Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey
I am usually apprehensive about reading this part of a fan fiction for the fear of out of control hormones and when I do read em for whatever reason, judgments come pouring down without a filter. There is S & M and some mix of pain with pleasure. Tears shed by the woman (like she cannot contain damn pleasure) and the man wipes them off (like he has been there, done that: this is how we roll)🤢 There goes all my hope.
I agree... The act is most often initiated by the male counterpart and he is mainly seen as the person guiding the actions... And woman are portrayed to be followers who have no knowledge of anything... Its like the males are opening the world of the woman to the joys of pleasure... 🤔
I wanted to show here that Rishab is a true man, a man who is secure enough in his skin that he can accept that a woman can initiate intimacy and direct the pace of that intimacy...
I also wanted to show here that Madhu, though she started out to be doubtful and insecure and confused, she has been growing out of those feelings. I wanted to show how much she trusts and feels for Rishab.. Yet she holds back a part of her, because at the end of the day she still wants her father to acknowledge their relationship and accept it.
But, this was miles apart. Sounded as though it was there for a reason and just for the heck of it. It was aesthetic and I am happy I read it.
Thankyou... everytime I get bold in my writing, I wonder if I am pushing it too far... Hence the warnings to those who might not want to venture in that domain...😉
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