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Adeeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

for chapter 9~

wow!! loved the update especially the proposal. i didn't expected it at all.

loved the way how he proposed.

last para, u wrote so well, yes the blissful event was just for a while and again reality hit them.

preparing him for the chemo.really a tough job.

liked the comparison with a soldier's condition.

the title is suggesting a lot of things "the future i want ?" especially the question mark which is suggesting the uncertainty of there relation and future.

really nice update.

u said u witnessed chemo story, i really want to know about it if u r comfortable in sharing.

why u consider this story a taboo? there is nothing which can make it a taboo.

did u said so because it is suggesting a girl who love a dying man?

i really want to know.

Edited by adeeba21 - 12 years ago

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Adeeba

@..Adeeba..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

liked the song u choose, i never heard it before.

really suggesting whole world is a circus. i just remembered an old movie.

loved the line-

We'd have a show
Like performers living life on the go

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Aphrodyte

@Aphrodyte

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: iiDona

Shit! Are you kidding? Absolutely not. I am an excellent listener. I never zone out. Go ahead, I shall bring the couch. I love hearing stories (& compliments😆)
In the spirit of pouring out feelings, I should stop using slang so much. A person from another planet said I was bashing since my comment was a double negative *rolls eyes* No, you do not have to respond to my much adieu about nothing.😛

But go on & talk it out anything.
Merci

gret ready to bring couch sumtime soon..coz m not going to spare u now...and i dont mind slangs being a punjabi m quite used to it...lol

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AroraN

@AroraN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Life's an hourglass and time is running out for all of us. Breath the moments you spend with the people in your life. You never know when they will be taken away from you. 👏 👏 Completely agree

Waiting for next update.. 😊

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Adeeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

chapter 10~

the title saying all the things "the day i regret" .

the first few lines, really nice!! how madhu wanted all these things to stop, but yes she is helpless and how Rishab gripped her hand, just assuring that she will never leave him.

why everyone is unhappy with the nurse, she just said 80 not 80%, it was the same dose.

they misunderstood her.

i think it is because of the nervousness of Rishab, well it is really obvious as it was his first chemo.

yes her tone was ruthless, but she is a nurse, not a relative of the patient who will spoke in soothing words, its her job, she deals with a lot of same kind of patients daily, she can't show sympathy to anyone, believe me, my one acquaintance is a nurse i knew it.

have read about the chemo therapy and the drugs but not about the after effects much more.

i didn't knew that morphine-such a strong analgesic is suggested.

u described Rishab condition too well at the end.

madhu realizing the truth, don't know what to say now.

thanx 4 writing about the therapy in sufficient detail.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Bookmarked. This is recommended by one of my friends and after reading the intro I am glad she did. Will update comment in a week since I would be out of town :)

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

why everyone is unhappy with the nurse, she just said 80 not 80%, it was the same dose.

they misunderstood her.

i think it is because of the nervousness of Rishab, well it is really obvious as it was his first chemo.

This issue calls for immediate attention so, I shall address it first.

The nurse was WRONG: in my mind, in Rishbala's mind & certainly in a hospital administrator's mind. Because the nurse's job is not limited to injecting the instructed dosage but also making sure the patient knows what is going into his body. She has no legal right to a) give him the dose without him understanding what he his getting; rushing/pressuring him

b) refusing service. she asks them to either do it her way or come back when the regular nurse is here.

c) storming out leaving the patient in a vulnerable state. What if Rishabh became violent? What if he hurt himself or Madhu? When in the ward, the nurse is responsible for her patients. It is her job to ensure the patient is psychologically prepared for the procedure.

I have seen this happen & trust me, it is NOT fun. Not for the patient, not for the family, not for the nurse.

Even if the dose was correct and it was a miscommunication, leaving the patient to fend for himself is where she went wrong. I have class. Will be back in 50mins :)

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: vmpy
sorry i didnt get da last line its a ct,mri and therapies hitted body so nt much intelligent.hahahaha

what line are you referring to vmpy? Please quote or specify😊

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: adeeba21
for chapter 8~

u know jasleen i once thought that RK is acting just to get his father's kidney, and he also gave the same reason but now i think i was wrong, i misunderstood him. now i am sure that he is just merely acting because he is himself not sure about his life, so he just want to save her from getting more pain of losing another beloved of her life.

i won't say he is wrong, he is right in his place, here he is uncertain about his life so how can he allow her to come too close to him, may be he doesn't know how madly she is in love with him so he was just thinking that it may be just an infatuation and madhu will forget him in some time and will move in her life.

yes these things are hurting madhu but RK also.

RK is doing this because her father wanted this na, or he lied,if her father said so, he was not wrong any father would not want to let his daughter love a man who can die in some months.

this is so confusing, i can't say who is right among them.

so we just can't favor anyone.

nice update jasleeen, will not say an emotional one because the whole FF is.

don't u think we are seeing games of Destiny, two persons love each other but still can't be together.wow!!! u gave Pritt's VM, i like her VMs a lot. love this song.

I agree with all of it. Nothing to add. Thank you for your kind words.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: adeeba21
liked the song u choose, i never heard it before. really suggesting whole world is a circus. i just remembered an old movie. loved the line-

We'd have a show
Like performers living life on the go

Let me guess... Mera naam joker😆

Thank you. I love Indie songs

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