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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Just the right amount of passion and emotions.Nicely written

phew. thank you

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: deepak148
nyc update and it is not vulgar. open d surprise pls

will do soon.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Desire6
Hey dat was a gud mixture of romance passion feel 4each other... It wasnt vulgar it was perfect wit every words... Waitn 4next update nd bday suspense

I am glad. The birthday suspense will be revealed more.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: amieo1
VERY NICE 😊

thank you

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Aphrodyte
vry well written jasleen...👍🏼

thanks

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
HEY! Its great! Its not vulgar at all, yet it tells us exactly how she felt. Its really good! 👏 YOU DID IT! YAY! 👏

I am glad you liked it Soujanya😊

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings
it was very beautifully written ...very different...very emotional and extremely artistic...👏 ...
I am relieved.
were you doubtfull that it would come accross as vulgar??
Yes, that is a primary reason I stayed away from the topic for so long because I felt I was not the person to pen down such a scene without sounding profane/ toeing the line.