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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: titli4love

OMG!! Edu that was damn hawtt!!!☺️☺️ really u wrote a 18+ stuff for the 1st time n it was sooo...my god!! Plz continue soon..
The description u gave..uff damn damn hot n sexy!😉

hehehehehe!!
thnk u soo soo much!!
waiting ffor ur cmmnt since a long time!!
u really think so????
thnk u once again!!!!
ya!! first time and it turned out like this!!
and i'm glad wth the response i got u knw?
hehehhehehehe!!
hot and sexy description haan??
hahahaha!!
ur just reallly a sr queen!
not like u but wrote sunthing wat i got in that time!!
will updt soon and will pm u!!
keep reading!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmradhu

Read 4 chapters in one go... it was really marvelous...
Rishbala moments are amazing... loved the way rishbala fights... the way rishbala's romance... the way you written this story... waiting for the next part... continue soon
Take care

hey!!
glad u liked it that much!!
hmmm!! evry moment of then together is always amazingg!!
(filmy)
hahahahahaha!!
they are tom and jerry!!
hmmm!!
romance bhi toh hai!! hahaha!!
hey!!
my writing style??
u like that!!
well glad to knw that!!
will updt soon and will pm u!!
glad u liked it and read all the chapters in one go!!
thnk u soo much dear!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
aut thoda sabr!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_maaneet


kar tha raho nahi hoga

nehaji!!
aisa kuch nahi hai!
mein updt kar dunga!
and that's final!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishabala_luv


nehaji!!
aisa kuch nahi hai!
mein updt kar dunga!
and that's final!!


kab next year 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
hanji!!!!
aapne sahi guess kiya!!
actually!!!
1 year!! postpne karna chahtha hun!!
hw abt 2 yrs ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnk u soo much dear!!
glad u liked it!!
will updt soon !!
keep reading!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishabala_luv

thnk u soo much dear!!
glad u liked it!!
will updt soon !!
keep reading!!

Ya plz upd soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 5

night:
drawing room:

bittuji: bhabhiji ko pata hai????
rk: haan!! woh bewkoof thodi na hai!! no problem!! humara plan madhu ko patane ke liye nahi hai na!! maa maan gayi!! that's great!!
bittuji: chief!!! lekin!!! bhabhiji ko kaise pata chala!!
rk: rk ki biwi hai bittuji!!! (smirk)

