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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: titli4love


yes..but u know someone have to die to become ghost!!🤣 don't worry show won't kill their leads..


Lol. Yeah. I would have felt better if you were to bring a blue-eyed ghost rather than the hazel-eyed. If you know what I mean. 😉
Edited by mm990 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: titli4love

I know this time I came up with a stupid concept but I wanted to write something new. I don't know if anyone has written any horror story here before or not. I also don't know how many of u believes in Ghost...me too don't believe in ghost but I believe in spirit.So tried my best not to make it a Ramgopal Verma type! 😆 I've decided to complete it in 2-3 parts..So, here u go..😳

Part 1

RK sat on the couch taking his favorite scotch in one hand & remote in other. "Movie time RK.." he said to himself & switched on the DVD player. It's 11.30 PM. Superstar RK aka Rishabh Kundra is all alone in his mansion. He lives here alone though some other family members whom he considers as furniture stay with him but he thinks he's alone since his wife Madhubala left him.. Yes, she has left him 1 month ago. She eloped with her friend/boyfriend Sultan while he was in an outdoor shoot. When his mother Radhaji informed him about her sudden departure he was so worried that canceled his shoot n came back in Mumbai. He involved Police, sent men everywhere where she could go, also hired detective but there was no sign of her. After a fortnight one man came with his hired detective n informed that he has seen Madhubala in front of a shopping mall few days ago'she was escorted by a blue0eyed muscular man in a White Mercedes. He knew it's none other than Sultan, Madhu's friend..everyone including his PA started saying that she has betrayed him! She escaped with Sultan.. Police also took it as granted as there was no sign of Sultan along with his wife. It seemed they left the country as well. His heart, at first, couldn't believe this crap..how can he?? He had more fidelity on her rather than himself. He still searches for her' RK started drinking excessively from then. Radhaji couldn't see her son ruining his life like this but she was helpless as RK doesn't consider her as his mother since she has remarriage after his father's death. He was a lonesome man from them. Even he pushed his friends away from him as they used to sympathize for him except Bittuji, his PA, he understands RK better than himself. After Madhu Bittuji was the only one who knows him in n out.So Radhaji agve him the responsibity to look after RK n left for Delhi..his step brother n father also went to a vacation in Europe. They were always indifferent to happenings of RK's life. They live here just to waste his money.

RK decided to play Mr India, it was his n Madhu's favorite film. He reminded the joyous moments they spent together watching this movie. He wanted none to disturb him or interrupt his course of nostalgia. So, he told his servants n Bittuji to leave the mansion for this night. Now there is only he n his solitude'

The movie was going well. Suddenly the light went off after the interval! "Shitt!" he muttered n about to go to bring candles while the DVD started playing all on a sudden. "What the hell is this? Have I drunk that much?" he thought n searched for the remote but couldn't find it in dark. "Sultan!" he heard a scream n shocked to see that the voice is coming from the film. "Sultan?? He was in Mr India???" he saw on screen a girl is screaming "Sultan! Stop..no!" & a manly figure is approaching towards her. He wringed his eyes then saw it's none other than Madhu's friend Sultan!! The girl trying to get rid of him but he's too powerful for her. "I want to give u ur best gift'" Sultan said in a husky tone. "No..u can't do it with me..I trusted u as my friend!!" the girl's voice shivered RK..it's same as his Madhu's! He hardened his jaw.. just then that girl turned her face'and'what's it?? It's his Mahu! The same big hazel eyes, same soft cheeks, same angelic face.. For a second his heart exulted! He jumped off to grab her in arms forgetting she's not here really'but before he could reach Sultan grabbed her hands tightly n pulled her close to him.

Please say how it is..if I get good response then will post part 2..😳 thank u.




Rishbala horror OS: She

Awesome, Titli.👏 Looking forward to the next part.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mm990

Lol. Yeah. I would have felt better if you were to bring a blue-eyed ghost rather than the hazel-eyed. If you know what I mean. 😉


yeah..he'll defo kill our leads na?? insaan banke hi aise hai toh bhoot banke toh..🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice start. Continue soon.


thank u..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Titli di 😲 wow! You are really talented 😉 I love to read horror stuff & mysteries😉 & I am hooked upto Nacy Drew series 😉 you made it on Rishbala!!! Now that is interesting! 😉 this part is scary & heart wrenching! What exactly happened to Madhu??😕 Looking forward to read the next part.

PS- Since I am hooked up to those spooky stuff, your story made me to read it further more soon.😆 Just a little request, please can you update the whole story before I leave?? The last day I will be coming to the forum will be next Wednesday.😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very gud intrusting pm me next time 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VinuRox

Titli di 😲 wow! You are really talented 😉 I love to read horror stuff & mysteries😉 & I am hooked upto Nacy Drew series 😉 you made it on Rishbala!!! Now that is interesting! 😉 this part is scary & heart wrenching! What exactly happened to Madhu??😕 Looking forward to read the next part.

PS- Since I am hooked up to those spooky stuff, your story made me to read it further more soon.😆 Just a little request, please can you update the whole story before I leave?? The last day I will be coming to the forum will be next Wednesday.😳


next wednesday means 1st Aug?? okay..I'll update it tomorrow..happy??😳
Edited by titli4love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: elegenttashu

Very gud intrusting pm me next time 😃


okay..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: titli4love


next wednesday means 1st Aug?? okay..I'll update it tomorrow..happy??😳

No 31st 😆 31st is Wednesday 😳 We are leaving on 1st of August night. Thank you so much Di 🤗🤗🤗 Love you❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow..it's nice n different ..do continue soon 😛

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