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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh the feeling of falling in love, heavenly. Very nice update!!! I'm still blushing with Madhu-Rk's subtle interaction☺️😳😉

Edited by bonhishikha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Friends the update shall be here by tomorrow...
love ya guys...

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Posted: 12 years ago
woww...
amazing... just loved the way you are shaping up story..
But,it's a request..pls PM for next update...
I don't want to miss any update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
FIRST KISS

Neither Madhu nor RK slept the entire night. They both kept tossing on the bed.

RK was getting helpless with his feelings, he wanted to be close to Madhu but knew he had some boundaries, which no matter what he had to respect.

Madhu on the other side kept on pondering over her feelings, was she falling for RK or was it respect. Kiss and Respect..Terrible combination

Madhu learning from her past mistakes Dylan decided to go wth the flow. Whatever happens happens for good.

Both RK and Madhu reached airport together. Neither of them spoke a single word. With the nervous feelings, RK could not sleep in the flight, but he saw that Madhu had dozed of. RK rested her head on his shoulder. Such a baby.

On landing, they hired a taxi and headed for their meeting. IT was I this first 4.5 hours that Madhu spoke." Are u angry?"

What!! No why?

You are not talking since morning. What's wrong?

Oh.. No I thought you don't want to talk so I did not disturb you. I was anyway occupied by the work and I did not sleep the entire night. So..

You did not sleep too? I mean why u did not sleep?

RK noticed the too in the conversation," I was busy, you know working."

Oh! .

RK noticed again the disappointment in Madhu's eyes and voice.

The work and testing in office had worked out well. Both RK and Madhu were overjoyed with the results. They felt proud that what they had visualized had turned out to be so good. The organization called for a party, but both RK and Madhu hesitated. But on further insistence they had to agree.

Both Madhu and RK, drank and enjoyed the party thoroughly. While RK looked dashing and dapper in a black coat, Madhu looked equally beautiful in a sari. The party ended quite late. It was already 1:00 pm. As they moved towards the lift, a young guy passed a cheap comment to Madhu. While she ignored, RK the guy a glaring look.

But the guy was high and immediately picked up a fight. RK avoided and warned him not to trouble him and provoke him. But he did not listen. Then RK punched him twice, very hard. A commotion gathered and the hotel authorities had to intervene to resolve. Madhu pulled RK out of the fight and dragged him along while saying.

What's wrong with you RK? We could have just ignored him.!

RK pulled his hand and said ," No we could not have , I cannot ignore anything as long it about you. Do you understand?

RK was cold and firm.

Madhu was silent. RK walked past her and went to his room. Madhu followed.

Leave me alone Madhu, I am very angry now.

But your hand is bleeding RK! I am sorry.

When RK turned he saw Madhu standing with tear filled eyes. He walked towards her, Madhu lifted his hand and applied an ointment and bandage. By this time tears rolled down Madhu's eyes.

RK cupped her face and wiped her tears and then fighting all his feelings, bondage and barriers he bent down to kiss her. Madhu closed her eyes. He stopped halfway. Is this right? I and Madhu, together? Madhu felt a strange feeling. She opened her eyes to see RK staring at her with eyes full of pain and love.

Madhu realised his agony and moved forward to touch him. That's when it happened. RK knew it was right and it was love. Their lips met with fear, love and passion. Fear of fist, love in their heart and passion which had ignited over so many days. Slowly RK's one hand moved and held Madhu tightly around the waist while the other, slowly moved inside her hair and pulled her even close.

She felt so completely herself with him. He had polished her. He had been her strength, mentor, friend and love. He was so special. He would never leave her. This thing was different. Their kiss broke. Both, panting for breath. They hugged. RK thought she would not leave him and Madhu thought he would never break her, never leave her and never ditch her, because he truly loved her.

Both did not know, it was the silence before storm.


HOPE YOU GUYS LOVED IT!!

LOVE ENIGMA

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Posted: 12 years ago
Its beautiful. OMG !!! Their first kiss and it felt so right for them to be so close after such a painful journey .. What the storm approaching !!! Shucks!! Does it have to be now😡...is it Dylan 😡!!! Pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome updt
yaar mile bhi nahi tab tak alag karne ke irade mai ho rk aur madhu ko
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! Rishbala first kiss @ apt moment...

Loved it so much...

so whats the storm waiting for them, let dylan not enter the story here, want more rishbala moments Pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update, dear.
They can feel each other's pain.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter!😊 But please PM for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys I am sorry!! I did not PM anyone.
Actually i was more worried about the story, so i forgot to PM.
Apologies...

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