Rishbala SS: Lemons & Lemonade Part 5 & Epilogue on Page 26 (0 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
Un Res😉..((( Am gonna be back soon with my comment to most my loveliest writer 😉))))
OMG !! Completely bowled over by the dedication Lazy ! Especially coming from the most beloved person and friend means a lot ☺️!! Uff am unable to contain my happiness Lazy heheh !! Trust me I have read many times, and every time I start reading it with a huge toothy grin 😃!! Love you my lovely Lazy 🤗!!thank you ji ;-)

Now coming to the update, uff !! Can I whisk away this RK please 😆!! He is irresistible and irreplaceable hehe!! Ah when he said "how I can chose Madhu, I belong to her "..it was like a awe moment for me !! He never ceases to amaze me Lazy..he is the best😳!! I hate dips 😡, how can a sister stoop so low !! She tried creating misunderstandings between these two, but I loved the way Madhu realised RK's innocence in the matter !! I am so happy these two chose to fight for each other to be with each other against all odds and emerged as winners 😃!!

Loved the love confession ☺️!! Thank god Madhu chose to come to Trishna's when she left her sis place else RK and Madhu would have never met!! Loved RK's wide-eyed happy expression on learning the GOODNEWS...Hmmph !! I was expecting a kiss, from to-be dad Kundra to to-be mom Kundra lol !! How I wish Mood should have swinged a lil later 😆😆 In this case right there !! For a change, I actually loved Madhu bullying RK 😆😆.. I know RK always controls Madhu ..for that matter it was a refreshing change, and he indirectly paid for all the fun he had made of her love years ago ( I as a girl, enjoyed this a lot.. Come on !! Its pay back time for Kundra lol)

Trish-Madhu-RK, the best team in the world hehe!! I just loved when these two came down holding hands while Trish following them, it looked beautiful !! The three musketeers lol!!

Loved the whole confrontation in the study !! Seriously Radhaji and padmini ji deserves awards for the best supporting role 😆!! Padmini's words on cancer surviver's changed attitude towards life was very insightful. Uff !! Mohanji's flustered comment as well as RK's unashamed declaration about unable to make pregnant Madhu any more pregnant was hilarious 😆!!

Midnight snack of soon to-be mr and mrs Kundra in the kitchen was delightfully delectable Lazy, as it brought back good old memories 😉!!


Epilogue

Oh god !! These two are cute to the core!! Premika..really I was laughing like hell !! I was imagining the scenario where daughter to have all grown up and in the college, her lecturer calling out for the attendance "premika" "present sir"😆!! Oh god !! Thank god Madhu stood for her (future)daughter !!

Hmm it made me feel lil suspicious about RK that he changed from 3 daughters to one daughter , is it really due to Madhu in labour or due to her mood swings lol !!

Oh Lazy...am missing my lemons RK so much !!
Muaah Lazy for creating such a fab world of RK Madhu with your innate writing skills !! It was like watching them right in front of my eyes☺️!! You are a blessed one Lazy 😃!!

How I wish, you soon pen down similar hot, passionate, irresistible RK paired with ever sweet Madhu ( like a sequel) in one of the next fic of yours !! I will be eagerly waiting
Am missing him terribly !!
Love you for the wonderful fic Lazy 🤗
Edited by aDarkAngel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant ending...I just loved this helpless RK handling madhu & her mood swings...& that dipali...urghh...she is so desperate & shameless...well I will miss this ff...plz do write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ending... I love updates filled with humor...
They make me smile 😊
Thanks for d update...
Hey pls update the other ss also... Scandalous marriage on
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome end
Just love this part so much
Finally rk confessed his love
N madhu realize n supported him against dips
That was superb
Really amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Was so desperately waiting for the next part and I must say it was worth the wait . Enjoyed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read last two parts as net was not working since last 3 days. What to say? I am speechless!!! Fabulous. Pl.start another ff very soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED THE STORY
AND IN THE END I WAS JUST LAUGHING
THEY BOTH WERE SO HILARIOUS
AND DIALI WAS SO DELUSIONAL

PLEASE GIVE ANOTHER STORY FULL OF LOVE AND LAUGHTER
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣 I am so glad Madhu got pregnant 🤣 loved Rishabh's condition 😆
super awesome always bickering 😆 Loved the FF ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
I thought I could not love Rishbala more, but with your stories, I fall in love with their love over and over again...this whole story was so very beautifully sewn together with little little happy moments...you are a great writer, and your consistency does make me believe you are the best romantic story writer in this MB forum...yet another...hats off to you dost...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ending..
thanks for pm dear..

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