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sukritimishra

@sukritimishra

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

awesome update. thanks for the pm. do continue soon.

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Aakriti

@CrazyCryztal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Wow!!!!

You are amazing !!!

I just read all the parts and i must say you write beautifully !!!

The way you explain and elaborate certain things is really nice !!!

loved reading it and specially the part where you added the poems...

i just don't hv words...

and please don't discontinue, i would really like to read more

i m also reading escort and i hv to say it is really very nice !!!

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philantus01

@philantus01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

heya!!!!!!!!

srry wasnt able to comment due to my exams...

bth da parts was awesome...

still hav my questions😆😆

wher was RK whn his so cald baby sister was getting exploited???😕

hw can he blame madhu without reasoning wid her????😕

if RK n madhu knew each oda so well y would madhu's brother ll use rK's sister for his business??

how madhu's brother died??how RK's baby sister died???😕

n if RK knew exactly wher she use to get exploited by men y dint he save his baby sister???

da precap seems to b scary...i hope RK doesnt go to such an extent frm wher he cant cum back😭😭

thnks for da pm dear...do update soon...eagerly waiting for da next part😊😊

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Hily Stevens

@RaniGayetri_DD

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

I read all the parts in a go. please pm me from next time. the theme is so dark and amazingly written. i am loving this ff

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

beautiful

add me in

pm me too dear

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Oh my my!! I just read all the parts!! Amazing ff. Waiting for more updates 😳

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Awesome..~!!!A part of past has been revealed but Madhu's silence means theres allot more then what RK knows...Eager for that...n yes theres two sides of him...but his cold attitude takes over his love n concrn...cz of the helplessness, the hatred that has grown from the past...Waiting for the next..~!!!