SS Sulbala - Their Life! [Part 2 - PG4] 18/03/2013

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys.
This is the first time im writing an SS in the madhubala - ek ish ek janoon forum.
I totally love this Serial to bits and have been watching in frequently.
I'm a Rishbala Fan but recently started warming to the Idea of Sulbala..
I reckon they make an amazing couple!!

No Bashing Please..
This is entirely my own opinion and if i have hurt anybody with the idea of sulbala im sorry x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index

Character Sketch - Below
Part 1 - Below
Part 2 - Page 4

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Part 1

Sulbala -

The night was quiet after a day of running around for her little boy, doing all the things he wanted for his birthday. She smiled as she sat on her bed tired and her body aching. Her legs felt like jelly but it was pain was worth it for her little boy Aryan. She had been living with Aryan for 3 years now and she couldn't be happier. His smile, his laughter, his giggles and his naughtiness made her day complete. She did miss her old life her family, bittuji, radhaji and even her first love. But she was happy with what she got.

She got up, walked up to the wardrobe she shares with her husband Sultan. She opened the door and looked at the clothes hanging. She ran her fingers through the shirts which belonged to sultan. She missed him today loads. She never thought she would ever fall in love with Sultan. Yes she still loved RK and always will. He'll always have a special place in her heart but she was in love with Sultan. The anger, his eyes, his glares even his shouting she loved all of it. But the thing she loved the most was the hidden care he has for Aryan despite being mean to him. He always wants Aryan to be strong and brave. He wants his son not to be afraid of anybody.. She picked out a shirt of his and brought it close to her, she hugged it and smiled.. His strong fragrance was still lingering around the shirt.

Madhu - Wish you was here Sultan.. I'm missing you loads today.. she whispered softly as a tear rolled out of her eyes down her cheek. He went away on business so suddenly that he didnt have time to prepare anything for Aryan's birthday.

Flashback.

He walked in on his wife and son who were sat planning for the party. He sat next to madhu and put his chin on her shoulder and his arms around her waist..

Sultan - madhu... mujhe baar jana hai... he said softly knowing how she melts with his voice.

Madhu - kaha jana hai... she asked her heart thudded as she knew he was going to go away on business.. she had heard him speaking to someone over the phone and she was gutted..

Sultan - business ke liye aur aryan ke birthday ke ek din baad wapas auenga... he said making a sad face..

Madhu - teek hai jao she said with a little anger.. she removed his hands from her waist and got up and walked off.. Aryan looked at him and walked of too following his mother..

He sat for a while longer thinking about how his life changed and how he married madhu.. he married her for his son.. they were both getting attached to each other .. Aryan would always ask about him and madhu would always come and visit him secretly without anyone knowing so he proposed with the condition that she don't fall in love with him.. little did he know he was falling in love with her slowly and beautifully.. he loved everything she did, her laughter when she was with Aryan. Her stories she read Aryan when he would fall asleep, her little words of wisdom which helped Aryan.

He got up after a little while and walked into his room, there on his bed his wife and son both were both fast asleep. He put the duvet on them both and kissed their foreheads.

Sultan - Sorry Madhu..I Love You he whispered against her ear softly and walked out with his stuff.

when she heard the door close she opened her eyes and smiled.. ' Love you too' she repeated softly and went back to sleep hugging her son..

End of flashback

She put her hand against her stomach and her heart did a little flutter, She waited for Sultan to come back so she postponed the party till he get back. She had the biggest gift to give them both.. she put the shirt back and went downstairs only to find Aryan laughing so hard. She wondered who was there she hurried and ran a little faster to where the sound came from.. There stood her husband Laughing and cuddling their son.. Tears formed as she was so happy to finally seeing her husband. Sensing his wife's presence he turned to see his wife smiling..

Please Press Like And Comment!! :)
No Bashing..

If you want a PM Please Wait as i need to mke new id for this foorum lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! :)
This is really well written. :) I loved the simplicity of your language and the entire thing was really well-put. :)
Brilliant job! :) Can you please PM me though?
:)
I hope no one bashes this, you seem to be really worked up about that. This is too good to bash!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: havokhotline

Hey! :)

This is really well written. :) I loved the simplicity of your language and the entire thing was really well-put. :)
Brilliant job! :) Can you please PM me though?
:)
I hope no one bashes this, you seem to be really worked up about that. This is too good to bash!



Hey
Thank you..
Yeah course i can .. need to make a new id for it though..
Yeh i guess some members are not liking Sultan and Madhu put together thats the main reason to be honest..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omggg...what the hell is this...i wud die if it even happens in the shw...i can sooo imagine it happening...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nazmaa



Hey
Thank you..
Yeah course i can .. need to make a new id for it though..
Yeh i guess some members are not liking Sultan and Madhu put together thats the main reason to be honest..

Hey again. :)
Okay, my own opinion is that whether you ship Madhu-RK or Madhu-Sultan, a piece of writing is a piece of writing.
It isnt what is going to really happen in the show. :O
And what you have put forth, is a piece of your own imagination! Which needs to be appreciated :D
And dont worry, there are people out there (like me) who like Sultan as a character :) They will definitely love this fic.
I cant wait :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh you wrte so well..but pleasee please wrte in rishabalaa..they r the main leads..please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear...beautifully written.please pm to me next time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome start do continue & plzzz PM me...!!!!! Its good if u post this link in sultan Madhubala heaven...!!!!

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