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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu is so in love with RK
the date was perfect
I still wish you to have some mercy on these two lovers😭
you are going to be inactive..nooo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ForeverForU

Madhu is so in love with RK
the date was perfect
I still wish you to have some mercy on these two lovers😭
you are going to be inactive..nooo

you know she loves you if she will color her hair blue because you casually said so😆
Perfection, that is it.
Mercy, I wish life were a bed of roses. Take out cancer from the story, it sounds like every other story. The element is essential to the narrative. I am thinking of alternative ending if that makes you feel any better.
Inactive for two weeks, they will fly by, I am sure.
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Posted: 12 years ago
a conflict with the inner feelings is easily reflecting in madhu's thought.
she is falling for RK but still don't understand why. her each thought was echoing about it as when RK asked her to be his girlfriend and when they kissed, a fight between mind and heart was there.
surely understand her situation.

ya write true, its not a disease that kill a person but more the words of concern shown by others as it always remind them about his declining body.

the last line "life is uncertain. If you look for the end, you will surely succeed in finding one. But, if you take your time in the middle, you will have more fun" is totally an inspirational one, really liked it.

nice update, will wait until u come back.

i don't know why i don't want this FF to be a fast one, just want story to succeed slowly.
i hope u don't mind
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

Thank you.
Unfortunately, life has taught me many things in an untimely manner.
Oncology is something I am passionate about, among other things. I see myself contributing to cancer research. Whether it will be a hospital or a laboratory, I cannot say.
Passionate about oncology???? Not a very easy choice interms that results are far spaced and successes few...It is depressing...but who knows who may become the shining star...lots of luck to you in your persuit...I soo hope some day this disease would not be as deadly...
RK would come to the same conclusion. You see, cancer always wins. You may think you have a fighting chance but, it comes back a week, a month, a decade later and it takes you down.
very well said 99.9 percent true...very painful but true
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Posted: 12 years ago
now about the FF...I am speechless on so many accounts
in no specific order ...lol
first:- beautiful really really beautiful choice of words
second:- emotions flowing like a river
third:- the concept though not new but one would have never thought about it in RK and madhu's scenario...
fourth:-Very realistic yet unheard of emotional conflict that madhu shows
last but not the least...the scene setup I mean the crystal museum, switzerland, Euthanasia (another intense subject ) hair coloring and what not...
Might i ask what do you do( No offence intended just wanted to peep into the not so personal part of your life because you are an intriguing woman)
👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
mytinypaintings I have read both of your comments will respond as soon as I get off work😊
Thank you for your patience.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

now about the FF...I am speechless on so many accounts

in no specific order ...lol
first:- beautiful really really beautiful choice of words
second:- emotions flowing like a river
third:- the concept though not new but one would have never thought about it in RK and madhu's scenario...
fourth:-Very realistic yet unheard of emotional conflict that madhu shows
last but not the least...the scene setup I mean the crystal museum, switzerland, Euthanasia (another intense subject ) hair coloring and what not...
Might i ask what do you do( No offence intended just wanted to peep into the not so personal part of your life because you are an intriguing woman)
👏

Intriguing woman, am I? Thank you.
I am flattered.
I shall answer your question over breakfast.

I am a university student who believes that her program is the hardest one to enroll in and survive. I am sure my bias is blatantly visible to people around but, I choose to believe my partial lies. My life is fairly quite and settled during the eight months that I am in school. Therefore, I dream through my story, imagining far away places that I wish to visit one day; similar to image therapy. Come summer time, I go MIA, letting loose all the wishes that were put on a backburner for academics.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

Oncology is something I am passionate about, among other things. I see myself contributing to cancer research. Whether it will be a hospital or a laboratory, I cannot say.

Passionate about oncology???? Not a very easy choice interms that results are far spaced and successes few...It is depressing...but who knows who may become the shining star...lots of luck to you in your persuit...I soo hope some day this disease would not be as deadly...
RK would come to the same conclusion. You see, cancer always wins. You may think you have a fighting chance but, it comes back a week, a month, a decade later and it takes you down.
very well said 99.9 percent true...very painful but true😊

Oncology is a discipline for the strong minded and I am aware of my inhibitions. I know that I cannot turn a blind eye to an issue that impacts me on a personal level. I have to contribute, I have not chosen oncology to be the answer, only an answer. Thank you. I wish it were as easy as a magic pill that cures cancer. Unfortunately, cancer is a cohort of diseases each with debilitating impact on patient health and family dynamics. I hope to be a part of the healing process & contribute by any means I can.

p.s. Do not think of me as a tunnel visioned med ninja, I am far from it. I do not have the slightest idea of my future. I enjoy too many different things to encompass into one job description. This does not stop me from dreaming.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

now about the FF...I am speechless on so many accounts

in no specific order ...lol
first:- beautiful really really beautiful choice of words
I did not think for once. Thank you
second:- emotions flowing like a river
😳
third:- the concept though not new but one would have never thought about it in RK and madhu's scenario...
fourth:-Very realistic yet unheard of emotional conflict that madhu shows
hmm interesting thought. A girl in love?
last but not the least...the scene setup I mean the crystal museum, switzerland, Euthanasia (another intense subject ) hair coloring and what not...
my dream date minus the cancer part

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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE: My reasoning for a change of title

Hey,

I have thought long and hard about it but, there is no denying anymore. When I write this story, all I can think of is Augustus Waters (a character from the novel, the Fault in Our Stars). My writing is consumed by his thoughts, imagining him in place of Rishabh. My FF is not even half as good as the book but, I would be violating some sort of nerdfighter code if I took all the credit for myself. Once you have read TFIOS, there is no going back. I am influenced greatly by the characters (more so than the plot). My story is evidently different from that of the book. But, I have to, am morally obliged to recognize the author & hence, my story shall be named TFIOS hereafter. I am sorry if the frequent change of titles is annoying. I should have done this in the first place.


Sincerely,

Jasleen

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