OS: Take Four! - Page 3

Originally posted by: mevanp

It was so funny in the end... 😆 But superb OS... 😊

Thank you! I love humor. Lol. I start out serious but can't pull it through to the end. :)

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Oh my god! Oh my god!! This was very funny. Poor rishbala has to bear the heat of mother natures fury on their suhagraat. It was very funny really.

Lol! Thanks! RK must have insulted Mother Nature at one point. Now she's taking revenge. ;)

ending was funny overall well done

Thanks! :) I couldn't make it too easy for my Superstar. Lol!

I'm a fan of your works after your chocolate OS
I was wondering if this one would have a funny twist at the end and it did
OMG I burst out laughing LOOOL what a time for her to start her *coughcough* 🤣
I've read probably a hundred os's/ss's/ff's and this is the first ever one to include this on the SR!! 😆

Really awesome story and your writing is amazing
The ending is too epic

Keep on writing, it's a pleasure to read ur works :)

Originally posted by: TheDon.

I'm a fan of your works after your chocolate OS
I was wondering if this one would have a funny twist at the end and it did
OMG I burst out laughing LOOOL what a time for her to start her *coughcough* 🤣
I've read probably a hundred os's/ss's/ff's and this is the first ever one to include this on the SR!! 😆

Really awesome story and your writing is amazing
The ending is too epic

Keep on writing, it's a pleasure to read ur works :)

Thank you! :) Chocolate and Mother Nature... Maybe my OS should include both. Lol! I enjoy a good trust and play on words. Did you read my OS: Fight for Love? I think you would enjoy it too. :)