DARK NIGHT- Pt-2 on pg 4 /Pt 3&epilogue on Pg- 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start.. Waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aneri401

wow a rishbala os from u.!!! Awesome start do continue...& pm me


heheh i know hard to belive mujhe b nahi ho raha 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the beginning.. Do continue n pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mauaa

OMG.. richa kapoor in meiej's forums... great.. and u r writting an os is just like a jakpott..😊


i m bigg bigg fan of yrs as i love maaneet.. i also like madhubala and having u in this forum is a treat.. but dont forget to update in maaneet forum..

anyway.. i've still not read yr 1st update as i was cheking r u the same richa from geet forum or not😉 and yesss u r.😃. so was just expressing my excitment🤗.. i know story must b gr8..

loveyaa❤️



Hey Dear i cant express how much i over whelemed after reading your comment... This my Life's second best compliment.🤗


But i m little bit dissappoint also coz i have never got any comment from you on my Maaneet FF. If you are my regular reader then y u dont share your views
anyways... I m glad that you loved my work and hope seeing your views in Geet forum also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 2 As soon she found darkness vanished around her she turned calm. In few secs her eyes turn drowzzy and lids turn heavy with sleep. Though she is aware of his presence but sleep clenching her very hard. Slowly2 she went to sleep and her eyes closed completely. She was sleeping in a sitting posture so her head falls slanting again and again. He,who is so much busy in staring this sleeping beauty in his compoud alarmed and jumped from his berth. He sat next to her so she can sleep comfortably. This time her head is not hanging in air,it falls on his shoulder. He cribbing silently but supports her head whole night. Sun dawn and she awakes founding herself laying on him and he was still in his sleep. She felt scared and slipped away from him. He felt the lack of her warmth and get up quickly. 'wo tumhara sir latak rha tha isliye support k liye...wrna neck me sprain ho jata.',he clerified seeing panic in her eyes. His back is spraning dur to sleeping in a sitting posture. She looking here and there and found she reached to a Himachal station. 'mera station aa gaya',she said hurridly while collecting her bags. 'suno tum kisi achhe ghar se lagti ho.meri mano ye bhagna ka idea drop kr do.loosers karte hai ye sab',he advised her. 'how dare you?hum ek dusre ko jante b nai hai or tum bkwas kiye chale ja rae ho.kal tumne meri help ki iska ye matlab nai hai ki meri personal matters me tum interfere karoge.',she said rudly while glaring him. She collect her bags and jumped from the train. He also collect his bags and followed her. She get scared as he is following her. She increased her pace and searching for some safe place. In process of hiding her she bumped in a bigger prob. Unfortunately she ran and hide towrds junkyard. She hides behind the wall and peeping secratly as he is coming or not. He is nowhere.She sighed but not for so long. As soon she turn,found 4 ruffins staring her lustfuly. She scared but now showed and trying to ran from another side. But 2 of them ran faster then her and covers her. All 4 covered her from all sides. She warned them but they laugh,mocking at her anger,coiz they knew she cant able to do anything. They stepping towrds her and she suddnly sprayed in all's eyes got a chance to escape from there. She is running madly and they following her. With heavy luggage her spped is getting slow . She is running but looking behind in btwn to know about their position. Suddnly she bumped against a hard chest. Her heart thumping in a furios way. She thinks it must of one of them. Her breath getting harder and she looked upwrds with a scary eyes. He was not of of them.. He was the one who travled with her in a train. Ruffins still following her. They stopped seeing her with a guy. 'isko chhod or chup chap nikal ja wrna muft me mara jayega',one of them threat him. He put her behind him. 'itne ghatia dailogues bolte ho bilkul sadakchhap'ad btw na jau to?',he argued. One of them attacked on him with a large knief in his hand. He clenched his wrist and puched hard on his nose made him bleed. Then he hit his abdomen and threw him away . Seeing this all 3 attacks on him unitely but he was all prepared. He pushed away her first.then kicked their mouths. All fell down. He quickly start beating them, soon they give up and ran from there. She was panting heavily. He washed away the mud from his face pasted due to this encounter. Then he went to her and offred water to stable her uneven breathing. She sip slowly2 and looked him with guiltful eyes as she considered him a bad man. 'i m sorry mujhe laga..',before she completes he intrupts. 'ki main tumhe force krunga hai na?(she glance in his eyes regreatfully)miss..agar mujhe yei krna hota to subah tk ka intezar nai krta.u proved ki tum me dimag ki sakht kami hai',he taunts her. 'dekho..?',she doesnt like his taunting talk. 'dekho nai suno. Abi chup chap btao kaha jana hai main drop kr deta hu',he offers. 'mujhe tumhari help ki koi zarurat nai hai',she agred on him coz he teased her. 'ha wo to dikh hi raha hai.abi chalo chup se',he clenched her wrist and dragged her with him.'by the way naam kya hai tumhara?ab to bta skti ho',he asked while sitting in a hired car. 'Madhu.'she told in her tender voice. 'nice name or bhag kyu rai ho?',he asked again. She hesitated first but then tells him.'ma ki 1 frnd hai jo london me settled hai. london shift hone se pehle unhone apne iklote bete Rishabh k liye mere hath mang lia tha. Ma or papa ne b ha kar di thi. Ab 20 saal baad wo log india aa rae hai shadi k liye par main use shadi nai krna chahti.',she revealed the reason of her escaping to him. 'kyu kisi or ko chahti ho?',he asked in a vexed voice. 'nai wo baat nahi hai',she cleared. 'to firr?',he que. 'ek to main padna chahti hu,dusra jise main janti tak nai uske sath puri zindagi beetane k liye kaise ha kar du?wo bilkul alag mahol me pala bada hai.tum to jante ho waha ka mahol kitna open hai',she told about her doubts. Continue in next
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PART - 3

MADHU have doubt about the person she is going to married. 'wo waha k rich businessmen me se ek hai,uska high profile society me uthna baithna hoga main waha adjust nai kar paungi.or baad me hum ek dusre se irritate ho kya fysda? Waise b mujhe nahi lagta ki main uski soch ko match uo kar paungi.', she added.

