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Posted: 12 years ago
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this time its me akku nice pic n nice update loved it
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BHOPAL

(hotel - aman)

Madhu - This is our last hope else we will not get any room in this big city

Mukund - What a crisis didu why I came with you now I have to live in footpath

Madhu - You were so happy coming with me

Mukund - Stop it didu

Madhu - No no you are on 11th and what atleat taler than me

Mukund - Stop embarrassing me please

Madhu - Lets enter

Receptionist - Hello mam how can I help you??

Madhu - We want room for one day

Receptionist - Sorry mam we are full

Madhu - Atleast one we wander whole city please

Receptionist - Sorry mam cant help you we are already full

"Madhu" a voice called

(madhu turns its r.k.)

Madhu - rishu wow u here

R.k. - ya amazed u too here

Madhu - I got center here

R.k. - Ya me too

Madhu - mukku I told you na I met him in delhi

Mukund - I said na its destiny

Madhu - What

Mukund - Nothing hi rishu bhaiya

R.k. - Hello...

Mukund - Mukund

R.k. - Ya hello mukund Well madhu u r in same hotel

Madhu - No actually I m not getting any hotel yaar foothpath days

R.k. - Why I m here if u don't mind u can live in my room for the day

Madhu - No no rishu don't bother we will manage

Mukund - Didu come with me please

Madhu - What

Mukund - If he is asking lets share the room we are not taking his pity we will pay half

Madhu - What nonsense are u saying we don't know anything about him

Mukund - U met him in delhi now here he is you friend and its better than staying in footpath

Madhu - Mukku but...

R.k. - I know you would be in delima but I promise u will don't face any problem we will read together then tomorrow exam then bye bye I will be yours 5_2 day frien

Mukund - Didu please

Madhu - okay

HOTEL ROOM

Madhu - So all prepared??

R.k. - Ya but l'll problem in organic chemistry

Madhu - Na I love organic but inorganic is what is tough for me

R.k. - Inorganic anyways how was the days??

Madhu - Which

R.k. - After delhi

Madhu - Quite normal and yours something different

R.k. - No it was normal too

Madhu - Why asked this question

R.k. - As genral to start conversation

Madhu - Its time to stop conversation lets sleep

R.k. - Ya u sleep in bed I will sleep in couch

Madhu - No rishu its your room u sleep in bed I will be in couch

R.k. - No madhu go to bed with mukku I will manage in couch

Madhu - No you go to bed

R.k. - No you

Madhu - No you

(R.K. takes pillow and goes to couch and then said)

R.k. - Now you decide where to go

Madhu - Good night

R.k. - Good night

(mid night r.k. wakes up and watches madhu's face her hair drolling into her cheek r.k. just watches this all as if background singing - KITNA KUCH KEHNA HAI PHIR BHI HAI DIL MEIN SAWAL KAE SAPNO MEIN JO ROZ KAHA HAI WO PHIR SE KAHU YA NAHI...)

(its morning now both wishes best of luck to each other and headed towards their exam centers after exam madhu comes back to room)

Madhu - Where's rishu

Mukund - I don't know I just returned from DB MOLLL

Madhu - Where

Mukund - Nothing yaar its...

Madhu - U na stop behaving as kid its unknown city

Mukund - Okay and I don't know where's rishu

Madhu - Fine just packup now we have to go to indore for taking flight I don't know where this guy goes

Mukund - Leave a note to him that we are leaving

Madhu - No I want to meet him before leaving

Mukund - Why

Madhu - I don't know why



...😊...

WHERE IS R.K. IF HE IS OFF TO PUNJAB WITHOUT TELLING MADHU OR SOMETHING ELSE SEE YOU TOMMORROW

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...hope both wl nt leave place before meeting each other...
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RECEPTION

Receptionist -Thanks for visiting mam come again please

Madhu - Ya do you know where my friend gone

Receptionist -Ya mam he came here actually I m afraid

Madhu - Afraid for what

Receptionist -He has book written sucide and was asking me for the tallest building of Bhopal

Madhu - What do you mean

Receptionist -Mam actually I m not sure but may be something went wrong with him in exams and he just

Madhu - Stop it

Receptionist -No mam I was just saying u coz u are his friend and I m afraid

Madhu - Which building u suggested to him for sucide

Receptionist -Mam that db moll

Mukund - What now leave to indore na

Madhu - How can I leave when someone is there who need me

Mukund - Stop it didu he will be all right we miss our flight its in new Bhopal and we are in old bhopal

Madhu - Muuku he is my friend 7 dino ka hua toh kya hua I am going okay

Mukund - I m waiting here go wherever you want

BUILDING TERRACE

(R.K. standing near edge madhu came shouting)

Madhu -Rishu, rishu are you mad what are you doing

R.k. - What

Madhu -This is not solution of anything you are screwing your life

R.k. - What happen

Madhu -To hell with you rishu why are you commiting sucide

R.k. - Who Is suciding

Madhu -You

R.k. - Me really I am commiting sucide and I even don't know

Madhu -What

R.k. - Ya

Madhu -But receptionise... nyways what are you doing here with this sucide novel

R.k. - AHH this my brother asked me to take it

Madhu -And what u r doing here

R.k. - Cant see you going

Madhu -What

R.k. - To see beauty of wheather

Madhu -Reaaly

R.k. - Haan

Madhu -And I thought

R.k. - And u thought I am afraid of life

(both laughs and takes auto and go to hotel where mukund is sitting)

Madhu -Lets go now

Mukund - Where

Madhu -Indore

Mukund - Didu our flight is at 5 and its 4 now we can never reach indore on time

Madhu -Oh no its coz of that receptionist

Mukund - Ahh rishu u didn't sucide

R.k. - Well you thought so

Mukund - Never didu was worried

Madhu -Now what to do

Mukund - When your flight

R.k. - Its train 8 at night

Mukund - So u would go now

R.k. - No I will cancel my ticket and go with you

Madhu -Where

R.k. - To indore and I will take any trAin from there

Madhu -Ooo so sweet of you

R.k. - So lets go now

(trio goes to bus stand and takes but for indore sseing madhu 3 goons also enters in bus)


...😊...

TO INDORE NOW BUT WHATS WORK OF GOON HERE IF THEY WILL ADD SOMETHING TO THIS YES NO STORY SEE NEXT WEEK

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Clara20

nice update...hope both wl nt leave place before meeting each other...


LOOK THEY DIDNT😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
THANXX KEEP READING😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
you cant live without adding goons to your story anyways nice story and this time its me to comment first YAY😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's lovely!! Read in one go and loved it instantly!! You have mentioned Karnataka hehe! Are from Karnataka by any chance ...Becoz am from Bangalore lol!!! Yeah yeah I know you have even mentioned indore and Bhopal..I asked because found it interesting hehe!!
Coming to the story, it's nice..though feel bad for rishbh...still like their friendship and reading that Mukund is her younger brother, I could not stop rofling !!
I will wait till Saturday, for ur next update captain Jack Sparrow 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both the updates were mindblowing...luvd the confusion between Madhu and Rishab regarding suicide...waiting 4 d next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Nice update...lol the receptionist..the suicide thing was funny...

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