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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it. I was shocked to know that his brother is still alive. Then why is she in Vikram's clutches? Was it because his brother is indebted to Vikram and he is merely using his sister to pay his debts? What a scoundrel!

I am eagerly waiting for the past to be revealed, but how can Madhu trust another stranger man? Why do I get bad vibes about this. Maybe, because I'm scared for Madhu. No matter what, I'm sure if she was with RK he wouldn't have hurt her. What if Madhu comes across Vikram while on the run? I just hope now. I want RK to find her.

Fantastic update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz plz plz ...i love this story...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love love love this story. It is so different and so intense.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update !
Great writing 👏
Loved it 😳

The update was very intense and not to forget INTERESTING ... 😉
RK is really full of revenge and is totally ruthless here !
But he has got another side ... 😆
Hmmm ... so Madhu kept quite for some reasons !
And actually what did the lady mean ? 😕
Madhu's brother as in Ranveer is alive ? 😲
I guess there is lot more to be revealed !
And i need to wait ... but that is the hardest part 🤣

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey got to know abt this ff throughmy frnd with id-didlr and its good she tld me abt this:D
ur an amazing writer and this is a thrilling story:D
By far the best i've read on mb forum.
Plz pm me frm nxt updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi tanya plzzz update soon
i'm actually dying to read the nxt update:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 10

"Aisa kyun kiya aapne?" he yelled kicking the glass tea table angrily, causing it to fall down and crash into pieces scattering all over.

"Aap ke liye kiya hai RK"

"Mere liye? Accha?" he turned glaring at the elderly woman. "Dadima aapne Madhu ke madad nahi ki hai, uske liye aap ne nark bula liya hai" he stated biting out each word, he didn't wait for her answer but stormed out the door.

As he drew away in the car, his mind only carried glimpses of the events, his hold on the steering wheel tightened till his fingers turned white down to his knuckles as he remembered how he'd filled her parting with his blood, the words I love escaped his lips while he was drunk. He stopped abruptly in the middle of the road, leaning his head back he stared out the window screen, he wouldn't be able to ruin her life in the same way her brother had did to his sister, he'd need to use another tactic, one that'll satisfy him because having her exposed to the gaze of men kills him. Closing his eyes for a moment he inhaled deeply, then changing the gear he drove away rashly, he needed to find her, he was going to find her. "You called your own death Madhu" he muttered.

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Madhu leaned back resting her head as Aditya drove, she didn't know where she was going, she hadn't a clue at all but she knew she was going far away from RK.

She touched her parting as she remembered how he filled it, a lone tear escaped her eye, this is what she imagined.

She jerked forward when aditya suddenly clamped down on the brake.

"Kya hua?" she asked looking at Aditya, however he had his eyes trained ahead, seeing him stare ahead she looked and froze. RK's car had suddenly come before and blocked them.

"Run.. run fast" Aditya muttered.

She trembled just seeing RK, he was sat in his car with his head towards their car.

"Run" Aditya turned his head back to her. "Go!" he shouted.

Madhu jumped with his tone, her lips trembled at his sight, she struggled to reach for the door, as she stepped down she looked back at RK who stepped out his own car, with all the strength she could gather she ran heading towards the jungle knowing it'll be harder for RK to find her but dangerous for her ownself but if she was to save herself from the tempered RK she had to do it.

Aditya stepped out the car as RK stormed over ready to chase Madhu, he blocked RK.

"I can't let you go after her" he stood strong to his stance.

"You're going to stop me?" RK smirked. "You!" he gripped aditya's neck in a vice like grip. "You may be the manager of Dadima but you work under me!" he bit out. "Don't ever cross me" he pushed him against the car then turned to catch Madhu.

RK stood to his ground as he felt Aditya's hand on his shoulder.

"I wont let you do it" He responded sternly.

Turning around RK held his hand and turned. "You made the biggest mistake" he whispered then kicked Aditya on his stomach, as he crouched down RK gripped his hair, pulled back then slammed it into the side of the car making Aditya fall down losing his consciousness.

