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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Rishab kundra(R.k)-Heart throb...arrogant,ambitious,headstrong, useless to those who don't know about him...To people who know him he is down to earth and a jovial guy...They wonder if he suffers from split personality... aspires to become a hero..




Arnav singh Raizada-He has everything a girl wants money,looks, attitude... but he hates girls...He is not a very approachable person and one he hates the most is Rk


Madhubala singhania-Not the one you can mess with...A blend of tradition and sophistication...She is beauty with brains...smoking hot appearance and killer attitude makes boys go on their knees before her...However she is not what she potrays herself to be...a total enigma...



Kushi gupta-A doctor by profession who is trying hard to put her life together .She suffers from selective Amnesia...In relation with Dr Samrat Modhi just for the sake of it...

Dr .Samrat-Kushi's boyfriend or should i say best friend who is always there for her no matter what


Armaan and Ridhima-Collage mates of Arnav and Rk and are still friends with them.

Geet Khurana-Twin sister of Madhubala

Maan singh khurana -husband of Geet and the overprotective brother of Madhu...

Dev Chauhan-Madhu's biggest support...Relation between him and Madhu is for you to read and find out

Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seems nice...please do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start 😊
Continue soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii !!
The prologue and character sketch sounds gr8, please start with the story as soon as possible, i think i would enjoy reading this. 👍🏼

Do pm me when u update it. Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice CS...
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
NICE CS AND PROLOGUE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seems good. go wid it. continue soo👍🏼n.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TEASERS...

Doc-"Mr.raizada meet the doctor who saved ur sister's life"

Kushi Gupta stepped into the room trying to hide strange sensation she was feeling.She looked up to find a pair of caramel eyes looking at her shocked.they looked very familiar and strangely their intensity made her blush...
Arnav could'nt belive his eyes...


person-"Oh there she is...Maddy is here...She's your coordinater for thearetics..."
Mukund and others looked back to see a girl ,as she steped into light their face was filled with shock ...as before them stood Madhubala...only she did not look the sme anymore...Rk felt a new feeling , a strange sensation in his stomach...
Trishna was relived to see madhu in one shape...
T-"Glycerine..." but stopped at once seeing the look Madhu gave...


SMACkK madhu punched the guy on his face as the whole gang watched her with their mouths open...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow gr8 one ...
eager for the 1st chap continue soon...
waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JUDAAI MOHAABAT AUR DOSTI KI

PART-1

14th feb 2005

PRESENT DAY

in DELHI

The sirens of the ambulance split across the streets of Delhi.It was just another lazy day for the inhibitants of Delhi city.No one even raised an eyebrow for the ambulance.Oh common it was very common to see an ambulance.Only that no one knew the prson inside was Arnav Singh Raizada who was the topmost tycoon of the city,the idol of youngsters,dream guy for girls and the most potent groom for mothers who wanted to get their daughters married.

Only that he was now helplessly looking at his sister Jia lying unconcious with blood coming out of her chest where she had been shot.For an atheist like Arnav it was a life altering situation.He had begun to pray to god's he did not belive in after his parents death.The ride to the hospital was the longest ever.

The ambulance reached its destination and soon the patient was wheeled to the operation theatre.It was one of the most reputed hospitals in the city.Arnav burried his face into his palms and waited.He felt the space next to him being occupied and looked up to find the man who was responsible for his sister's situation...Shyam Jha the one who had been responsible for Arnav turning out this way into a ruthless person.

Shyam-"I warned you ASR ,told you repeatedly ..to not mess around with me ...Now you face it..."

In one second Arnav had found another reason to hate Rishab Kundra...


in GOA

A guy is found sleeping on the bed of his room.Only that he was not peacefull..He sees a car dashing the tree and going into flames and gets up shouting for his Pari-"KUSHI..."

Rk sat up with a jerk ,panting and all sweaty...He checked the time and realized he was late for his basketball practise sesion.He rushed up into the wash room to get ready a nd came out to put on his shirt when his phone rang...He listened to the speaker

"Armaan here dude Jia was shot and is in hospital ,She is in a very critical condition..."

Rk thought of staying quite as usual but questioned-"How is Arnav doing?"

A-"He is ...alright...Dont worry i will take care of him"...

Soon the line went dead...

in LADAK

An young girl made her way to pick up the phone..It was from Delhi ,She was called to the most eminent hospital there to perform an Open heart surgery...She walked out of her tent to inform about it to her Fiance who was examining other patients...They were conducting the monthly health check up camps .

in DARJEELING

The alarm of a girl went out in a very big mansion. She stretched out her hand to hit it off when a voice called her out

V-"Madhu get up or you will be late again for your classes"

Another voice-"Let her sleep will you she came late yesterday after finalizing the Noida deal.

Madhu got up alarmed .A fight was about to erupt between her sister and jiju''.She ran down the stairs to prevent the world war.

Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago

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