind rk but rk never cared abt her
sikander dixit:
he is tooo working for rk n he loves dipali but dipali never recognised his love for him
mukund dixit:
he is too working for rk but always hates rk n his attitude
later more characters wud be introduced as the story proceeds
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INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH
chapter 1:page 2
chapter 2: page 3
chapter 3:page 5
chapter 4: page 7
chapter 5:page 10
chapter 6: page 12
chapter 7:page 15
chapter 8:page 18
chapter 9:page 21
Edited by christobelle - 11 years ago
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chapter 1:

the morning sun was showering its rays on a beautiful serene girl who completely snuggled herself in the pilloows by covering her face from the rays n not wantin to open the shutter of the beautiful curtains of her eyes
padmini said"madhu, wake up dear"
but madhu said"just 10 mins more mom"
n again snuggled back to her bed
padmini came inside her room n sat near her n careesed her face
n again said" madhu, wake up"
but she didnot budge
seeing this padmin suddenly cried " dadaji"
madhu immediately got up from the bed n straightened herself
when she got up to see dadaji he was not their
n suddenly she heard her mother burst out in laughter
then she realised it was a prank played by her mother
madhubala was brought up in motihari in her family girls were not allowed to study but bcoz of her she pursued her studies n now she got a job in mumbai which was her dream after a lot of struggle she got permission from dadaji
on the other hand rk was with his mother radhaji
he was highly irritated bcoz of the nonsense chitchat of the ladies
some ladies even asked radhaji to marry rishabh with their daughter
rishabh was getting even more annoyed by seeing the girls drooling over him like makkhis
rishabh suddely got a call
then he panicked n called bittuji n asked him to get his airtickets for mumbai immediately
madhu n padmini were busy packing stuffs for madhus departure
padmini again n again reminded madhu of the parmpara of their family n dadajis conditions while packing but madhu didnt care to care to hear it as she was in the excitement of going to mumbai
padmini said"madhu, this r ur train tickets"
madhu pulled it from her hands n just dancing in joy
on the other rishabh was cursing himself for cuming with his mother
rishabh was informed by bittuji that he didnt get airtickets n bittuji booked his tickets in train
rk says" bittuji,how dare u book my tickets in train??"
bittuji says"but cheif, airtickets were not availabe soo..."
rk in anger says"how does a superstar like me doesnt get a airticket tooo"
madhu suddely saw the tickets n she became sad as the tickets were of ac couch
madhu said"why ac couch mom i wanted to go in sleeper couch"
padmini said "u know abt ur dadaji he will never allow u to go in crowd n sleeper couches r crowdy"
madhu says"i love that only ma i love tooo speak n chat with different people"
hearing this padmini scolded her n made her remember the conditions of dadaji
rk asked bittuji "sleeper couch or ac"
bittuji said 'ac couch cheif"
rk sighed "thank god !!! at least ac couch or else he wud have to go in down market sleeper couch"
rk told radhaji abt his departure n left for railway station
madhu took the blessings of dadaji n their parents n she too left for railway station
as she waved her parents bye ,new dreams started budding in her heart n imaginations abt mumbai
precap: rk n madhu in one apartment that too a compartment of two
first meeting of rishbala
cutiee talks between rishbala
thanx for the guys who likec my work n encouraged me too continue further plz do like n comment n guide me with this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear..continue soon and thanxx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely lovely update! Btw... Love that Dips is the secretary. Can you demote her to servant? ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omG!!!!! 😲
so soo soo sorry christy!!
for such a late cmmnt!!

uff!!!!
updt toh mast hai!! 👏
and this train became the symbol of love yaar!! 👏 👏
hai na!!
all strted frm DDLJ!!
and evrything in train!! 😉
train mein meeting is best and always works!! ⭐️⭐️
i'm very excited to read the chap 2!! 😛 😊 😛
plz!! jaldi jaldi type karo aur post karo!! 👍🏼 😆
and i want their encounter to be funny!! plz!! 😉 🤣

and updt karke mujhe pm karna bhulna mat!! 😛
plz!! updt soon!!
eagerly waiting!!! 😳 😳

AKHIL ❤️

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