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Thank u guys for like my ff.. Thnx for the feedback... Here is the first part.. Read n leave a comment..😊

PART 1
Its morning.. Rk in his room sleeping... Sikki came.. Remove the blanket on Rk's face...
Sikki(S): Dude wake up man.. Its 8pm.. We r already late nd u r still sleeping.. Wake up yaar..
Rk: Let me sleep sikki..
S: Dude we r almost getting late fr cllg.. Nd I tried ur phone for long time bt its switched off.. Why..
Rk: (In sleepy tone) Yeah I think its battery dead.. Dude let me sleep now.. Feeling very sleepy..
S: Ok.. U heard that naa.. Ghee sidhi ungli se naa nikle to ungli tedi karni padhti hai.. Wait...
Sikki came to the bed side table nd took the water jug..
S to himself: Now wait n watch..
Sikki poured out water on Rk's face.. At that moment Rk wake up...
Rk: Damn.. What r u doing man...
S: Wake up.. Nd get ready fast.. I ll wait for u...
Rk: R u frnd or enemy...
S: Enemy.. Now go Rk..
Rk went to his bathroom.. Sikki came downstairs... Radha ji was sitting there..
S: Aunty apne Rk ko bohot bigad diya hai..
R: Are sikki beta did he ever listen me?? Whtever he like just do it..
In Rk's room..
Rk came frm bathroom wearing blue jeans white shirt.. He came in front of mirror.. Set his hair...
Rk: (Shouts) Munna.. Patil..
No one came in his room...
Rk: Munna.. Patil.. Where r u idiots..
At downstairs...
R: Today they r gone..
S: Me too thinking the same aunty...
In Rk's room...
One servant came with coffee...
Rk: (Angrily) U idiot where were u?? 😡
Servant: Sorry chief... Chief ur coffee...
Rk took the cup nd take a sip... he fumes nd throw the coffee on servants face nd throw the cup on the floor...
Rk: Wht is this.. Did u know I never like cold coffee..
S: Sorry chief.. Never happen next time...
Rk: Thats better for u...
Rk left frm there.. He came downstairs...
S: If u r ready then shall we go..
Rk: Yeah dude...
S: Bye aunty..
R: Bye beta...
On the road..
Rk drive the car... Sikki sat next to him...
S: Dude why r the girls of Excell college just drool on u yaar.. No one never look at me..
Rk laughed...
Rk: I m the super cool dude.. I m Handsome dashing gud looking .. Thts why I m prince charming of Excel college...
S: Jo bhi ho jaye... Khud ki tarif karna nhi chorega..
Rk drive the car... There is a big hole on the road nd there was muddy water.. At this place a girl was walking.. Rk could nt notice the hole nd the car's wheel fall on the hole... And the muddy water splashed on the girl's dress... Rk look that in his car's mirror nd he laughed..
S: What happen dude..
Rk: Nthng.. Forget it..
Suddenly sikki heard a girl's voice frm behind.. He look behind.. Rk also saw frm mirror... The girl running behind their car..
The girl: wait.. Wait.. Stop the car...
Rk stop the car.. The girl came near the car.. .
The girl: Out.. I said out...
Rk bring out the window glass..
Rk: Do u say me??
The girl: Yes u.. Now out..
Rk got down frm the car...
Rk: What???
The girl: R u blind???
Rk: What???
The girl: Yeah i think u r blind.. Thts why u didnt see the big hole on the road.. . Ye tumhari kharidi hui road nhi hai jo bina dekhe aise car chala rahe ho... If it hurts me then..
Rk: Bt it wont...
The girl: Yes. Bt look wht happen with me only for u..
Rk look at her dress n laughed.. Sikki got down frm the car.. Nd came near Rk's side..
The girl: Awww U r laughing... Did u know how much its expensive for me.. This dress gifted by my dad...
Rk: Is it expensive??Ok wait..
Rk turned out his purse... Nd turned out some money nd give the money to the girl...
Rk: Take this.. I hope now u can buy more expensive dress for urself..
The girl look at him angrily... She take the money..
Rk: (with attutude) I know u ll take this...
The girl: Aaahh.. Dnt u think that I take this to buy my dress ..
Rk raised his eyebrow...
The girl: I ll return u the money with interest.. We will meet again..
Rk: Ahaaan...Sure..
The girl left..
S: Dude wht happen yaar..
Rk: Nthng yaar.. Lets go for cllg.. The girls r waiting fr me..
S: Yeah yeah.. All r waiting fr u.. Kash someone waiting fr me too..
Rk: Hey dude there is someone who waiting for u...
S: Who...
Rk: Ruhi..
S: Shut up dude.. Oh god plzz dnt see her face at first mrng...
Rk laughed... They both sat on car nd left...
(Hope u all like it.. Next update very soon.. Leave a comment)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi ya, nice start.. Continue soon and pm me.. I've buddy you
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nice update dear...
thanx for pm😊
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lovely update👏 please pm me when ever you update
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nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start !please continue soon & pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...amazing start...👏👏
now I am waiting for next one...it's your fault because update was too good and u left it on very crucial point..
now I am gonna wondering n wondering what will happen next??!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update dear...😊😊
So, they are gonna meet again... Hmmm... interesting... Now you made me curious !!! 😊

Waiting for their amazing meet...

Thanks for the PM..

Update soon !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful start
Rk n his charm r just ahaannn
Continue soon
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Nice update.. 👏 Good start.
If possible please stick to english... I am very weak in hindi😭

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