Rishbala SS MarriageTrilogy2:MarriageMostScandalous End on Pg54(5/12)

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Dark_Chocolate

@Dark_Chocolate

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

I loved ds update...u wrote it so beautifully

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

LOOOL in the Balcony?? :D ❤️
niiice :D
ahahah lovely update Lazy :D

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

OK, I loved it. I would not call the chapter 'cheesy' but yes it was very sweet overload but I like sweet! and the 'red' parts were actually comical.

The red parts: I have no comments on the ... um actions ... but the dialogues are funny. Rishab is again a sweetheart! For a virgin himself, he is quite understanding and knowledgeable.

Madhu and her reactions were hilarious!!! A nympho really! But honestly, who could blame her?? 😳

Rishab's confession was beautiful and I did not think Madhu's confession was going to be as good but her confession was even more real to me.

And I loved how you added the magalsutra part and their 'real' wedding. 😭

Loved it!!!

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

lovely part..

waiting for next part.. update soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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sangeet

@sangeet6690

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

awesome update Lazy..if this is cheesy i want more of it..it was worth the wait!!!!

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mimibm

@mimibm

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Thank god I am not virgin 😆😛!!...Just loved it Lazy...these days I am so damn busy that I can hardly write a comment to the nice stories I read but could not keep myself from doing it now...I loved the 'nympho' part a lot...and as usual you created magic with your words 😳

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bria

@bria

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

plz update soon...and u ve written really well

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

what an update lazy...😳 so hot!!!!☺️☺️☺️
i luv the rishu here...he is so understanding...i luved the way they solved out all their sexual problems gradually...it felt so natural...
in all stories its rk who is more passionate...and i like it...but i like this madhu too😊
madhu and her balcony thoughts😆😆seriously,hw romantic😊
i hav to say one thing to u...we MBians know that MRK is MadhubalaRishabhKundra...but u give us a new full form...MohanRadhaKundra🤣🤣🤣

good job lazy...once again,it was a wonderful update...thank u so much dear...😊
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manju21.k

@manju21.k

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

UNRes...😉
Awesome Update as always Lazy...😃
Loved it...😳...
LOL in balcony...😆😆😆
I liked wen dey got married instead of Rishu giving only mangalsutra to Madhu...😳
Madhu confess her Love to Rishu in such a beautiful way...😳
Continue soon Lazy...😃

Edited by manju21.k - 11 years ago