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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

I just came across your thread and it read 'DISCONTINUED' 😲

And i was upset !

But i got your PM soon enough to cheer me up 😆

Tell me something, why do you again and again think of discontinuing this ????

I am seriously confused 😕

DO TELL ME !

It is so lovely and DARK altogether !

And such a promising story ahead !

Coming to the update,

It was superb !

Very nicely written 👏

Both the chapters were very intense and interesting !

I loved Madhu's reaction to the marriage !

I mean it was not like protesting but something very different !

Now let's see who breaks first ! 😆

The flashbacks were interesting !

Especially how he came to call her Firadus !

Vikram reached RK's house 😲

I never knew he was that smart !

Have to give some credit to him 😆

RK is again confusing me !

One moment he is cold and the other moment he breaks down !

Another thing more confusing and intriguing at the same time is ...

What is Madhu hiding ?

And what did she meant by 'He's was not at fault' ?

What was the dream about ?

Dadima is a positive character !

Atleast someone is good around here !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Its a lovly dark story.. Nd as i said I m hokd to story to knw many thngs, lk wat y she s hidin, her bro s alive, wat happnd , nd many..ND pls dnt thnk to discontinue... Bye

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bria

@bria

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

loved it... was waiting 4 ur update...i realy want to know what actually happend...why RK never contact with Madhu after they went...and how veeji is not at fault...the story is awsome and ur writing style is gr8t

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

awesome update tanya...thanx for giving us 2 update

wht madhu is hiding frm RK..? waiting to knw..

Edited by Clara20 - 12 years ago

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Good post tanya,
Don't discont,

This is a very diff track of rishbala and we'd love to continue reading,

Please PM me on next post

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

oh god i hope everything will be alright between rk-madhu soon.please don't discontinue your ffs.

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Thank u so much for continuing. I am sooo happy. I came here after reading this story on geet forum bcz you didn't pm me link of this update at mb forum. Anyways Thanks a lot di for continuing this story.

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ShinSegi

@Befikre

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

I love love love this FF of yours👏

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

i couldn't believe my eyes when i saw ur pm tanya:) thank u sooo much for continuing:) the two updates were just awesome:) i loved the entire phras-sequence. Madhu taking vows exactly opposite of that of rk's.

I have the conflict of thoughts going in rk's mind. No matter how much he says he want to hurt n destroy madhu, he didn't force himself on he, he actually made love to her:)

I'm dying to know about madhu's bro n the secreat about rk's sis which madhu's carrying in her heart.

Just loved tge updates

Thanks fr pm:D

Ps- don't drop this story:) n yeah a big hug to u for cobtinuing:)