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tanuja.siri thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
luvera it was so hot, vivid, graphical...what not every thing...

i can feel the heat rising up when i was reading it...i must say that by far you are the best writer who put the writings in such a graphical way...

first when i read the update i thought that it was just a dream...but then i read the word spent then i figured it out that she was reliving the moments in her dream.

but it was such a short update..thought that you would make it long as you've updated it after such a long time

please and pretty please update this one soon..

i really missed this ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Luvu..
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!

GHOSH DAT WAS ONE HOTTY PASSIONATE UPDT...BUTTERFLY FEELINGSSS ISSSHHH🤣

CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART

BTME CONFUSED...WAS DAT DREAM OR REAL...

BT I LOVD IT.

OYE...NEXT CENTURY...I WANT A BIG WALLA..SOON...
ORDRER..


OK NO ORDER


PUPPY FACE...PLS 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

luvera it was so hot, vivid, graphical...what not every thing...[BR][BR]i can feel the heat rising up when i was reading it...i must say that by far you are the best writer who put the writings in such a graphical way... [BR][BR]first when i read the update i thought that it was just a dream...but then i read the word spent then i figured it out that she was reliving the moments in her dream.[BR][BR]but it was such a short update..thought that you would make it long as you've updated it after such a long time[BR][BR]please and pretty please update this one soon..[BR][BR]i really missed this ff.[BR]


There...you are one of the smart ones who picked up on the tiny clue left in my update..
Yes she is reliving it again in her dream..
Sorry for the short update.. Ihave been busy with so many things.. that it was a short update or nothing at all..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

Hey Luvu..[BR]HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!![BR][BR]GHOSH DAT WAS ONE HOTTY PASSIONATE UPDT...BUTTERFLY FEELINGSSS ISSSHHH[=))][BR][BR]CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART[BR][BR]BTME CONFUSED...WAS DAT DREAM OR REAL...[BR][BR]BT I LOVD IT.[BR][BR]OYE...NEXT CENTURY...I WANT A BIG WALLA..SOON...[BR]ORDRER..[BR][BR][BR]OK NO ORDER[BR][BR][BR]PUPPY FACE...PLS [=))]


Hahahha... butterfly feelings!! Hahahaha...
Okay Iwill explain it to you.. confused soul..
She was naked in bed with Rishab.. dreaming about events which just transpired..the clue Ileft is the word 'spent'..
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVELY HOT AND PASSIONATE UPDATE

HOPE IT WAS A REALITY
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was hot nd lovely. update dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVELY HOT AND PASSIONATE UPDATE


HOPE IT WAS A REALITY

Thankyou!!!
Well the main clue in there was the word 'spent'
Take a hint and figure it out... 😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvera


Hahahha... butterfly feelings!! Hahahaha...
Okay Iwill explain it to you.. confused soul..
She was naked in bed with Rishab.. dreaming about events which just transpired..the clue Ileft is the word 'spent'..



Yep...got it...she s relieving it..
nw...WAITIN
WAITIN
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note: This is purely a work of fiction.. Maybe!! hahahha... well you never know!!! Anyways back to the story... This is yet again a short update.. I am thinking of uping the rating to readers over 20.. Oh well 18 year olds are adults so lets just say MATURE readers over 18 only read ahead..

Chapter 100


His eyes do not flicker away from me even for a second. He undoes the buttons of his jeans and slowly pulls his jeans down, his eyes on mine the whole time. He leans down over me and grasping each of my ankles, quickly jerks my legs apart and crawls onto the bed between my legs. He hovers over me for a second before he leans down and kisses the inside of my thigh, trailing kisses up till he reaches my stomach. He licks my navel and his tongue dips into it. He heads north leaving a trail of kisses in its wait. My skin burns and I squirm in need, clawing at the satin sheet beneath me. He reaches my chest but then suddenly stops. No... Don't stop!! Please don't stop!! His hand trails up from my hip, to my waist and up to my breast, gently cupping it.


"Your perfect.." he murmurs and dips his index finger into the cup of my bra and gently yanks it down, freeing my breast. But the underwire and fabric of the cup force it upward. His finger moves to my other breast and repeats the process. My breasts swell. My nipples harden under his steady gaze. "Beautiful..." he repeats once again appreciatively and my nipples harden even more. He blows gently on my left breast as his hand moves to my right one, rolling my nipple between his fingers. I groan, feeling the sweet sensation all the way to the place I need him the most. Please.. I need you.. I beg, not sure if I said it out loud. His lips close around my other nipple and when he tugs, I stretch my back upwards, nearly convulsing.


