New Rishbala FF: Love That Never Dies {Note on pg 5} 01/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1: Pyaar Kabhi Kam Nahin Hoti



"RK! Hurry up! I want to spend some time with you," Tamanna demanded as RK was getting ready for his shot. RK rolled his eyes and turned to his girlfriend, "Tamanna, you're shooting right next door. You're not going to another city and I'm not running away. Go for your shoot and I'll still be here when you come back," RK said calmly. "Or maybe not," he whispered to himself. Tamanna glared at him. "Fine. I'll Be back in a few hours," she grumbled and walked off. RK shook his head and continued with his shoot. The crew had just packed up when the door opened and Tamanna strutted through the door. She caught everyone's attention because there was no doubt that she was gorgeous but RK seemed completely unaffected. His eyes fixed to his cellphone and so they stayed even when Tamanna was talking to him. He knew very well why he was dating Tamanna and it wasn't because he loved her or even liked her. Yes she enhanced his image because she was a superstar too but it was more out of spite. He did it just to show everyone that no other girl really mattered to him and that he didn't even want to have anything to do with them. The girls he knew were a part of his past and that's where they would stay. In his past.
RK was lost in his thoughts when the studio door opened again. This time all his attention was on the figure walking through the door. Her long dark hair fell down to her waist and stood out against the red salwar kameez she was wearing. RK's eyes were transfixed on the woman. She looked around the set and not finding what she was looking for decided to turn back. It was then that she caught Tamanna's attention. "Well look at what the cat dragged in. Madhubala. Please do come in. I promise no one is going to eat you," Tamanna said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. Madhu rolled her eyes and started towards the part of the room where Tamanna and RK were sitting. Madhu smiled at Tamanna. "Look who left her broomstick at home today. Or maybe she forget on the set," Madhu said innocently. Tamanna always looked for an opportunity to taunt Madhu but Madhu always ignored her taunts and never let it get the better of her.
The whole time Madhu was standing in front of him RK's focus was on her. He couldn't understand why but despite telling himself and showing the world that Madhu meant nothing to him he still couldn't control his heart whenever she was around him or even near him. Madhu could feel someone's gaze on her and turned around. Her eyes met with a pair of chocolate brown eyes which she knew all too well yet she couldn't tear her eyes away from his. She could stay away from for as long as she liked and she could pretend that she hated him as much she liked but that wasn't going to change the fact that she still loved him despite everything he did to her. Despite all the pain he gave her she still loved him. Yes, there was a part of her that hated him for what he did and wants revenge for all the pain he caused her but somehow when he was in front of her that Madhu disappeared. They both shared an eyelock that seemed like it would last for eons until Madhu was pulled away.
"Are you crazy?! What are you doing here?" Khushi bellowed. Madhu's eyes widened with shock as she feigned fear. Khushi grabbed Madhu's shoulders and shook her. "Khushi stop. I came here to look for you! You said you'd be back in half an hour and you disappeared," Madhu explained. Khushi glared at her, grabbed her wrist and pulled her out of the studio. They got in Madhu's car and headed home. Khushi got out the car and slammed the door. "Khushi..." Madhu called after her as she stormed into the house and up to Madhu's bedroom. "I'm not talking to you," Khushi said angrily. "But Khushi..."Madhu tried explaining again. "I don't want to hear anything Madhu. I warned you so many times and told you not to go to that studio unless you are shooting there. But you just simply choose to ignore me. I know that you still have feelings for him and I know that you care about him but ask yourself. Where has he been for the past three years? The moment he became Superstar RK you never saw him again. He didn't care what happened to you. He didn't care whether you were alive or dead," Khushi said. Madhu was standing by the window. She heard everything that Khushi had said and knew that Khushi was right but whenever he was near her she lost control of her feelings and more especially her heart. "I know you're right Khushi but I don't know what happens to me whenever I see him or when he's near me," she explained. "Well that's just something I'm going to have to figure out then," Khushi replied as she walked towards the cupboard to borrow one of Madhu's sarees. "STOP!" Madhu shrieked. Khushi was taken aback. "I just need to borrow a saree. I'll bring it back. I promise," she said confused. "Wait I'll get for you," Madhu said as she walked to the cupboard. Khushi looked at Madhu suspiciously. "Madhu! Come down here please," Trishna called. Madhu gave Khushi a look that said don't touch' and ran downstairs. Khushi couldn't help but be nosy and wanted to know what her best friend was hiding from her. She opened the cupboard quickly and her eyes tore wide open when she saw it.
"Don't be a spoilsport RK," Aryan said as he threw the basketball at him. RK just looked at Aryan. "I thought you were my friend. But I guess not. Looks like I'm going to have to find someone else to help me then," Aryan said dejectedly. He turned around to look at RK who was day dreaming. Aryan threw another ball at RK this time hitting him on the head. "Ouch!" he cried. "Now that I have your attention are you going to tell me what's going on or am I going to have to find out by myself again?" Aryan questioned. RK looked at Aryan helplessly. Aryan sighed, "You saw her again today didn't you?" Aryan didn't even wait for the answer because he knew it was yes. "You made a mistake RK and you know it. You shouldn't have done what you did all those years ago. You're still suffering for it and had you listened to me or thought it through you wouldn't be in this situation right now," Aryan rationalized. "I know and I'm trying to forget. Anyway. You said you needed help?" RK asked. "Yeah, Khushi is having a party at her house tomorrow and I want you to come with because I need someone to talk to her on my behalf," Aryan pleaded. RK smirked. Of course his brother was good at everything but the one thing he couldn't do was woo a girl. He had always used RK as a go-between to get things started but of course those relationships never lasted long. Although somehow RK felt that this one was different. Probably because he still hadn't seen this girl and the fact that Aryan has lived for six months with just seeing her from a distance everyday. He hadn't even spoken to her yet but RK could tell that maybe she is the one. "Okay, fine. I'll come to the party provided Tamanna doesn't find out about it, won't be there and you won't invite her," RK said. "Done," Aryan agreed.