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Madhu didn't have a clue where she was going, she ran and continued to do so however she felt as if she was going in circles, how was she to get out of this jungle? She hadn't a single clue, she gasped and froze in her place hearing her name, it was RK's voice but it wasn't somewhere nearby, his voice echoed through the jungle, she knew it wasn't going to take him long to find her and she couldn't stop no matter what. She looked around her wondering which way to take, sighing she turned left and ran without fail despite her tiredness she ran, she couldn't come back to RK's grasp.

RK walked, he didn't care if she ran a mile he was going to find her eventually.

"Run as much as you want Madhu" He yelled loudly, his voice reverberated through the forest reaching her. "In the end every keep returns to its rightful owner"

She stopped leaning against the tree unable to make it any further, he saw as his keep the thought pained, her eyes fell to the sound of a running car, looking here there she noticed the light of the car and ran towards it hoping this was her chance.

She looked around to see whether RK anywhere nearby, then ran with as much strength she could gather, she smiled faintly as she neared the road and could see the car more clearly, she was stunned to see Vikram with his bodyguard. "Vikram" she whispered gasping for air.

She reached the road and ran towards the car tailing behind. "Vikram!" she screamed hoping he'd hear, she reached her hand out hoping the driver sees her following the car.

"Vi..." she was pulled back with a hand clasping against her mouth, her back pressed to his chest. She knew he'd caught.

"Where do you think you're going my dear wife?" he whispered into her ear pressing a kiss to her nape.

She closed her eyes as the tears rolled down her cheeks. He's found her. She looked at the car as it drew away further disappearing from her gaze.

RK turned her round to see her, his eyes instantly drew to the filled parting, with a small smirk he looked at her face which was pale and most probably in shock.

"You know Madhu there's a mandir nearby" he whispered brushing her damn tendrils behind her ear.

She stared at him. What could be said for him? Who was he? She didn't have any idea anymore. "Who are you?" she whispered.

"Apne pati ko nahi jante tum" he raised his brow with a smile tugging his lips.

"Let me go please" she cried.

"Let you go" He pulled her against him pressing her body to his. "So others can have whats mine?"

"I'm not yours" she struggled in his hold, pushing at his chest but it was futile as it felt like she was pushing a brick wall.

"You're not now" he whispered grazing his palm by her side as he held her to him with his other arm around her waist. "But you will be" he caressed at the side of her breasts, his thumb sinfully reaching and brushing against her, her breath hitched in her throat as a shudder ran down her spine. "I'm the rightful owner to this" he cupped her breast and pressed firmly. "Everything of yours belongs to me" he muttered pressing kisses to her jaw as she simply had stiffened. "but first lets go get married" he released her and gripped her wrist and headed towards the mandir that he knew of. Where was life taking them? What was going to be the end of this? Were they both heading towards destruction? None had the answers. Time. Time will tell what destiny has planned for them.

Precap - ???

Right I won't be changing my story line for this, I've done it a few times to my other works before which only ended with me losing interest in my own work. So all I ask is for you guys to trust me a little. I know I'm evil and end up bringing sad parts in each update of mine but I always gave a happy ending na? (except in my OS To be... 😆) Though my ending for this hasn't been decided so it could go either way. 😉


Please do leave me your feedback on this update.


Most awaited scene of Innocent Seductress And Some Loving Moments In The Escort Business Has Been Updated. But don't think these happy moments in TEB lasts long. You've known me enough to know this by now. 😆


Also this the 10th part which will really decide whether I continue this in this Forum seeing as from 80+ likes its gone down to 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
i m srry dat i m posting afta completion of 2 updates...😊😊
i m glad dat RK married madhu...😃😃
how come ranveer popped out of his grave????
does dat mean RK's sis is also alive????😕😕
i m really lookin forward for da next update...😊😊
Edited by 1234philli23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

omg wat is gonna happen now? really pity madhu😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome tanya😊
he found her..and they r getting married😊 xcited for next update..ur writing skill r awesome

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