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Tia

@tes_v1

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

I like the way you let the emotions flow. This one was heavy and the feelings that flowed from Madhu to the letter were touching and real. You can only imagine what a person who's lost a dear one goes through, and if after that they have no one at all, the pain is numbing... Well expressed!

PS: You have not specified if she meant RK or her father and so I'll assume neither. 😉

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: tes_v1
I like the way you let the emotions flow. This one was heavy and the feelings that flowed from Madhu to the letter were touching and real. You can only imagine what a person who's lost a dear one goes through, and if after that they have no one at all, the pain is numbing... Well expressed!

PS: You have not specified if she meant RK or her father and so I'll assume neither. 😉

If you scroll down to right after the update, there is a lot of explanation for why I did what I did. As for why I did not reveal the secret, the story will be spoiled if I do. I think that winky face shows you understand. Keep guessing until I choose to spill the beans.😆

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: iiDona

I doubt there is any time difference. I follow eastern time. I checked & google says you do as well. 😆 I might be coming to the US for a camping trip this week. IDK
I am staying near the Grand Canyon for a night; might even head out to Vegas later. Should be super fun😃 I love spring break

Oh the update was very emotional and just very very sad. I felt so bad. I am really nervous to find out how you will tie the loose ends. haha we do follow the same time? Man and here I was thinking I have a great excuse! 😆 but I still hope you kicked some butt, which you said you did. And whoa thats awesome! Iv'e never been to Grand Canyon but I hear its beautiful. Vegas, never been there either, but hey everybody loves vegas, be careful, do not turn out like the hangover! 😆 My spring break is far away three weeks I believe 🤢 I did not want to come back to college when I went home. blah. 😕

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Oh the update was very emotional and just very very sad. I felt so bad. I am really nervous to find out how you will tie the loose ends. haha we do follow the same time? Man and here I was thinking I have a great excuse! 😆 but I still hope you kicked some butt, which you said you did. And whoa thats awesome! Iv'e never been to Grand Canyon but I hear its beautiful. Vegas, never been there either, but hey everybody loves vegas, be careful, do not turn out like the hangover! 😆 My spring break is far away three weeks I believe 🤢 I did not want to come back to college when I went home. blah. 😕

No Vegas for me *sigh* Apparently if I am not of age, I could get into all sorts of trouble🤢 Seriously? Anyway, Grand Canyon & Montreal hopefully. I am afraid of scorpions. My neighbor got bit a long time ago. The update yes, you got that right.

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shravanikrishna

@vaani21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Beautiful! Dona👏

I luved it, especially the line"Your favourite girl in the whole world minus a piece that u took away.👏

"I will always love u."😭👏

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: iiDona

No Vegas for me *sigh* Apparently if I am not of age, I could get into all sorts of trouble🤢 Seriously? Anyway, Grand Canyon & Montreal hopefully. I am afraid of scorpions. My neighbor got bit a long time ago. The update yes, you got that right.

Hey my friend Steven went there when he was like 16 and 17, he said he had a great time, you might be able to as well. check it out, see if you can find stuff like watching shows, shopping etc. I like animals from distance, like far far away. 😆