~The insatiable destinies~(Chapter-2 updated)pg-6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

Thank you for the sweet words and its my pleasure.😆

will surely update soon, but before that a mind-boggling spoiler for u!

i.e. there will be no makhhi or alike insects in my story🤣
(well i never considered anyone as anything like that in real life too but now, gratified to do so and extended my limits just because of Dipali and Mukund/Makhhi)🤣

sorry, for the stupid humour, actually i am in a crazy mood today!😆


Hahaha no makhi it seems 🤣 NO no that wasnt stupid humour it was funny actually ! 😛😆😆 No sorry and all hun !😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: smdosi

Ahaan...thats interestin...please PM.me weneva u updt...wud luv to read further...

thanx dear, Ahaan...i love that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: -sweetgal19-


Hahaha no makhi it seems 🤣 NO no that wasnt stupid humour it was funny actually ! 😛😆😆 No sorry and all hun !😆


Then thanx hun!😆
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
NICE START
RK IS SO ARROGANT
PM WHEN YOU UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: punam2712

NICE START

RK IS SO ARROGANT
PM WHEN YOU UPDATE

THANX dear,
well he's just like that, can't help it and don't want to😆
will surely pm u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
CHAPTER-2


Sanjeevani, please don't cry dear, ghungroo hi toote hai...Thank God you haven't hurt yourself!

-said a beautiful Lady in a aqua blue salwar suit with silver borders which was having sheer sleeves till elbow and the suit consisted of a baby pink dupatta wrapped around her arms and waist.Perfect Indian beauty, and off course with the brains as she said...rotey raho, main jaa rahi hoon kisike favourite chocolate muffins khane...

The li'l girl quickly wiped off the tears and with a sparkle in her eyes...said...chocolate muffins?!

The lady brought a trey full of muffins and along with Sanjeevani all the girls almost hovered over the trey and all the muffins were taken before she could blink once...

everyone enjoyed the muffins with full delight, and after they finished, the lady told its time to go girls, its getting late, everyone followed her to the Orphanage which was just beside the farmhouse.She was waving goodbye to all and just as she took a step forward to leave she felt a tuck on her dupatta, she turned and saw Sanjeevani and bent down, do you need something sweetie?

She just gave a kiss on her cheek and smiled, the lady smiled on her innocence and finally waved tata and left...

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In the mean time, RK reached the mansion, he entered the lobby and called out for the servants...
Munna...Patil..

Where the hell are all?

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hello...the lady picked up her cell which started ringing after she left the children,

the caller said Madhu, there is a big problem, please come as soon as you can...

Madhu said- why are you so tensed Trishna? what happened?

She didn't replied, it seemed that it might be really major anything going on, so Madhu, without any second thoughts just hung up the phone and rushed to the exit...

Auto...auto...she held her hand high and waved...but no use...

there were only 2-3 autos in that isolated road which unfortunately went away...

the road fully became deserted...Madhu had no idea ...what to do?

so she just kept on walking...maybe she thought ...that wasting time shouting there will be regretful later...

but literally she was not walking, she was running with a tensed and frowning face, which was despite looking cute...

suddenly she heard something from inside the huge palisade wall...

she didn't bothered and was about to continue her pace and just then she saw some men in black looking like guards was throwing an old man forcefully and insultingly out of the house...

she was just on the other side, a little backward on the road and watching all these...

they threw the man like a feeble nobody and went away...the old man's head was bleeding badly...

Madhu couldn't stand seeing all these and went to the man, she saw he was in a very critical condition so she, after a thought, clinched on helping the man first...

thankfully a taxi from nowhere came forward which awaited and the driver helped her to carry the man to the car and went off...

she was already tensed for her family but leaving behind a poor old man like that will eat her from inside later, it was like both the choices for her was remorsefully worst...

She took him inside the hospital and was moving along with the stretcher pulled off by the compounders and suddenly the man tried to say something to her...

he gave a leaflet to her...beti ag..ar hosake...toh yeh lifa..fa mere patni tak pahuncha dena...

she stood outside the OT stunned as the man went inside...

she had no time to stand in trance...so she hurriedly filled out the formalities and went off...

the same taxi left her to her home and she saw her Mom and Didu arguing with someone, someone with chubby cheeks and small height...
her mother said Bittuji, hum aise ghar khali kaise karsakte hai? aur hum aapse keh rahe rahe hai na ki paise hum kuch hi dino mein bhar denge...


Bittuji said...the contract clearly states that you'll have to leave the house immediately if...

Yeh kya ho raha hai Maa?- said Madhu

Dekh na Madhu yeh keh rahe hai ki hume ghar abhi khali karna parega...before she could continue Madhu went inside her room and brought some money and gave it to Bittuji...

Bittuji yeh aadhe paise hai and i promise ki kal shaam tak main pure paise chuka doongi...

par aisa nahi hosakta, contract mein aisa nahi hai aur chief...

Bittuji please aap hume ek din ki mahaulat dijiye, hum yeh paise chuka denge...

Bittuji nodded hesitatingly and said thik hai Miss Madhubala Shamsher Malik, hum kal sham ko wapas aayenge agar kal hume paise nahi mile toh majbooran hume...

Bittuji aisi naubat aigihi nahi, i promise...

and Bittuji left away by just agreeing in gesture...

Madhu yeh paise tu kahan se laayi? aur kal sham ? kal sham tak tu kaise matlab?...

Maa yeh paise maine bahut din pahele ekatthe karna shuru kia tha, yeh sochke agar kisi halat mein kaam aagyea...aur haan Maa aur Didu aap log kal sham ki chinta mat karo...

Maa and Didu were just on the edge to embrace when Didu saw blood stains on Madhu's dupatta...

Madhu yeh...

Madhu saw the way she was looking and said oh...asal mein aaj...

she told the whole incident to her family ...

Tears formed in her mother's eyes and she kissed her forehead feeling proud of her daughter...

Madhu broke this rona dhona situation saying...Maa aasuen toh pet nahi bharne vaale...
the two patted playfully Madhu and went to prepare for the dinner...

Madhu stood there smiling, but internally she was frustrated, confused, worried about the old man and her situation...

she had been hiding her emotions

which she has been good at since her childhood...

she sighed deeply and said kal ki subha zaroor khushi ki kiran laygi...hoping for the best!

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Edited by 1Sumana1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
amazing update!! wondering who the man was and what's in the envelope he gave to Madhu...!!

please update soon...!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: dilnasheen

amazing update!! wondering who the man was and what's in the envelope he gave to Madhu...!!


please update soon...!!!😊

thnk u so much dear🤗
you'll get to know soon abt that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Who was the old man and what was in the envelope

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