FLASHBACK:
rk anger raged like a bull and he got out of the room and he found radha cuming with deepali behind her who is having a wicked smile!!! he's sure she's gonna ask abt him and madhu!!wat happened btwn them!
so he called bittuji frm his phone!!!
bittuji: cheif??? aapne abhi?
rk: kuch mat kahiye !! mujhe aapko kuch kehna hai!! meri script yaad hai na!!! humne jo plan kiya ab hum woh karenge!!!
bittuji: ji cheif!!
rk: idiot!!
bittuji: cheif?? (confused)
rk: stupid!! akal less!! rascal!!
bittuji: cheif!! aap yeh sab kyun keh rahe hai?? mane kya kar diya ki aap aise gaali
rk: apne galat idea diya bittuji!! yeh ditching idea bohoth bakwaas idea ever!!
bittuji: par maine yeh sab aapke frustation door karne ke liye hi toh kaha tha cheif!!
rk; par meine aapko kaha ki mein madhu ko pyaar kartha hun aur usse dukh nahi dena chahtha!!
bittuji: pa cheif!! bhabhji ke saath aage badne ke liye aapko toh apne frustation door karna hoga na!! aapka idea tha bhabhiji ko dukh dena!! haan !! jaanth hun aapke pyaar hone se pehla ka tha!! par aap confused the na!! isiliye socha ki aap bhabiji ko plan ko follow karte hue ditch karenge!! phir 2 din ke baad usse jaake maafi maangenge!!
rk: peli baar zindagi mein khud ka dhimaag nahi use kiya! aur aapka sahara liya!! isiliye yeh sab hua!! maine aise blindly aapko kaise follow kiya bittuji!!
bittuji: ab kya hua cheif??
rk: madhu naaaz hai mujhse!! aapki yeh faltu idea ke liye thanx!
bittuji: itni si baat?? bas thoda time dijiye cheif!! 2 hafte mein sab teekh hojaayega!!
rk: dho hafte??? (shocked so shouted)
bittuji: haan!! kya hua ?
rk: aap married nahi hai isiliye nahi jaanthe ki iss waqt mein kaise mehsoos kar raha hun!! phone rakhiye!!!!
and banged his phone to his head!!
he saw radha and deepali hiding behind the curtains!!! radha is smiling while deepali had an irritating look on her face!!
he smiled and went back to room!!!
FLASHBACK END
rk: aaj subah anjaane mein maine madhu par chillaya!! i went to say sorry par madhu ne bina koi jijak mere paas aake poochi!! yeh tum aur bittuji milke aur kisko bewkoof bana rahe hai!!
bittuji laughed!!
bittuji: bhabhiji bhi na!! bohoth smart hai!!
rk: hmmm!! woh toh hai!!
bittuji: cheif!! aise time mein bhabhiji par chillana teekh nahi hai!!
rk: kya????
bittuji: haan!! pregnency time mein thoda khayaal rakhna chahiye!!! so bhabiji se softly behave kare toh teekh rahega!!!
rk: aapko yeh sab kaise pata???
bittuji: chief aapke liye ek book pad raha hun taaki aapko kuch kaam aa saku!! aap toh busy ho!!
rk got up!!
rk: ek aap hi toh hai jo mujhe poori tarah se samajhthe hai bittuji!!
bittuji: chief!! (smile)
and rk moved to the door wen is stopped by bittuji's voice!!
bittuji: chief!! abhi producer ke saath meeting hai!!!
rk: mujhe madhu ke saath hospital jaana hai!!
bittuji: par chief!!
rk: bittuji~!!!!! nthng is beyong madhu and my baby!! uss producer ko itna jaldi hai toh kehdijiye ki mein uska film nahi karnewala!!
bittuji: chief!!!!
and rk went away frm their to his madhu!! his room!!!!
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room:
he came inside talking in his phone and wat he saw made him lost completely!!!!!
an angel sleeping!!!
his madhu sleeping!!
his legs automatically made their way towads her!!!
The lines of care and toil had smoothed and virtually disappeared, the crows feet round her eyes now but a memory. Eyelids closed against the dim light of dawn and her breathing deep and relaxed, all the muscles in her face and body were totally at peace, like a baby in its' first throes of slumber and before Rk kicked in. Not a twitch, not a spasm, barely any movement of her breasts rising and falling with each intake of air such was the depth of her oblivion. This was a body totally at peace, at rest, at one with itself, rejuvenating the mind and muscles before the onset of yet another day of turmoil.
The innocence showed on her sleeping face, the peaceful and serene dreams blocking out the dangers of the outside. The soft breathing making the world seem to stand still.
At once he found himself smiling looking at her. Making note of her evry moment.
rk: rk!!!!!! achaanak tumhe kya hogaya?? kahi pyaar mein toh nahi padne wale ho!!!
he smiled and went to wake her up!!!

rk: madhu!!!!!!! uto!! hospital jaana hai!!
madhu didn't evn moved!!!
rk: madhu!!!!!!
she didn't!!!!
rk: biwi!!!!!!!
this time madhu stirred!!!!!
rk: aise nahi!!
and he lied beside her!!!!
rk: madhu uto!! (he said softly)
madhu smiled in her sleep and said!!
madhu: plz rk!! sone dho!!!!
rk: madhu hume hospital jaana hai!!
madhu: abhi nahI!! mein thodi der sona chahthi hun!!
rk: madhu!!!!!
she unwillingly got up and went straight to dressing room!!!!!
he laughed luking at her childishness!!!

