FF: Breakthrough -PART 21 - NEW THREAD PG 141 - Page 65

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Posted: 12 years ago
Really very nice update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrittB



It's a lot more work than I thought. I wish I had just taken time out from studying and replied with each chapter.
Aw ahah I love you too.


Ahaha.. Now that u've learnt u shud do ur work on time.. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sry fr the late repky, i was busyyy
just read the last two updates
N my god !!!!! This was amazing. Just tooo gud. N rk couldn't help speaking out his heart. Beautifully written pritt
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Asum update.. .
Finally he spoke...
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Posted: 12 years ago
now she will surely find a way to know the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwsum updt..pritt continue it soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago


Yes, this is only a preview. I'm actually sick, have had a high fever twice today. I haven't written up the next part completely yet, but I feel bad making you all wait, so here's a preview to the next chapter.


Chapter Fifteen - PREVIEW

"RK?"

She took my name for the first time in a while.

I didn't turn to face her. I didn't know how to face her. So I stood with my back towards her as I heard her footsteps come closer. She placed her hand on my shoulder gently, but I refused to face her. That was until she came to stand in front of me and look up into my eyes. I stared down at her for a second but then looked away. How would I get myself out of this one? How would I lie to her when I had clearly called her Midhi?

"You left your watch on the bedside table…"

I looked back at her, shocked. Was she not going to question what I had said? Had she even heard what had slipped out of my mouth? I looked down at the watch in her hands and slowly took it from her. Then without another word, she turned and began walking towards the studio. I watched her until her steps came to a stop, I turned my back towards her again as I sensed her turning to face me. After a moment, I turned around to see if she was still there, but she wasn't. It bothered me, not knowing if she knew the truth or not. It made sense for her to know, but then why had she not said anything then?

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey take care of ur health, wednt mind waiting
n great preview :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice preview pritt...😊
and dear u take care of ur health...ur health is imp for us...for update we cn wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm preview... aftr this cant wait... but take care of urself also...

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