Rishbala SS: Lemons & Lemonade Part 5 & Epilogue on Page 26 (0

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Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Thanxx for pm
Awesome start
Love it
Continue soon

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mmradhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Congratulations for new ss... awesome start... loved it very much...
Beginning i am having confusion about madhu is talking about who... like that if trishna is not her sister then who is her sister... so madhu is loving rk... now also somewhere she is loving him... i am having sadness that rk loved madhu 's sister... i am happy that i came to know dips has married... rk has loved madhu but he don't know what he feel for madhu... pool scene rk burning in passion... loved the way rk is attracted by madhu... so madhu is challenging him... loved rishbala's irresistible passionate kiss... so both want each other... both are fearing about they changed their decision... starting is having this much passionate how it is going on... it is amazing what you have written... waiting for next part... continue soon
Thanks for pm
Take care

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Koel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Cn i get pm plz?? I read ur other story nd lovd it. Ds 1 s hatke too. Update asap. 😳

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

LOVELY STORY

AFTER SIX YEARS MADHU'S LOVE IS STILL THERE BUT NOW THERE IS ATTRACTION IN RISHAB

AND THEY BOTH COULDNT STAY APART ANY LONGER

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

where do you come up with these ideas?????

I Loved it.

I was confused at first as to who was who then it all made sense.

I really loved the story. In one chapter you provided a heart breaking past for Madhu. Poor girl. You could feel the love, the adoration and then the heartbreak of having your love choose your sister of all people!

I like this RK too. Yes he screwed up big time by choosing the wrong girl but he learned a hard lesson. I like how he 'knows' Madhu.

Long chapter - and for that THANK YOU.

(I got my computer back!!!! Happy happy!!!)

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Oh gosh !! Lazy it was awesome piece of writing !! You are such a brilliant writer👏..it was as though I was watching them in front of my eyes😉!!! The whole turn of events, their turmoil, confusion depicted beautifully😳!! They both are in love with each other since a long time, though Madhu's is totally apparent guess even RK harbors feelings for Madhu else there was no need for him to feel sad or worry about her !! In these 6 years, he has realized what he has lost😆!!! He is lucky though, he actually got a second chance to have the love of his life😉... Though he had rejected it initially!!

The pool scene was so tantalizing ☺️!! Oh Madhu...I was rofling when she was challenging him to having s*x with her...seriously shouldn't put SUCH thoughts when it comes to a man 😆!!!

Argh😡!! I hate cliff hanger!! Now you have got to continue soon😉 Lazy