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"WHITE!! WHITE !!! WHITE!!!
jaha bhi dekho!! white! waha bhi dekho!!!! white!! nurses white!! doctors white!! walls white!!! urghhh!! i hate this white!!
wait wait!! white is supposed to be my favourite colour!!
yuck!! i hate this place!! mein ghar kab jaa sakthi hun!! aur toh aur ab tak doctor se mili tak nahi!! she's waiting for bloddy 1 and a half minute here!! and rk didn't came yet!!!!
100 YEARS!!
their he is!!
he's luking soo sexy wth that smirk on his face wth his glares!!! bodyguards stopping the female fans who r busy shouting and asking for a date!!!
though she did felt jealous!!! she strted to observe his each and evry moment!!
His arms swayed, simultaneously, back and forth, as his stilt-like legs seemed to be carrying him from point A to point B; mechanically in motion one leg thrust forward as the other tried, rhythmically, to catch up.
madhu: wait wait!! mein aise kyun soch rahi hun!! am i again falling for his charm?? no madhu!! no way!!!
she looked down and thought!!! and came out frm her thoughts with his unusuall act!!!!
A LINGERING LIP KISS!!!!
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definition: This is a closed mouth kiss that lasts for more than 20 seconds. The tongue is not involved in this kiss. Lingering lip kisses involve the lips only. This kiss serves as an indication of deep love.
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her eyes popped as well as othrs!!!! did he jst kissed her!!! in public???? urghhh!! it didn't last till 20 seconds!!!!! he kissed her!! not she!! anyways!! kya fark padtha hai??? she is in his hold being kissed by the superstar!! she didn't struggle as it luks odd!! but she too didn't wanted it but enjoyed it as the female girls are burning wth jealousy!!!
finally he parted away frm her!!
their forheads touching!!
rk: zyada wait toh nahi karwaaya??? (husky)
she cud barely say anything rather than nodding her head as noo!!
he smiled seeing the effect he had on her and took her to the cabin!!!!

nurse: dr will be here in another 2 mins!!! plz wait!!!
rk: sure!!
nurse: sir!!! autograph!!!
he smirked and gave her autograh on her hand!!!
she blushed and went away!!
madhu: did u just kissed me over their???
rk: haa!!! toh:??
madhu: hw cud u!!
rk came front in a jerk and slammed his lips on hers!! and went back!!
rk: aise!!
madhu: I HATE PDA RK!! and hw dare u kissed me???
rk: tum meri biwi ho!! so i can kiss u anytime okay?? (attitude)
madhu: par hum dono ke beeche kuch jhagda ho raha hai! and maine tumhe abhi tak maaf nahi kiya!! so stop ur bloddy nonsense!!
rk: ahaan!!! roz roz phirse jungli billi bante jaa rahi ho??? gud!! I... Like it...
madhu: tum!!!! (pointing finger towards him)
rk: accha ek baat bataao!! (distracting) baby girl ya baby boy??
madhu: hmmm??? haan!! boy ho toh bilkul tere jaise hoga!! isiliye i want a girl!! atleast tumhari tarah boring aur angry wala!!
rk: ohho biwi!! ek min ruko!! meri tarah matlab?? ofcorse baby boy hi hoga!! and for ur kind information!! i'm not boring!!!
madhu: girl!!
rk: boy!!
madhu: girl!!
rk: boy!!
madhu: girl!! (she shouted)
rk: boy!! (he too shouted)
" AHHU!!!!!"
they both stopped their cat fight and luked towards the door!!

