SS: Tum Hi Ho part 7A updated pg19 23rd sept - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@cuterishbala: Nyc start, pls continue!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the idea! I hope u continue!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...
I have read alot of rishbala os's,ff's & ss's on dis forum..And in mostly all of them,RK has been potrayed as a ruthless,insensitive person..
If not dat,he is potrayed as a casanova who tries his hand on every woman..
In dis SS,I will be potraying RK as a very loving & a caring person..
Dont worry..dis is not gonna b boring coz RK will have d same attitude as in d show!!
I wanna potray him as an ideal guy next door..& give him all those qualities that i desire in my
MR.Perfect!!
So without further delay,here goes part 1..

Backdrop:
Rishbala were childhood friends..both wr neighbours & their mothers were best friends..RK & madhu studied in d same school..RK was always very protective & possessive towards her..& she luvd it..
Rk wanted to study film making
so he went to LEE STASSBERG THEATRE & FILM INSTITUTE,NEW YORK..whereas madhu continued her studies in mumbai itself..though they were seperated,they were never away from each other...though they couldnt b wid each other,they spent most of d time together..d long distance had seperated them,but they always remained together..two bodies,one soul...
PYAAR KI ANKAHI DASTAAN...


Part 1

It had been 5 long years since RK was in new york & they both had not met each other since then...

Madhu had tried her best to show that she didn't miss her rishabh.. but off course she did!
Her life revolved around rishabh..
"Did he have breakfast in d morning??
Omg!!is he alright??while i was talking to him on d phone,hr sneezed!!
He is not picking my phone...is he alright??
What must rishu be doing at dis point of time??"
Her life was about rishabh & only rishabh...
Though she did it unconcsiously..her actions...her words...her tears..her smile on talkng to him..said it all...
Everyone knew that they both loved each other...but according to madhu luv was a meaningless world..it meant rubbish to her..
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Rk-"Har DHADKAN Tumhari Meri Hai..
Har Saans Par Haq Hai Mera..
Tu ZINDA Kisi Aur Shareer Mein Hai...
Bas Itna Sa HAQ Hai TERA!"
KARAN-(GUYS KARAN IS RK'S FRIEND & ROOM MATE..THEY SHARE A VERY SPECIAL BOND WITH EACH OTHER & DON'T HIDE ANYTHING FROM ONE ANOTHER..KARAN KNOWS EVERYTHING ABOUT RISHBALA & GENUINELY WANTS THEM TO UNITE..
[KARAN IN MY SS IS PLAYED BY KARAN WAHI])
KARAN-Rishabh
Rk-yup!
Karan- y dont u tell her??
Rk-who???
Karan-mallika sherawat!!
U idiot i m talking abt madhu..tu paglon ki tarah pyaar karta hai use..yeh ishq..yeh junoon..ek doosre ke liye yeh paagalpan..
U both r made 4 each other..kab tak tu bas apne khayalon mein hi usse pyaar karega aur shayari likhta phirega..kab tak???
RK-karan mohabbat ek nasha hai..mohaabbt ki nahi jaati..bas ho jaati hai...use naam dena zaroor nahi hota..usme diya jaata haai..liya nahi..mohabbat ek ehsaas hai..jo humein jeene ki wajah deta hai..
Main madhu se beintehan pyaar karta hoon aur isliye uski khushi mein hi meri khushi sai..uske dard mein hi mera dard...
Karan-kabhi kabhi main sochta hoon,pichle janam mein tu ranjha tha kya??
RK-shut up!!tu tab samjhega jab tere saath hoga..
Ab chal packing karte hain kal india jaana hai...
Aur tu mere ghar ruk raha hai!
Karan-yes sir...afterall i want to meet my future bhabhiji!
Rk-tu nahi sudhrega..ruk abhi batata hoon...
(Karan started running & Rk was after him..karan luvd teasing RK)

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Precap-Madhu is on d top of dis world when she comes to know that her RK is coming back...Rishbala meet after 5 years...intense eyelock...passionate hug & karan's plan to reunite rishbala!
Guys i know dis chapter was kind of boring..but since i had to potray RK on dis way..i couldn't think of anything else..
I promise to give a full on masti bhari update d next time..
Plz like & comment...




Edited by cuterishabhala - 12 years ago
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

superb update
continue soon
thanks for the pm


M glad u liked it dear..thanx aloth..
Wrote it in between d shots..
Finally no night shift today!what a relief!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awesome Update 👏
Karan is so sweet 😳
Waiting for next update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shree.123

Awesome Update👏

Karan is so sweet😳
Waiting for next update😃

thanx dear
Dis was d first update so i had to keep it simple,but in d next updates u ppl r really gonna enjoy karan's naughtiness & also d passion b/w rishbala..
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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KARAN WILL HELP THEM GET TOGETHER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww interesting start...😊


waiting to read next 😃
bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice start dear ...please continue soon...thanks for d pm 😊

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