I can feel him hard against me. Yet he takes his time, pleasuring me. He continues his sensual assault. His fingers and lips set alight every nerve ending so that my whole body sings with sweet agony. He doesn't stop. Oh please...Ohh... My legs stiffen as he eggs me on. His teeth encloses around my nipple and he pulls hard. My body convulses and I fall apart. Holy f**k!!! He kisses me deeply absorbing my cries.


He lies down beside me as I slowly come back from my high. He gazes at me while trailing kisses on the palm of my hand. He makes sure each and every finger receives equal attention from him.


I look at him and a giggle escapes. Rishab frowns, "What?" I shake my head trying to contain the giggles, "Nothing... Its just that.. now I know what all the fuss is about." Rishab smiles at me, "Don't decide that just yet... I have only just started." and he quickly moves to pull off his boxer shorts and shirt.


My eyes widen in amazement. And before I know it he reaches over to the bedside table and grabs a foil packet. He moves between my legs, spreading them father apart. He kneels and pulls the condom onto his considerable length. For a second and only for that mere second I hesitate, thinking.. How? Will it? But then I look into his eyes... and he looks into mine. "Do you really want to do this?" he asks and all fears.. questions evaporate. Yes I do... I have wanted you for the longest time.


But for the life of me I don't seem to be able to formulate words. So I just nod vigorously. He smiles at my reaction understanding my nervousness, feeling my eagerness, and says, "Tell me if you want me to stop."


He enters me fast and hard and I cringe as I feel a weird pinching sensation deep inside me. He stalls. I open my eyes to find him gazing down at me, his eyes questioning me. I nod, my eyes wide as I try to acclimatize to the overwhelming feeling of him inside me. He stays still.


He tries to hold back a groan but it escapes. His breathing is ragged as he just waits. "I am going to move now.. Okay?" he breathes out after a moment, his voice tight.


I wiggle my hip around in answer. His breath hitches and he closes his eyes and groans out loud as shifts onto his elbows once again and thrusts into me. He moves slowly at first easing himself in and out of me. As I slowly grow accustomed to the alien feeling, my hips move tentatively to meet his. He speeds up and I match his movements in a rhythmic fashion. He plants his lips on mine crushing them. I suck on his lower lip as I feel my body quivering. I bite down on his lip hard just as the feeling takes over me once again and I unravel. Holy f**k! He follows almost immediately.


Our panting fills the room. I try to slow my breathing and my thumping heart. Woah!! That was astounding.. And I so want to do that again and again and again and again. Doctors should recommend it as part of everyone's diet like vitamins, three times a day, before or after every meal. Dietitians would have to close shop if people just included it in their everyday diet. No more obesity!! I suddenly feel Rishab kiss my shoulder tenderly as he tucks away a strand of my hair behind my ear. I open my eyes slowly to find him gazing down at me with soft eyes. He kisses me again on my nose and slowly pulls out.


"Uhh.." I wince and he looks at me concerned. "Madhu?" I turn towards my side with a smile on my face trying to put him at ease. "Riding a horse."


"Huh?" he is confused and I don't blame him. "Its like when you ride a horse for the first time. Its exhilarating and you want to do it again and again till you are a pro and can jump fences easily. But you have to go through the chafing and sore times first." I explain as I run my hand through his unruly hair.


I trace my finger down his forehead and then his nose till I reach his lips and then I stop. I wince as I trace my thumb gently over his visibly bruised lower lip, over the bite I left moments ago. "I'm sorry.." I whisper softly.


"You can go carnal on me anytime baby.." he teases as he nips on my thumb playfully. I blush and look away for a moment, only to find myself gazing at him again through hooded eyes.


He pulls me closer and I find myself half lying on top of him. He covers our bodies with the earlier discarded duvet. His one hand strokes my bare back rhythmically while the fingers of his other are entangled with mine. I vaguely hear him say I love you as I drift off to the sleep where I shall relive the best hours of my life. I love you too...


Edited by luvera - 11 years ago

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