The gynaecologist, Dr . Mishra, was a woman in her fifties , old friend of radha and the one who guided radha in her pregnancy time!! so radha recommanded dr mishra!!
she's one of the most reputed doctors in the city. she smiled warmly at madhu and rk.
dr: radha kaisi hai rk???
rk: maa teekh hai aunty!!
dr: gud!!!
and hse just kept asking questions , nodding and noting down something n her notepad!! before sending madhu for standard tests!! the report wud not be out before the next day , but once the checkup was done, the doctor went through madhu's basic health status!!
dr: 22 yrs old!!!!!
madhu: actually!! 23!! my B'day is in 2 months!!
dr: okay!! 23 yrs!! weight 50 kgs?????
madhu: haan!! mujhe laga ki 50 teekh rahegi!! not overweight!! not undrweight!! optimum!!
dr: haan!! lekin ek ladki ke liye!! maa ke liye nahi!! u'll have all kind of hormonal changes and u'll gain weight too!! as ur pregnant u have to be prepared for all these things!!
madhu: yes doctor!! (nodded)
dr had a confused expression!!
dr: is their an adult i can to to?? aap dono confused ho shaayadh!
rk: no aunty!! aapko jo kuch bhi kehna hai mujhe keh dijiye!! i'll take care of her in this!
madhu luked at him!!
and dr explained evrything to both of them!!
rk: wen can we see the sonogram??
dr: hmmm!! abhi nahi!! aftr 2 more weeks!!
rk: okay!! i'll wait!!
madhu is completely enjoying this!!! he taking care of her?? and loves their baby that much??
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car:
he said the driver to take leave and only they both r their in the car!!!!
madhu is thoroughly smiling!!!!
rk: itni acchi mood mein kyun ho???
madhu: kuch nahi!!
rk: well!! i can see jealousy in ur eyes wen my fans are drooling over me?
madhu: me?? no ways!! ur assuming alot!!
rk: so kya decide kiya?? baby girl?? ya baby boy??
madhu: mujhe argeu karne ki takat nahi hai!! woh baad mein dekhenge!!
he stopped the car and turned towards her!!
rk: ur okay rite?? r u feeling uneasy?? vomiting sensation!! any aches??
madhu is confused and luking at him!!
rk: kuch ho raha hai??? bataao!!!
madhu: itna overreact kyun kar rahe ho??
he sighed and turned!! strted the car again!!

their moving wen madhu's eyes caught sumthing special!! her fav!!
madhu: rk rk!! stop the car!!!
rk: biwi kya hai??
madhu: plz stop the car!!
rk: haan!! okay okay!! chill!!
and he stopped!!!
rk: wat happened??? vomiting??
madhu: no!! pani puri!!
rk: wat?????
madhu: my fav!! plz!! i want it!!
rk: ur mad!! tum pregnant ho aur tum??? nahi!! tum nhi kha sakthi!!
madhu: rk plz!! i'm craving for it frm 1 year!!
rk: kya?????
madhu: haan!! jabse shaadi hui tabse khaane ka mann kar raha hai par tum toh maante hi nahi!! plz!! abhi yaha aaye hai toh thoda sa khaa lete hai!! (she said while removing the seat belt)
he caught her hand and strted the car!! and while driving!!
madhu: rk plz!!
rk: no madhu!! acidity ya indigestion hojaayega toh?? no!! i can't take any risk!
madhu: rk plz!! sirf ek!! baaki sab tum khaalo!! but plz!! atleast one!!
he felt his desires to eat pani poori cuming out!! it's his fav too!! but he stopped eating aftr cuming to industry!!
rk: biwi!! mein jo keh raha hun woh follow karo!!
madhu: are?? yeh tum kya kar rahe ho??
rk: apna pati dharm nibhaa raha hun!!
madhu: yeh kaisi dharam hai?? patni pehli baar apni mooh kholke kuch maangi toh saaf saaf mana kar dena???
rk: haan!!
madhu: i want paani poori!!
rk: i want u!!! kya tum maanogI???
madhu became silent!!
rk: kabhi kabhi compromise karna padtha hai!! undrstnd madhu!! i promise!! delivery ke baad mein khud tumhe yaha leke aaunga!! tab jitna mann chahe utna khaalo!!
madhu: kyun???? moti hojaaungi toh tum kisi aur ke saath set hojaaoge rite??
he sighed and grintted his teeth!! "yeh mood swings"
he turned towards her!!
rk: TUM KYA CHAHTHE HO?? (he shouted)
madhu: PAANI POORI!! (shee too shouted)
rk: NAHI MILEGA!!! (he shouted)
madhu: NAHI MILEGA??? (SHE SHOUTED WHILE ASKING)
rk: NAHI!!!!!! (u knw)
they both luked at eachothr angryly and turned their head to either side!!

FINALLY NOO PANI POORI AND THEY STRAIGHT AWAY WENT TO RK MANSION

ufff!! longest updte i evr wrote!! i'll be updating afte 1 week or more!! i don't knw!! hope u ppl liked it and plz do leave ur valuable cmmnts!!!
plz don't be angry that updt was late or will be late!! plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update..like pda ..continue soon and thanxx for pm

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