Rishbala SS: Marriage Trilogy 1: The Last Minute Groom [Complete Pg15] - Page 3

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

awesome start...loved it...thank youand waiting for the other 2 parts

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Un Res😆

Awesome start Lazy!! My heart flutters with joy when I get any pm from you..like i have said million times, simply love your fics dear😉!! omg!!! that is so very sweet of you... love you🤗

Oh God!! Bride faints on their first night. LOL... i had no idea how else to make her react😆 I dunno I loved this Rishabh..the way he said..."my wife..." Ooh !! I was just bowled over!!! he is going to be very possessive no nonsense guy. Hope Madhu recovers soon to realise that she is actually lucky to have Rishabh as her hubby rather that Sultan😡 she is going to realize it very soon😛... But initially when i read that groom has left to become an actor, I thought its RK as the original groom..uff!! You got me there Lazy..brilliant twist😉 as in making sultan an aspiring actor hehe!! HAHAHAHAHA that was the whole idea😉😆😆😆😆 so glad u fell for it😆😆😆😆Now Pls continue soon 😊 will update it a bit

Just missed the first spot by few seconds because of Sonnal lol!!!

No worries am second 🥳 😉 Congratulations hun... u were just a second late🤗😃😃😃

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Awesome Part 😳

Originally posted by: Abhayangel

Awesome... Update soon...

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

superb story lazy 😃thank you so much hun thanks alot for the pm 😊 no probs please update the next part soon & pm me 😳 will do hun😊

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

I'm happy that Rishabh married Madhu. the Marriage Trilogy all will begin with them married😛
Waiting for the story to proceed will update it soon😊

Originally posted by: kg15

Again something different to read...!!!

Superb concept and Superb update...👍🏼
thank you so so much hun😊

The concept was really catchy... 👍🏼
so glad u found it interesting hun

I liked the fact that you maintained the stature of Sultan... 😆 😆
hahahahaha

I have one very important question to you lazy, why do you always involve that non- existent creature in our Rishbala's story...??? He always create a mess in their lives...

But the hidden fact is that I like his existence in your story as his presence increases more passion to the story and when our our love birds' Ishq wins over him, I really feel happy... Hehe... Silly me.. 😆😆😆
hahahaha he is the perfect third angle to Rishbala or so i feel... that is why😳😆😆

The entire update was fantastic dear... 😃 thank you so much hun... hope u like the next one

Waiting for the Part 2... Don't get LAZY in updating it... Just kidding... 😆😆
hahahahaha the part 2 is ready... but wonderful and perfect updates are not yet ready.. will try not to get lazy😳😆

Originally posted by: akankshasehgal

nice start thanx hun ...so tey got married yes.. the marriage trilogy all will begin with their wedding😛...wat does rk do?family business.. they are very rich waiting for next will update it shortly.

Originally posted by: flowing_river

i like ur concept...

hehe..it's ulta from usual track mostly happening in usual ffs...👍🏼
hahahaha i thought everyone wud find the track usual... so glad u don't... thank you😊

do continue...😊 will update shortly

Originally posted by: Shree.123

Awesome start 😳 thank you so much hun😊

Sultan did something good. 😆 hope he doesn't return hahahaha he will return hun

But I would love to see what he fells when return & see that RK and Madhu are happily married and loves each other 😉 i am not very sure... he won't be happy defo!😉

So RK and Madhu are married. Hope She will soon understand that Rishab is better than that Sultan 😛 she is going to understand very soon😃

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366

sorry lazy for late comment no probs hun😊.mera lappy karab ho gaya.awww... i feel as if my life has come to a stand still if my lappy stops working awesome start thanks hun .. continue dear😊 will update soon

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Really nice start. Pls continue soon

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! I loved it...I hope sultan doesnot return until Rishbala are madly in love with each other...😊

Originally posted by: Clara20

awesome start lazy...am happy sultan leaved last min...and madhu married to RK...waiting for next

Originally posted by: nandininandu

Beautiful Update...story is very intresting thank you so much hun
Please continue soon will update in a bit

Originally posted by: cool_sri

awesome start...interesting story thank you so much hun..thank god that sultan left at the start itself..no more of him.. he is going to come back hun😊

hope madhu is fine...of course RK is there to take care of her... she is going to be fine as she is with RK😉

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

nice..

Originally posted by: Janani24

awesome update lazy👏 thank you so much hun😊n thank god sullu ran away before mrg else think abt the status of madhu😲 hahahahahaha yeah true n when rishab is there no one needs to fear😛 yes... he is going to be her hero soon😉continue soon n i am eagerly waiting for madhu's decision n reaction😊 will update it soon... hope you will like the remaining story😃

Originally posted by: anjali0111

superb start
nice story
thank you so much hun
add me in the pm list
will do😊

Originally posted by: livelyrose90

glad u started new story so glad u enjoy my stories☺️ ...omg sultan ran away🥳LOL yeah!

i have been always in love with rk of your stories and this one is no exception awww... thank you so much hun😛😛😛... he took stand when needed and is so much concerned about her already yes.. he is already her "husband"

well i can see a great story ahead hope u will like the story i have planned ahead😊

thnx 4 pm no probs😊

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Loved the update.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Very nice update,dear.

Originally posted by: punam2712

AWESOME START thank you so much hun

TURN IT INTO AN FF - IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL actually it was supposed to be a one shot, but then it was becoming very long so decided to split it.. it will so far have 4 parts😊

Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

lovely update, waiting for the next part :)

Originally posted by: ship13

Beautiful start. :)

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

wow, you are on a roll aren't you?? This is the third story of yours that I have come across tonight!!!! hehehehe i get too many ideas at a time, and i HAVE to write it down to get it out of my system😆😆 Very happy. so glad u enjoy my stories😊

I have to say, this is a different concept. The Last Minute Groom?? i thought everyone wud think the concept very common thanks to kasam se and all😉😆😆😆 so glad u guys find it different

You had me worried at first as the 'groom' left for a career in Bollywood so I was very confused. hahahaha tht was the whole idea... then Sultan had to leave and i didn't want any other girl involved so decided movie career only😉😆😆😆

But you got RK and Madhu married!!!!! the marriage trilogy will have them married in the first part itself😊 Can't wait for the next part. will be updating it in a bit😛

By the way, you are a very good writer! I do not get bored at all in any of your stories!! 👏 thank you so so much hun... it means a lot to me😊

Originally posted by: pantil

Awesome start

Originally posted by: pantil

Waiting for next