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ShinSegi

@Befikre

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Thanks guys.

Can anyone do the honours of sending it to the CVs?🤣

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awsm
seriously man...rishbala revenge track (again) will be much more better than that sadakchap stalker track
show main kab marega wo

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ShinSegi

@Befikre

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -kitty-
Awsm
seriously man...rishbala revenge track (again) will be much more better than that sadakchap stalker track
show main kab marega wo

I wish he dies soon😆

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BeautyForAshes

@BeautyForAshes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: _Mojo.Jojo_
"What happened to Sultan? The person with me?"

"He died on the spot. I am sorry."

Chakku awesome OS👏 ... loved it ⭐️ ... but very painful... just for the sake of seeing her as a heroine i don want to witness the divorce drama 😭

the one thing that captured me in the whole thing was the one quoted above ...specially "on the spot death " 😆 😆

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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Chakku!

amazing OS!

Yeah I too want story to proceed like this n If they show leap after Madhu n RK divorce n skipping tht Sullu part will be amazing!

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow awesome os yaar patha nahi humare forum writers story actual story se jyada interesting and logical hai.

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

LOVELY OS - HOPE THIS HAPPENS EXCEPT MADHU GOING WITH SULTAN

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

CHAKKU! I didn't know you wrote! I'm excited to read this!

Suddenly her focus shifted to the TV where she saw HIM, her RK. He had changed. His eyes no more had the same warmth they used to have. His eyes looked cold and blank. He had stopped giving his signature smirk. His cheeks became flat and those dimples had just vanished completely for he had stopped smiling.

My heart's breaking! :(

RK's movie names are always ironic. I wouldn't be surprised if his next movie is called that. 😆

"When there's no love left in a relationship, it is better to separate. If there was and is love in that relationship, no matter what, you can never separate from your beloved. Love never dies, it is the relationship which dies"

That sounds like what Madhu said when reporters asked her about the whole un-wedding ordeal! I like the way you had RK answer that Chakku!

SULTAN DIED. YES! I mean, finally.

But ah...RK's been alone for 6 months?! :(

I wonder who had her admitted...

AW I knew it. I knew he thought she was his on-screen heroine.

Omg...hospitalization for 3 months...they were both in the hospital...

You totally followed the show's first promos! Saying how Madhu gets forced into Bollywood due to RK. Good job!! 👏

LOVE how you brought in the heroine track AND brought back our RK in the same OS! AAH! Love this!

I was going to write an OS on their seperation as well but it wouldn't have been anything like this! This was spectacular Chakku! Loved it! And your writing is amazing! I'm glad I caught this. 👏

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago