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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Awww dont worry just make sure you future husband buys a sari similar to the one you liked otherwise you know what happens with him 😆 hahaha mania your bff lol I believe he befriends everyons eventually 😉

more where that came from.😉

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Tanmaya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome OS Jasleen Please make this into a SS

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Omg evil rishab! Bhag madhu bhag! I hope she runs. Crazy artist you have created here. J 😲

I dont know if the crazy artist stereotype is true but, this man makes me want to pray it is not.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
aww poor Madhu

poor madhu is right. atleast she fought back.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Arias
Lovd the os yaar.

I am glad. thank you

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: AroraN
Loved the concept 👏
Fabulous .. 😃 I m in love with Laal Saari 😉

I am glad you liked the story

join the laal sai crazy club with members=me😉

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Nian4life
Okay, so this was an OS but pls pls pls convert it into an SS!
its a storyline that holds a lot of potential!

Loved it thoroughly!

I know it does. I was only testing the waters to see how far I can go with this concept before people suspect fifty shades of grey/ violence for the sake of it & kick me out. Not that we have got that settled, I can take the story and run with it & I will probably add a few more chapters to the laal sari😊

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: catty2000
Nice OS !
Please change into an FF or an SS !
The storyline would be really different and PERFECT !

Different? IDK you ought to give personal property a read. you will find similarities. that being said, I like the story as well & will follow up on your suggestion with an SS😊

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sweetdear
It's awesome..I was kinda hoping you to turn it into SS ..cos it's intense😛

thank you. will do.

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Anoki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: iiDona

I know it does. I was only testing the waters to see how far I can go with this concept before people suspect fifty shades of grey/ violence for the sake of it & kick me out. Not that we have got that settled, I can take the story and run with it & I will probably add a few more chapters to the laal sari😊

Yayyy I'm glad that you will!

Well the story I well suppose will reveal 50 shades of RK! 😆

He's nothing short of that!

I love it and I hope she stands by her words!