Chapter 2: Aa Zara {dedication to one year of Rishbala's Aa Zara dance}
He saw walk down the stairs in a black saree and was mesmerized. He moved away from Aryan and towards Madhu. He stopped at the bottom of the stairs and was met by Madhu who was shocked.
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I know it's a short update but I promise the next one will be longer and as you can see it's a special one so I will definitely make it interesting. It is also going to introduce a few of the other characters as well as a secret past that RK and Madhu are yet to find out about.
If you would like a PM for updates please buddy -aPMjustforu- or leave a message here. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kickass start -- Loved it

Do update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice start,
Plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INTERESTING START DEAR !!
DO PM ME...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear , lovely starting . waiting for rishbala dance
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's simply fab and really promising...to be honest the prologue was very confusing for me 😳..but the chapter 1 made the plot pretty captivating😉!! Count me in !! Now am really eager to read the next chapter even more so due to such tantalizing precap☺️... Do continue soon and will surely wait for the longer next update.
I somehow liked the subtle under current between RK and Madhu here and simply loved the way khushi was bossing around Madhu...argh Tamanna😡!! Guess I might not going to like her that much !! Oh am dying to know what has transpired between RK and Madhu to behave in this way😆!! Oops what did khushi find in the cupboard ?? Is it something belonging to RK 😉...oh pls continue soon so that my anxiety can get reduced by at least a bit lol!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice start
pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uh Uh...superb I just have one issue cum request...could you please change Tamanna's Pic...I mean I Love Sukirti and I can't see her as. a vamp...don't change it for others if u think u need her to keep the storyline goin on...jus Tell only.me to.imagine someone else' name to be imagined as Tamanna...coz if there anyone I love after Sanaya and Drashti then its Sukirti and I can't see her as a vamp...pretty please with a cherry on top...

Btw please do PM me whenever u update...will be waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the pm

nice start
tammanna is the possessive girlfriend while madhu is the ex
what did rk do to her

i didnt get the last part - who hasnt met whom or spoken to whom

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