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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: ..Enigma..
Awsme...bt i ws cnfusd yaar...

for realz hun? It was a love making scene. There is nothing to focus on but the aesthetic. I am not about to describe the kamasutra😆

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: vmpy
a v nice and decently descripted update.loved it.thanx for pm.

thank you. I am happy you liked it & glad it flowed

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: simikr
Sexy and eloquent. Gave me the shivers!! Awesome!!! 👍🏼

I am glad you feel that way. Nervous energy is settling reading the wonderful comments😊

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Saumya

@Saumya19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: iiDona

ok let me put it like this then ( though I have not read a lot of romance) I went ahead and read it again so that I dont appear partial to you...

it did not come within miles of profanity...I have read a few very beautifully written scenarios where the act was wonderfully described but very rarely do people touch the emotional outpouring that surrounds it...you were able to put it in beautiful words...so continue writing 👏

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings
ok let me put it like this then ( though I have not read a lot of romance) I went ahead and read it again so that I dont appear partial to you...
it did not come within miles of profanity...I have read a few very beautifully written scenarios where the act was wonderfully described but very rarely do people touch the emotional outpouring that surrounds it...you were able to put it in beautiful words...so continue writing 👏

If I am lucid & in a bookstore, I will not bother with the romance genre. But, I have read scenes here and there. Thank you for the kind words, you made my otherwise terrible day better :)

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

terrible day here too...excessively bad weather...I hate winters...

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings
terrible day here too...excessively bad weather...I hate winters...

you are not alone in your dislike. have you considered writing a short story or an OS? I would love to read some more works from you. 😊

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

I am writing a small story on just fictional characrters...will send you the link once I am done... I write more of poetry thatn stories...am currently working on a translation of a hindi poem... If you want to read can send you a PM