'tumne kaise soch liya ki wo aisa hi hoga? Tum mili ho usse?(she nodded no)to firr bina mile hi andaza laga liya? Madhu kisi b insaan ko bina mile uske bare me pehle se hi rai bana lena achhi baat nahi hai. Meri mano to to usse ek bar mil loor firr b na pasand aaye to apne parents ko ape dil ki baat samjho.i m sure wo log samjh jayenge.baki aage tumhari marzi',he trying to convience her and she also getting effected by his words. Soon they reached to the destinantion and he stopped the car. She left out with her luggage.

'meri baat pe dhyan zarur dena.bye',he left her in confusion. She wants to thank him but he vanished hurridly. Madhu thinking about her decision.

After 3 days.
All are very happy today coz Padmini's old frind Radha is coming with her son to see Madhu. Her father Shamsher Mallik is hell busy in arranging all the things. He ordered his servants and scolding the conti. Whole mansion is decorated beautifuly in their welcom. Her elder sister Trishna is busy in helping Madhu,to get ready for the ocassion. Madhu is very restless. Her mind is banging with many thoughts. Radha is arrived with her son Rishabh in their luxury car. Shamsher himself came forward to welcom both. Rishabh looking so handsom in his choclate brown blazer with black denims. He bend and touched his feets. He blessed him and get them inside. Padmini ordered both to get hurry up. All 4 sitting in a hall while talking casualy. His eyes searching for Madhu. After few mins Trishna came with Madhu. Madhu is wearing a pink coloured suit and looks very elegant in that. She came and met Radha first. She hugged and blessed her. Then she saw Rishabh and her mouth wide open. Seeing her gestures he chuckled and say hello to him. He was the same person to whom she met in a train. She trembled dont know what going next. Rishabh demand to talk with her in alone and all allwed them.They went far away from others.

'tum?tum RK ho?i mean to tumne us din kyu nai bataya or tum train me kya kar rae the?'she asked in 1 go.

'chilax Madhu.tumne us din pucha hi kaha?or waise b mujhe b tabi pata chala jab tumne apna naam btaya.or raha swal train ka to i love travelling in a train. Aise hi nikla tha ghumne socha tumse milne se pehle thoda India travell ho jaye mujhe kya pata tha ki tm mil jaogo.',he cleared her doubts.

'to ab kya socha hai tumne?',she afrid of his reaction.

'wo to tume btana hai?waise 1 bat bta du London me pale bade hone se mujhme aib honge tumhari ye soch galat hai. Meri ma ne meri parvarish waha b aisi hi ki hai jaisi wo yaha karti.',he said strongly.

Madhu felt pity on her thought. Both talks more and Trishna came to tease both. All 3 talking alot and then its decision time. All wants to know her decision. Madhu lokking all side and said yes shyly. But RK raise his demand.

'rukiye pehle mera decision b sunn leejiye'ye shadi abi nai hogi.(all stunned hearing his decision and Radha trying to intuprt but he cuts her)pls ma pehle meri baat khtam hone deejiye.maine shadi se mana nai kiya hai sirf ye kaha hai ki abi nai hogi coz Madhu abi padna chahti hai or main chahta hu wo apni wish puri kare.uske baad mujhe shadi se koi inkar nai hai.',he told his decision and all overwhlemed with that. Madhu gazed him lovingly nd said silent thanx 2 him. He winked to her nd she smiles wide. She know he is true life partner for her. She never thought that she found guidning light of her life in that Dark Night... All are happy..

The end.

EPILOGUE:
after 3 years both get married with all rituals and rk took Madhu to london. They reached to their honeymoon first. In these 3 months both coming closer slowly 2. Rk gave her full time so that she can trust on him fully.they started with their some cozy momnts. He helpd her in kitchen as they al alone and other works. While this they grab some priv.momnts also. He kissed her passionatly on her whole and she too responded in a way he desired. The day they consummate was very painful for her but he made it pleasurable with his immence love and care. Very soon both start craving for each other. Madhu also joined him in office so they spend more time together. Their love blossom with evry passing day in a beautiful manner. After 6months she concieved nd their small world filled with happiness. RK take very good care of her all need like she is some kind of a queen. On the expected date a small life arrived in deir lived.a cute baby boy. RK kissed both Madhu nd his baby. Madhu recipocrate his kiss. Both loved their baby who complete their love...

Officialy ends...

I hope guys you liked it and i do justice with it.Finger crossed. Pls tell me in ur views... 😊
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely OS .write more on rishbala
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update 👏
loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS ...Write more on RISHBALA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow,nicev story, simple bt awesome.

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