SS - TELL ME I DO... Pt 3 pg 5

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netu19

@netu19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

You are building it nice... I appreciate creative liberty... Whatever it takes to convey the characters...
N no dear I didn't find it confusing at all about flashback or present... It was easily perceivable...you write well

Ps "Maaji, Bauji and Pankaj bhaiyya" ... Isn't it aaman

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MissSkeptic

@MissSkeptic

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

@netu19 - thank you for reading and your wonderful comments! Luckily you did not find it confusing...Actually I realised it is kinda difficult to write in flasback mode cause it is not always very clear whether the characters' thoughts are in the present or in the past..

And thank you for pointing out my mistake! I forgot to change the name...I have edited it now...😊

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Its nice yaar...I don't find it confusing at all...great update...loved it...

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

hmm..the flashback was slow and clear devoid of any confusion..so Rishabh and Madhu share a unique bond, guess can be called as soul mates..but confused ones hehe!!guess there is so much more to it and am eager to know it all. when they were so close then what happened such that now they both have so much distance between them. one thing is clear they both are in pain.

could u pls clarify if RK is an tv actor in US or in India??? all this is happening in US isnt it??

loved the update. pls continue soon 😊

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: MissSkeptic

@ punam2712 - Thank you for reading...what does RES mean?

Means have reserved my post and will comment soon

also it marks the thread and whenever some writes on the thread i get an email

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Finally read it

For a newbie you have written a good story - clear consise

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MissSkeptic

@MissSkeptic

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

@ smdosi - Thank you for reading and commenting! I really appreciate the encouragement...😊

@aDarkAngel - Thank you so much for always leaving behind your analysis of the story! It makes me feel wonderful that someone actually try to understand these characters that I created...Yes, the story is set in US...I will definitely touch on Rishab's journey to being RK and that will ans ya qn! I hope you do not mind waiting to read abt it...

@punam2712 - thank you for clarifying the RES bit for me! And thanks for reading and your lovely words of encouragement!